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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3(A)


Zoya and humeira were walking in the street Zoya's mind was occupied wth Akram's words

Zoya thinking "I will end this all today itself, only abbu can help me Allah miya baut muskil se himmat ki hai maine usse tuttne mat dena"

Zoya's thought was broken by humeira

Humeira: dekho na baji ek bhi taxi ya auto nahi aa raha (see baji, not a single taxi or rickshaw is arriving)

Zoya: its okay gudiya let's walk raste me mil jayega

Humeira: hmm, jab late ho na toh ek bhi auto ya taxi nahi milta, nahi toh samne se aakar puchenge madam kaha jana hai huh!

Zoya just giggled at her, humeira always brings her out of her turmoil. They were walking when all of sudden a speeding car passed by them spreading all the muddy water in humeira's face and clothes

Zoya: Gudiya! Are you okay? Allah miya what's wrong with them!

Before Zoya could react an extremely angry humeira took a brick and threw it in that car's direction breaking its rear window and that car came to a stretching halt.

Zoya(shockingly): what did you do? Why can't you control your anger gudiya!

Humeira(nervously): I didn't mean to break that glass

Zoya: its Mercedes you idiot

Humeira: oh God! Baji lets run

Zoya: really? Only the glass is broken not the car they will catch us in no time

Humeira: OMG! You don't worry, they are at fault too. Will do something

Inside the car:

Ayaan(seeing the cracked glass): what the hell!

Asad(shockingly): this is the reason I told you to drive properly,roads are not proper over here. This is not the place for the speed check ayaan!

Ayaan: I agree on that bhai, but this is the way they react?(pointing towards the cracked window) I will handle them!!

Asad and Ayaan came out of the car and made the way towards their prey

Asad could see two ladies standing, one of them face and clothes are fully drenched in mud and the other one is facing her back towards him only her silky long straight black hair is visible to him, she is wearing a white formal shirt which she has inned with her black pants making her perfect curve visible. As they neared she turned around facing them and time froze for asad seeing the beauty in front of him, for a second he was just staring at her without caring about the surrounding, his gaze went to her doe-shaped eyes than to her cute button nose then to her ears which are partially hidden behind her silky hairs then last but not the least her gorgeous lips which seem like a rose petals to him. Damm! All this was creating a havoc inside him.

Zoya's situation was not less she was also mesmerized seeing the greek god in front of her even she was shamelessly staring at his perfectly gelled hair, his dark orbs, his cleaned shaved face and the cherry on the cake was his manly body which is covered in his Armani. Zoya thought"how can someone be so perfectly handsome"

Both of them were having unknown sensation and was lost in each other when their trance was broken by their sibling's voice. Both were embarrassed by their act

Zoya thinking "Allah Miya! What's wrong with you Zoya, what were you doing how can you shamelessly stare a stranger like that"

Asad thinking "what happened to me? Why was I behaving like a love stuck teenager? When was the last time I checked some girl like that forget the last time when did I ever checked someone like that "

Both of them diverted their attention from each other and concentrated on the situation at hand

Ayaan(annoyingly): did you have any idea what the hell have you done!!!

Humeira(spat back): same goes to you too Mr, look at me what have you done!!!

Asad: It's not our fault that roads are not proper over here and if you guys don't know to walk properly why don't you sit back home rather than throwing such stunts

Zoya(shouted): excuse me Mr! there is a way of driving in such roads can't you see the board over there "Drive slowly under construction" and you guys were driving as if it is a fast and furious race course and if you don't know the driving and traffic rules why the hell do you take such cars and endangering others life.
Asad(thinking how dare she):JUST SHUT UP!!HOW DARE YOU TALK TO ME LIKE THAT!!

Zoya took a step back seeing Asad so angry. she herself didn't know from where did she get so much guts to talk to him like this, she is very reserved with mens according to her all mens are same and can go to any extent to satisfy their ego. she started fumbling with words

Zoya: acc..tually...I mean the car...spe..spe..ed...

Asad was totally confused with her behaviour just a few seconds before this girl was fighting with him like a tigress though he was angry by her tone but she looked very adorable to him now she seems like a scared cat, he mentally kicked himself for scaring her to this extent

Seeing the situation Ayaan immediately took controls

Ayaan: I guess all are at fault, bhai you were right I should have been more careful with the speed

humeira:Yeah right! As baji said I could have controlled my anger too

Zoya: hmm.Gudiya you will go like this to college

humeira(looking at herself): oh god! I am already late, now what will I do! it's all because of this chimpanzee(glaring at ayaan again)

Ayaan: What! Chimpanzee! and me? if I am chimpanzee than look at yourself you are no less than an alien

Asad: STOP! (turning to humeira) be right here

He went towards his car

Ayaan: what you thought you can call me anything that too in front of my brother now you wait and watch!

Asad came back and humeira immediately hid behind Zoya and Zoya was also standing like a shield in between Asad and Humeira

Asad thinking "why are they both reacting as if im monster and going to eat them up"

Asad just handed a water bottle towards Humeira

Asad: actually your face is full muddy its looking dirty and unhygienic i...actually I mean to say is you may catch allergy so just wash it.

Humeira(stroking her face): allergy!you mean to say pimples!!!!oh my god

She hurriedly took a bottle from Asad and started washing her face. Zoya gave both of them an unbelievable look and then started helping humeira.

In all this Ayaan's face was a sight to watch. The shock would be an understatement for him, well he is aware of his brother's cleanliness problem but here he was scaring them with his name but all asad is concerned is about the dirt or her stupid pimple, this all was too much for him to handle.

Asad: let's go ayaan

Ayaan(sarcastically): for your information, that's my bottle which you gave her and I'm not going anywhere without it.

