AsYa Drabble 'Teri Chah Mein'

AkaiBara thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Assalam o Alaikum Friends !!!

Hope you all doing best in your respective lives...

Well today I'm here with a story based on a song "Teri Chah Mein" (An OST of Pakistani drama serial), hope you will appreciate it like my all other stories...

I would love to dedicate this story to 3 persons...

3 loyal and regular readers, not only my readers, they are true AsYa's fan who love reading AsYa's stories by all the brilliant writer we have on the QH Forum...

Mayur... Asif... and last but not the least... Anopama...

You 3 are the best... wese toh sab readers hi achy hain, but I think me and other writers eagerly waits for your replies, the way you show your love through beautiful comments, hats off guys, keep showing lots of love towards our stories... our because, not only me, I guess all the writers would love to thank you like Aroo, Choco, Saima Api, Jas and mera khufiya writer Choto bhi 😆

Thank you sooo much for being with me, it really means a lot. Hope you like this little dedication from me😎

Lots of love...
Ashii...
Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

27

Views

4.2k

Users

19

Likes

142

Frequent Posters

AkaiBara thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2

Banner Credit: Immortal Love 🤗


Asad Ahmad Khan, the only child of Khans took over his family business and within a few months he made his family proud of him. As Asad achieved mark able success, his family started looking for a perfect girl for him but every time Asad refused the proposal as he always wanted a life partner just like his aunt, Zoya.

Hua kya mujhe
Yeh kya mujhe
Zoya was 16 years old when her grandmother got her married to a middle aged man Rehan, it was a typical arranged marriage where no one tried to seek permission from Zoya. Asad was almost 12 when Zoya came in their house as his Taya Abbu's wife. For the world, Asad and Zoya were nephew and aunt respectively but for them, they were best of friends who were there for each other through thick and thin. Zoya being the bubbly girl had never thought that her frankness with Asad can raise such feelings in him as she had always considered him as her friend.
Chahu tere jaisa
Tere jaisa ya tujhe
Asad too never knew he will fall for Zoya only, no doubt he liked her, in fact he loved the way she was, but when Rashid and Dilshad started talking about his marriage and he met with some of the girls selected by his mother, he realized how he searched Zoya in every other girl.
Hua kya mujhe
Yeh kya mujhe
Chahu tere jaisa
Tere jaisa ya tujhe
At first he felt like he was doing a sin but day by day his love for Zoya increased, he only wanted someone like Zoya and that was impossible so decided that he will not get married as his love, his Zoya was not in his destiny.
Ishq hai ya hai koi deewanapan ye mera (ye mera)
Zoya who was unaware of Asad's feelings, tried to convince him for marriage but Asad didn't listen to her. He wanted to yell at her or forcing him for marrying someone else when he was madly in love with her only.
Kya the hum kya ho gaye
Tu dekh le aa zara
Rehan was a heart patient, he wasn't allow to roam around the house as doctors had prescribed him complete bed rest. Rashid and Dilshad were at some relative's wedding, when Asad came back from office, his face broke in a beautiful smile as he found Zoya in kitchen preparing dinner and he felt like his lifelong dream came true, that evening Asad and Zoya spent a quality time together. Asad kept on listening whatever Zoya was saying, he was so engrossed in her captive eyes that he didn't realize what his confession can do, without caring about the world, religion and society he confessed saying I love you Zoya'
Teri chah mein...
Teri chah mein...
Teri chah mein...
Before Zoya could have reacted, Rehan who was coming downstairs heard Asad's love confession and felt a sharp pain in his chest and fell down the stairs. Asad and Zoya immediately took him to the nearest hospital but Rehan didn't survive and breathe his last. Asad was feeling guilty as he was the reason of his Taya Abbu's death and Zoya's loss, he wanted to apologize but Dilshad didn't let him meet Zoya as she was in 'Iddat' and he was 'Na Mehram' for her.
Ishq hai toh ishq mein
Ab kya kahe kya sune
Asad waited for the whole 4 months and 10 days to meet Zoya, he had craved for just one glimpse of her, his ears yearned for her voice, he was so excited to meet her but a meeting caught him up and he came around midnight. Asad didn't have the patience to wait for the next morning, he was dying to see her and without thinking about the world he entered in her room. Zoya was in deep slumber, without disturbing her sleep, Asad came near her bed and sat on the floor, he kept looking on her angelic face for hours and didn't blink his eyes as he was afraid what if it turned out one of his dreams.
Pyar hai toh pyar mein
Kyun dooriyan phir rahe
Zoya stirred in her sleep, she was literally shocked to find Asad in her room that too in late hours, she tried to free her hand which was in his hands but Asad didn't let go of her hand. Zoya stopped struggling as she saw something so strong in his eyes, she never knew his feelings were so pure for her. Asad and Zoya shared an eye lock, for Asad it was a way to convey his love, his emotions and his feelings, but for Zoya it was an ocean, she felt like drowning in the seas of his emotions and feelings. Over the next few days, Asad tried his best to make Zoya believe in his love, Zoya wasn't a carefree person like Asad, she was fully aware of the society and its cruel rules, whenever she tried to come up with differences between them like age, Asad used to leave her speechless with his determined love.
Chaahton ki umar hai
Na mazhab jaanejaan
Asad didn't give up, he knew that one day Zoya will accept his love and it looked like destiny was at his side and Zoya started melting with the heat of his love but the fear of society didn't let her word out her feelings and she remained mum. Dilshad being the mother understood what her son was going through, seeing his miserable condition she didn't take long in understanding what was going on between Asad and Zoya.
Khans were at some function when someone taunted on Zoya, Rashid and Dilshad had never forced Zoya on anything, they knew that Zoya was young and has all the rights to live her life the way she wanted, they didn't stop Zoya from wearing colorful dresses or doing such things which other widows do but the society didn't let Zoya live in peace and insulted her. Asad had enough, he lost his control when he saw tears in Zoya's eyes and without caring about the so called cruel society, he confessed his love in front of the whole world and announced his and Zoya's wedding.
Dhoondte sahil ko hai
Sehraon mein hum kahi
Zoya didn't know how to react, wedding with Asad, no way, she can't let Asad destroy his life by marrying her. She was a widow, his Taya's widow, how can he announce their wedding. Okay love, feelings and emotions, all was fine, but from where did the wedding came. Asad talked to his parents about their and luckily they agreed and felt blessed having Asad as their son, Zoya was literally shocked when Rashid and Dilshad agreed for the wedding.
Teri chah mein...
Teri chah mein...
Teri chah mein...
After a year, Asad's prayers got answered and finally Zoya accepted his love willingly. Asad and Zoya got married in a private ceremony and entered in the sacred bond of marriage. Asad being a gentleman gave as much time as Zoya needed, he never forced her in anything, he just wanted to be with her and that was it for him, she was his, only his. With each passing day, AsYa drew closer and it didn't take long when they started their life as husband and wife.

