Asya ff: WHEN LOVE COMES WITH FEAR ch16=THREAD2

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Faria

@fariaflower

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Very nice! PM me please :)

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wonderful start...

Loved it...

Especially Khan mansion scenes...

Bond between asad-dillu-Ayaan ,najma-humi&humi-Zoya were amazing...

Loved Asad's character here...

Didn't liked Aisha...

How can she say bad things about Zoya...

Beautifully written dear👏

Edited by binuuu - 9 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Love the updates

Sorry I could help u in anyway as I am just a reader and don't know much

But one thing when sending pm u need to add the link for the story in the pm

Again well written update

One request from my part

At the beginning of the story u had included the the English transalation with the Hindi

But a few lines down u stopped

And I was stuck as I don't know Hindi so I was stranded😭

Loving this Asad in this story he is a fun loving carefree guy

I so laughed when his ammi tried to match him with the girl

And the answer he give her was hilarious

So humi and Najma are BFF

So their is the links to the 2 families

So razia is dead and seems Tht is haunting zoya

Aww love how she called humi gudiya

Looking forward for asya meeting

Wonder how it will be

Cont soon

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arakad

@arakad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome start...do pm me wen u update... :)

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Are u some old member wid new id qki ye tera pehla story lagta hi nahi hai?😆

For a change Asad is cheerful n Zoya is reserved type

Dilshad as usual always after Asad to marry as if he has no other work to do🥱

I did not liked Zoya's too much bossing of Humeira as if she is a baby same as I did not liked Asad bossing too much of Najma treating her like a baby

Loved d bond of both d brothers n also d sisters😃

Are Aisha n Nisha one n the same? Plz clarify.

U sud not have showed Akram in CS cuz it will be easy for readers to guess Zoya's past

I think Zoya was raped or molested by some guy in her childhood or teenage years

Anyways its a good change 4m cheerful Zoya n arrogant Asad

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Nour7

@Nour7

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

love the first chapter
humeira and najma's bond is really cute
the most lovely part for me was of asad ayaan and their mom
waiting forward the 2nd chapter ! And how will be asya's first encounter!

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Nour7

@Nour7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Are Aisha n Nisha one n the same? Plz clarify.

it's the same person and she is called Aisha

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aanchal

@Loving_life

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I'm soo happy that many of you have liked ch1... thank you so much all of you for your overwhelming comments and likes it means a lot to me...

anopama sorry actually I left the translation in between I am a hard competitor when it comes to laziness, but I have updated it for u. maybe some translation might be still remaining forgive me for that, also while pming everyone I will attach the links thanks for informing that dear

angel_juhi04 trust me dear angel I am really new to this site, common yaar if u can guess zoya's past than u should have known till now seeing my pming and updating skills how userfriendly I am over here...u will have to guide me a lot pls and ur right akram ko itna specify nahi karna chaiye tha but I will try compensating it somewhere

oldooz, Nisha and aisha are one and the same it was a typing error dear I have updated it in story also

even angel_juhi04 had same doubt right...I hope everything is clarified now?

About the chapter2 it's ready but I need 2 to 3 days for that due to family function there are many guests in my home..but I will be pming everyone sorry for the delay ...

and again thank you so much for the comments