AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 17

Thank you..I am glad you are enjoying AsYa..I treat it like such a responsibility to do justice to their story..is that weird 😆? Well, then again my obsession with AsYa and KaBhi is nothing but weird. Yes, a lot of his irritation stems from the fact that he just can't help be drawn to her and out of his own frustration he behaves like an idiot. Trust me Aahil will NOT be an Imran I assure you. He won't be able to help himself or stop himself from falling for Aisha but he will NOT be an asshole and hurt Anaya just trust me. She is only a couple of months older than Aahil and the same age as Arsalan. Asad and Azlan have a very tensed bromance and I am LOVING writing their dynamic. Let's not speak about Ayaan and Asad. That was fake one sided love. Ayaan too just like the rest of his family USED Asad. Asad bhaijaan this and Asad bhaijaan that. The one time Asad goes against him he acts like a cry baby, a BRAT and calls him sautela. Forget everything, his young brother and bhabi died SO TRAGICALLY leaving 2 little girl's behind and he never called them or came to take care of them. In my story they openly express their "hatred" and Azlan doesn't make big fake promises like Ayaan. (Sorry for the rant, I have unresolved DEEP issues with QH 😆)

The gift problem is there but it will be handled differently, hope you like the twist to that hurdle. Asad, Azlan and Pari are going to cause a LOT of drama 😆. It will be revealed in Part 12 who Pari belongs to. There is just one part of the wedding left and then it will be twist after twist and revelation after revelation.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

😃

Lol! I for one am not going to complain about you wanting more from updates. Your guyzes comments make me wanna rush to edit the next part immediately, they are so encouraging to Thank You! I am so happy you're loving Asad just as much! He is such a mystery I love writing about him and you have still to read SO much about his life and personality. I hope you guys love him even more once it all comes out. His tats, piercing and body give many sleepless nights don't they 😛..I will not say anything about Shawn, the chains and Zoya till I reveal it all once and for all 😆 I am happy you enjoyed the sangeet and songs. I had so much fun planning and writing that part. Asad fell in love with zoya at first sight and Zoya fell in love with Asad when she heard and saw him singing at the sangeet but both are unaware of the fact and will not be realizing for a WHILE.

Trust me Asad is only dreaming about ONE girl. Who hi karle to kaafi hai uske liye. About the girl he drew..more about that will come later on. They are just so childish what can you go. The harder they fall, the more they fight to overcompensate and bury those feelings. But their relationship dynamics will constantly be changing and evolving but the passion will remain. We will just have to wait and see about Zoya's past..won't we 😉.

Asad, Pari, Azlan dynamic will be revealed in Part 12. Ya'll might be left shocked or eased. No promises. But all I can say is that Asad HAS been in her life longer than Azlan but not for the reasons you stated. Keep on guessing though. They will be healing each other don't worry, making each other forget their unfortunate pasts. And yes the nasty step father is arriving in Part 1..

Hope you enjoy the coming Parts and once again, THANK YOU for your time and effort to write a big comment!

Originally posted by: addicted_93

"Over to you SHAWN"
I knew Asad was the brother who protected Zoya!!
Obviously, loved all the asya parts. In fact, they were all so good that I can't pick my favourite! I fell in love with Asad just about the same time as Zoya did. I really hope the Asad in your story doesn't treat Zoya as badly as the one in the serial did. I think I would lose respect for Zoya if she forgives Asad without any kind of real retaliation. I honestly want her to put him in his place and for him to really realise how wrong he is. Of course, your Zoya is more of a fireball than the "Suffer-in-Silence" Zoya that the serial one eventually became. I know this is premature cause the poor guy hasn't really done anything yet but still 😛

The Pari scenes were also super cute. I'm pretty sure that Azlan is only the father and not Asad. Can't wait to see more of the Khan brothers. I especially love their banter cause it seems bitter and cocky on the surface but there seem to be definite undercurrents of concern and love between the two.

I'm a little confused about Asad's stepfather though. Is it Azleem or Ajaz? 😕
Either way it's going to bring the ghosts of Asads pasts back to life. I can almost feel his pain through your writing. It breaks my heart to think of him confronting his demons but I do want to know how the story progresses 😛

As always, the length, attention to detail and especially how you're building up the story by connecting the past scenes to the present ones is commendable.
Can't wait to read the rest of it.

My lips are sealed about Shawn, Zoya and the Chains till I make that revelation. Happy you're enjoying AsYa! I am so happy to know you also fell in love with Asad right about then 😆! I LOVE that scene cuz I can imagine KaBhi acting it out and I'm just over here like 😳! Asad will not be the nicest to her let's just leave it at that. I hope you understand how tormented and haunted the poor guy is. He has a lot of insecurities and fears which make him irrational and paranoid so I hope you cut him some slack. He will NOT be a complete A-hole like Asad was at many points in QH. But he will repent for his actions. and Zoya will NOT become ZOYA OF QH. GUL 😡. Ekh woh reh gayee thee and Gul ruined her too.

I love Asad and Azlan's tensed bromance. Love writing it and I too love the same about them the banter and cockiness with an undercurrent of love. Asad, Azlan and Pari are about to get even more cuter. Their relationship will be revealed in Part 12.

