Asya os: don't you dare to

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi, thank you all for liking my first os the colorful bedroom.
So i tought to write a second one
So because i love qubool hai 1, once again this os will be based on the episode of qubool hai whan rajveer track happened(rajveer that pervert who wanted to use zoya) so here we go i hope you will like it
P.s: please ignore my mistakes


Asya os: Don't you dare
Durant najran(najma and imran) engagement Rajveer was approching zoya in the room
Zoya was taking steps backward till she hit the wall
Zoya:wh..aaa..t are you doing rajveer
Rajveer:tsk tsk tsk the question that you have to ask is what will you do not what are you doing?!
Zoya:what do you mean(she said scared)
Rajveer:baby don't be so innocent what will do a guy with a hot beautiful girl alone ?
Zoya tried to reach a statue to hit him and save herself
Zoya: don't touch me if asad comes here he will break your bones i warn you!!
Rajveer:hahahahah you made me laugh baby who is this saad or asad o whatever who is it!! Wait a minute ahaan asad your prince that angry young man who was glaring at me whan i touched your hand . Oooh so sad that day i touched only your hand and he was glaring at me what about know will he be here to save you i don't think so ! Do you think he will accept you after what i will do to you haan???!(he laughed like evils)
Zoya was sso scared
Meanwhile asad was searching for zoya in every room
Back into the room
Rajveer pushed zoya on the bed and pinned her hand near her head and nuzzled her neck
Zoya:please leave me i beg you i will give you whatever you want but don't touch me you are spoiling your life you don't know with whom you are playing with asad's ahmed khan fiance wife to be
Rajveer: hahahah you will give whatever i want i din't want anything when you are in my arms i just want you
And he pulled her dupatta and tore her blouse from the front and pinned her hand really hard on the bed and tried to kiss her
Zoya cried loudly
Zoya:ASAAAD
Asad heard her screan and come running to zoya's room
The door was closed and pushed the door and entered and what he saw made him freeze
Zoya's saree was torn her hair was messed she was crying really hard while rajveer was trying to kiss her
Asad roared and grabbed rajveer fron behind while zoya finally saw him
Zoya:asaad she whispered in a low tone
Asad punched rajveer and beat him like a monster
Asad:HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HER ?HOW DARE YOU HE SHOUTED SHE IS MY FIANCE MY WIFE TO BE YOU bas***d
zoya was crying bitterly covering herself she was half naked with her blouse torn
ASAD: I WILL KILL YOU I WILL KILL YOU HOW DARE YOU TOUCH WHAT IS MINE SHE IS MINE SHE IS MIIINE (he shouted)
RAJVEER :WHAT A LOVE STORY if i was you living under the same roof with a hot women like her i would use her once twice and not marry her you fool but she is really hot he eyed zoya
Asad grabbed hin from his collar and pinned him on the wall
ASAD:DON'T LOOK AT HER YOU COWARD I WILL KILL YOU I WILL KILL YOU FOR TOUCHING HER the he beat him while rajveer lie unconscious while his nose and mouth were bleeding
Zoya: assad she cried
Asad run to her and hugged her
Asad: shhh baby shhh you are fine
Zoya: asad he he triiied tooo
Asad:shhh please zoya calm down
Zoya: asad if you didn't come her he would have raped me (she cried) asad he tore my clothes and touched me
Asad was crying and angry at the same time
Asad: i will kill him i will kill him and stood and come to rajveer and hit him once twice thrice
Asad:how dare you
Najma and dilshad came runnig and were shocked seeing the state of zoya her torn clothes a random guy lying with blood ,asad angry shouting beating like a monster
Najma covered her mouth and said: bhaaaii jaan oh my god and she runs to zoya
Najma:zoya what's this this is the guy who send to you those flowers that day what is he doing here
Zoya hugged her and said:najma he trieed to rape
Dilshad covered her mouth and hugged zoya
Zoya : beta calm down please calm down
Then dilshad come to asad and helped him to stand he was crying and faced the window
Dilshad:asad
Asad: ammi he touched her he touched zoya he touched my wife he touched her he touched what is mine
Dilshad:please calm down beta
Asad was not paying attention he was like a lion like a monster
Asad:HE TOUCHED HER HOW DARE HE (he shouted) the breaks all the things in the room
Meanwhile zoya was being consoled by najma and watching asad in that state the she said:asaaad then she fainted
Asad saw her and come runnig to her
Asad :wake up zoya please wake up he cried



So this is the first part the second will be posted soon inchaalah if you liked the story
Hope you like tell me what you think
and was the first part of my second os!!

Part 2 : scroll down
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Asyaforever1234 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
So how was the first part of my second os i hope you like it
P.S : sorry for my mistakes i was so tired and i was writing this os really fast so i didn't pay attention to the mistakes like "when not whan-now not know -running not runnig i was writing very fast so sorry for the mistakes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing part...
Waiting for second part...
Write more on asya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Amazing part...

Waiting for second part...
Write more on asya.


Thank you for the compliment yeah i love asya and i will post more asya stories inchaalah
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi kabhians or asya fans here is the second part of don't you dare to hope you like it!!
P.s: for me asad is always ksg and zoya is surbhi jyoti
All my stories are not real i don't own the characters
The characters own to 4 lions films show qubool hai
I write stories just for mine and others happiness and fun

Don't you dare : part 2

After that all the guests left without knowing what just happened upstairs (between they have not to know sorry let's continue )
While zoya was laying on her bed unconscious the doctor checked her and said
The doctor: Mr khan can i talk to you alone please
Asad: sure
The doc excused himself and left with asad while najma and dilshad sat next to zoya
On the other hand
The doctor: Mr khan your fiance is shocked and needs time to go back to herself so please
Don't give her stress she needs you support her she has experienced a bad experience
Asad: sure doctor thank you anything else should i bring her some medecines
The doc: no need just keep her happy she will be okay inchaalah
Asad: sure allah hafiz
Doc:allah hafiz and he left
Asad return to zoya's room while dilshad and najma help her to get up
Asad: zoya how are you feeling( he said in a concerned tone)
Zoya : fine
Asad: ammi najma please can i talk to her alone
Dilma: sure beta, najma challo!
Asad:are you angry on me
She still didn't respond,asad anger rose up
Asad: zoya answer me dammit i asked you a question i am hell concerned about you and you...
Before he complete zoya hugs him
Zoya: please don't leave me i really need you he he he will came
Asad:sshhh i will not allow him come near you i will not let him even stay alive
Zoya pulled back
Zoya: what are you saying ?!are you mad you want to became a criminal haan
Asad:zoya..
Zoya: shut up asad i swear if you will just say that once again don't even think that i will talk to you again all my life samjee aap?
Asad:jee (he said like a kid )
Zoya: theek hai , i will just take a nap don't leave me na! Stay here
Then she takes his hand and sleep
Asad watching her asleep said
Asad: i swear zoya i will not allow anybody even to look at you ,i will always be there for you and this is ASAD'S AHMED KHAN PROMISE

the end
So how was it hope you like it!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice os
Love asad the possessive lion
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Loved reading it to the core
Especially the possessive side of asad
Was seriously a treat to read it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: anopama

Very nice os

Love asad the possessive lion


I'm so happy that you liked it thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful OS
Loved reading it to the core
Especially the possessive side of asad
Was seriously a treat to read it😊


Thank you so much dear it makes me happyyy very very happy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Thank you guys for liking my two stories now if you want me to write more stories please suggest me soms others asya scenes

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