Sooo that's it... No proof read...
Hit like and leave your precious replies...
Ashii...

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago
MayurChan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
RES for Asif and Anopama...😊
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
MayurChan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Res for them too...😊

shardadevi, lipika1, asya865, honeylika, Rita14, preetiasya, anuv6, khushibano, captjs, Niki2794, nilorina, Mitamad, shinta.chinta, ruma_kolkata, kabhi_asya, wilddevil2010, 9849565007, Ajuzangel, jogicad, ASYAaishu, Ihopelove, Sneha8337, MOnkEy_rAngEr, Amina..., fatima30, Amin21, Monaleojan, ayat20, muskaan17rocks, suganti, SanKsgian, shweta_yadav, jayasree.rao, cutie15, --Arpita--, PriyaCherry, sasir, kritz4ever, ImmortalLove, nilusoni, Linsie, MysticRiver...
Continue to show your support to Ashii as always...😳
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
MayurChan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
RES for I.B.P too...😳
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
MayurChan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Esspecial Mention to Ashii's C.P and Bestu...😳
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
MayurChan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
A RES for them too...😃
And all the above Wonderful and Amazing Gif's were Taken or Borrowed from GOOGLE...so credit to their owners and a
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
MayurChan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
Binzzz thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
nice drabble...
completely different concept..
enjoyed reading...
determined Asad bought Zoya in his life. .great..
647704 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Different concept
But very well written👏

Enjoyed reading it

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".