Thank you for pointing out my error. It was originally Azleem but last minute I changed it to Azlan so it wasn't corrected in the precap. It is fixed now. Writing about Asad's past always breaks my heart too.

Thank you for all the kind words! I'm happy you're liking the flow, things will begin moving forward faster once they return to Kasauli at the end of the next part! Hope you continue enjoying!

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

Amazing update
loved it
loved asya nok jhok
finally asad made a move to make his relation healthy with zeenat
poor asad in trying to become a good devar has to bear zoya too
loved asad-zeenat conversation
zoya took advantages of being Anwer's eklouti saali
loved their market scene
also loved zoya's sweet convo with the little girl
zoya's feelings about not being to belong any home were written beauifully
first ayaan's dadi and now nazma is trying to set fire in relations
Dilshaad gave her proper answer for her accustions
did someone hear their convo regarding zoya's marriage ?
zoya's dance scene and asad watching her were written beautifully
zoya also heard asad's voice before
asad-pari-azlan scene was amazing
when are you goung to reveal their relation being father and chachoo
asad has a step father too
i think he is going to bring twist in story
loved zoya and her brothers scene
their dasi is really kabab mei haddi yaar
har jagha tapak parti hai
poor them cannot enhoy freely infront of her
asad's jealousy was worth to read
is he going to find or not that they are zoya's brothers?
Anwer is trully her jeeju who fulfil her every wish
loved sangeet function very much
zoya fallen in love with asad so soon
precap is also intersting
asad's step father is coming
who will be blamed for robbery zoya zeenat or someone else?
thanks for pm
update soon

Thank you so much! So happy everyone is enjoying AsYa scenes! Yes, in this story Asad is the bechara, being tortured at Zoya's hands 😆. I also loved their market scenes, imagine KaBhi 😳! Yaar, Gul gave us NOTHING 😕. Zoya's reality and truth is very heart-wrenching I too hate her daadi for all that she is doing to her. Don't worry the daadi is leaving next part and won't be back for long and when she does she WILL regret her actions. Asad will make sure of it. I also loved writing the dance scene where Asad was watching her. No no one will hear Najmas convo.

Asad, Azlan Pari's relationship will be revealed in Part 12. Hope you enjoy that. Yes, Asad has a step father and the moron is coming in Part 11. Let's just say Asad will not be finding out they are her brothers till things get REALLY interesting. Let him remain jealous for a while 😆! The sangeet function was my favourite too! Asad fell in love with Zoya at first sight and Zoya in that moment but both are too dense to realize it. They will remain oblivious for a WHILE. Part 11 is coming soon then you can see who will be blamed for the robbery..hope you won't throw eggs at me for it.

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

w such a long and beautiful update n Sorry for the late comment ...

update the next part soon ... i m nt a long comments type of person ( my laziness u know )..but i love ur all prts ... n the best about is the long update.

As long as you are enjoying I am happy! Thanks for the comment..Part 11 will be coming soonish!

Originally posted by: sally111

Eeepp😛😛 it was mindblowing update.. asya scenes are love😳 waiting for next update😉

Thank You! Happy you are loving AsYa, part 11 coming soon!

Originally posted by: anuv6

first. , ithni lenghty update ke liye luv u dear...
nd ithni awesome nd amazing... luv u more
each nd every parts... wow , no words to say
Esp ASYA parts...u just killed it.
they cant bear each other bt still they cant be without each other, that is our ASYA.
I LUVD the way u said their emotions, cute bickerings ,love nd their glances... so so much. feels like, wanna read more nd more.
ayan , anwar,dilshad,zee nd zoya; so funny nd cute...actually ur writing expresses zoya sooo cute soo soo cute..,
nd asad,... i luvd the way u wrote asad's feelings for zoya esp the singing part nd the part where he caught zoya's wrist without saying anything, the way u desc his longing fr her without him knwing anything nd many more dear, trust me...yaar u nailed it , killed it, damn perfect, awesomeness.
silence is a big emotion... it just says anythng. every meetng of ASYA esp their mesmerising glances of emotions with their silent pain nd love ...missng them much more nw.
LUV U fr the update dear... u r an awesome writer.
ithni lambi comment dhi hai...so update jaldi kardo .cant wait...update sooon dear.

Aww, Thank You! Your words are honestly so sweet and touching! They are soo encouraging! Yes, that is our AsYa!!! (GUL 😡) ! I try my best to do them justice because I find it to be a responsibility to execute the story as I imagine it so I try my best to portray the emotions as I see them. Those are some of my favourite scenes too, the wrist and the silence and the singing. 😳😳😳! I miss them too 😭! Thank you once again! Hope you enjoy the coming part. I hope you guy's enjoy it as much too!

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

when are you going to disclose about chain who put it on zoya's neck?
i guess it is asad only
bcs the letter on chain is s may be it is for son of kasuali
update soon

All in due time dear. Let me build the momentum. Abhi toh iss "S" ne sahee tarha entry nahin maari. Once they return to Kasauli he will be making many more entries and more about him will be revealed. In due time I will reveal who he is. I have dropped MANY hints as to who it CAN be. You may be on to something about the "S" but don't forget that so far people assume the son of Kasauli and S to be different people 😉.

Meanwhile, I will be revealed who Pari belongs to in Part 12. Hope you like that.

Part 11 coming soon!