AsYa Drabble 'Teri Chah Mein' - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: MayurChan

RES for I.B.P too...😳


Thankieee bhai for the res😛
N how r u bhai ? It's been so long

N shona lovely drabble...back ground story toh I knew now let's see show mai kia hota hai...yhan zoya k beti nahe the na...show mai maria k beti hai😆
I loved it...true love won⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
tere chah main
what a beautiful song and a wonderful drama
eagerly looking forward to this amazing serial.
Thanks for the pm dear
like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Thanks for Mention My Name,It means a lot to me.😊
It was So Different and Interesting Drabble on ASYA(KABHI).😊
The Song was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) feelings towards Zoya was so Beautifully explained.😊
The way Asad(KSG) makes Zoya to love him was so Nice.😊
The Whole Drabble was so Interestingly explained.😊
The Banner was so Nice,thanks to Immortal Love and to you also to choose this one.😊
Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
True love combats all barriers of the world
Issey kehtey hai sacha wala pyaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Really speechless wit this flawless work
Loved reading it to the core
The plot was fabulous and an unexpected journey through love
A very addictive piece of work and a perfect title and song for it
Just listened to it, and have just fallen in love with the song
It was seriously a treat to read it
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Salaam Ashii...
First of all Thank You 😳 ...for taking my name up their in the list...of dedications...i mean iss sab ke liye mein bahut chota hu... i am just a reader...so its no big deal for me...and yeh stories follow karna mujhe pasand hai...and at present ussey se zyada yahan jitne bhi dost banaye hai maine unke liye yeh stories follow karna aur bhi zyada pasand hai...so Thank You for that...😊
Coming to the update...

Well this is a bold topic...and kudos to you for writing this part...moduling it into ASYA way and doing justice to that twisted part and also relationship i guess...
Very Well Wriiten part...
Continue soonish with other stories...especially #TSB...

Take Care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Thank you Ashii
Love the dedication asya forever
Quiet a.different story but actually i love it
Mayur love the res my all time fav scene in qh
Asad was 4 yrs younger but his love and dedication was.pure
I thought his taya was dead before didnt know he die hearing his confession
Love it and love all my asya writers
As they say good things come to those who wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: MayurChan

RES for I.B.P too...😳




Thank you Mayur 🤗


An amazing concept Ashii but bahut chota tha, this should be taken up as a ss or ff, ittu sa padh ke maza nahi aaya, I want more 😃😉

Please agar ho sake to write more on this concept. Loved it though ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Awesome OS Dear👏😊

I did not liked Zoya's family n even Asad's family for letn a 16 year old girl marry a tharki buddha I mean like education jaaye bhaad me😡. Yes tharki buddha for marriage a girl of his daugher's age being d eldest in his family. Jawaani me koi nahi mili kya isko jo ek bacchi se shaadi kar liya? How can no one ask Zoya for her consent but just get her married to an oldie? How come Zoya be bubbly after dis stupid baap-beti marriage?😲

Asad fell in love wid his so-called aunt Zoya. I don't care abt d age difference. Its just 4 years wen in many stories Asad at least is 5 years older to Zoya or even more.

Rehan had a heart attack on hearing Asad's confession to Zoya. I wish he died due to sumthn else. Cuz of dis, Asad may always blame himself which I don't like.

Zoya too fell in love wid Asad but was scared of d society. She brought d excuse of age difference. Oh really Zoya darling? Is 4 years age difference more than 25-30 years age difference? But Asad was not affected be her excuse as he truly loved her😃.

I hate those society women for insulting Zoya being women themselves as if she killed dat tharki buddha herself?😡 Wats wrong wid wrong wid Zoya not living like a so-called widow life wen widowers r not told to do d same after losing their wives. Loved how Asad stood for Zoya n confessed his love for her in front of d whole society n his parents supported him.

I loved ur daring to write such a different story😊

Finally, Asad n Zoya married happily😃
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
First of all, Thanks for dedication Ashi. It's you guys(all writers) hard work which we read it & liked it. When we liked so it should be praised as well.

As for Drabble, it was different concept.
This type of things won't approved by society easily. I appreciated your efforts that you wrote it in this topic. The way you penned down Asad loved towards Zoya was wonderful. I have very less time nowadays to follow the drama but surely I will watch it whenever I get chance.
Thanks for pm & waiting for your other stories updates.

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