Asad: stop being a kiddo bro! seriously you are crying for a water bottle Ayaan?

Ayaan: what's so kiddish in it! That's my lucky bottle, I won't allow any alien to take it to her planet

Asad just rolled his eyes again both of their attention got diverted to the girls and was again lost in them.

Asad was just admiring Zoya as if that was the only important thing at that moment so tenderly she was wiping her sisters face with her handkercheif and from her one hand managing her own hair flix which is interupting her work he so wanted to put it behind her ears, he himself don't know why this girl creating so havoc inside him and why the hell is he getting such thoughts.

Now even Ayaan was in the spell looking at the beauty coming out of the dust, he was mesmerized seeing his alien taking the gorgeous human form, there is something about her face which is not letting him even blink once.

Zoya's voice brought them out of their spell

Zoya: gudiya I think you should take a day off today, look at your clothes it's fully spoiled, you can't go like this.

Humeira: yeah, but baji what about my lecture?

Zoya: anyhow you are late for that and don't worry baccha I will help you with that topic

Humeira(sadly): okay! I will go home then(and started to leave)

Ayaan: oh hello alien!my bottle

Humeira: here you go chimpanzee (glaringly gave bottle to him then thanked asad and waving at Zoya she went from there)

Zoya also started leaving when asad's voice stopped her

Asad: excuse me! We are also going that way if you want we can drop you

Zoya(calmly): No thanks! I will manage(speedily went from there)

Asad: weird girl

Asad turned towards his car where ayaan was standing facing him with is arms crossed and raised one eyebrow at him

Asad: what?

Ayaan: from when did you start offering a lift to the ladies and being dermatologist for their sisters and that too openly ignoring your one and only one brother? Bhaijaan you thought I didn't notice all that drolling session of yours(grinning widely)you want me to take out her info it's not a big deal for me(winking at asad).

Asad(almost embarrassed): if you are done with your bullshit let's move, we are late and YOU ARE NOT DRIVING.

Ayaan just huffed and followed him and sat in car but then smiled thinking "there is something special about that girl who made Asad Ahmed Khan act soo funny I will have to find about her, but than how I don't even know her name and that crackpot alien with her was also of no use was just calling her baji, just for once she had added her first name with that baji what can I expect from that.. that... "remembering her washing face "beauty! damn on earth ayaan!! focus on her sister, not that crackpot once after knowing about her maybe I can concentrate on that alien gudiya "smirk to himself

Asad(while driving): Ayaan put a full stop to your useless thought process.

Ayaan: what to do bhai(sadly) I'm not able to decide where to take Tania tonight dinner or disco?

Asad(smilingly): don't forget I'm your big brother, not your girlfriends who you can fool around.

Ayaan: that's why I love you. thinking"but I won't stop bhai this chapter will not end that easily, ya Allah uss ladki ke barre mein pata lagane mein madat kijeyega pls"

Hello to all my dear friends...firstly a biggest apology for such a late update...what to do was stuck with clge and assignments..but than thanks a lot for such a overwhelming comments it means alot to me..thanks to silent readers also for liking my story..i have updated chapter 3 i have divided this chapter so part a i have updated part b i will be updating soon..do read this pls n let me know how you find it..positive as well as negative comments are welcome :)


Chapter3B
Edited by dreamygirl26 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u soo much dear 😊
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Thank you so much
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Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Yesterday, I was thinking abt dis story n 2day I got d update😆
Felt bad for Humeira n Ayaan was too much wid his rash driving
Asad already made a wrong impression on Zoya
Dats wat I dod not liked abt Asad thinking dat no one sud talk to him like dis n dat
Loved d sisters scenes n brothers getn attracted to d sisters
Zoya calling her gudiya in public is irritating
Is Zoya having a deal wid Asad's company as they r going in d same way?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Yesterday, I was thinking abt dis story n 2day I got d update😆
Felt bad for Humeira n Ayaan was too much wid his rash driving
Asad already made a wrong impression on Zoya
Dats wat I dod not liked abt Asad thinking dat no one sud talk to him like dis n dat
Loved d sisters scenes n brothers getn attracted to d sisters
Zoya calling her gudiya in public is irritating
Is Zoya having a deal wid Asad's company as they r going in d same way?


Thank you so much dear..your comment really motivates me...I'm glad that you like my story so much...you are one of some members whose reviews I look forward to...n yes asad did made a bad impression n that's how Asad Ahmed Khan is 😉 I was not having heart to change him fully since I love his bossy n ocd natute n your thinking is sort of right 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful update with bro sis conversations ...
even u define the romance between ASYA is also sooo cute with funny AyRa...
hope asad will fall hard fr zoya...i just luv intense ASYA alwys
thank u fr the pm dear...
looking fwd fr ur nxt amazing update
update sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuv6

beautiful update with bro sis conversations ...
even u define the romance between ASYA is also sooo cute with funny AyRa...
hope asad will fall hard fr zoya...i just luv intense ASYA alwys
thank u fr the pm dear...
looking fwd fr ur nxt amazing update
update sooon


Thank you so much for a lovely comment dear...it means a lot to me...glad u liked it... will be updating asap 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was seriously so awesome
There first meeting was a treat to read
And the unknown emotions already building up
Seems like asad would be the one to save zoya from akram
And also ayaan and humaira might be play cupid for them along with falling in love themselves
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

This was seriously so awesome
There first meeting was a treat to read
And the unknown emotions already building up
Seems like asad would be the one to save zoya from akram
And also ayaan and humaira might be play cupid for them along with falling in love themselves
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊


Thank you so much was waiting for your comment. ...I'm happy that u liked it😊 n thanks again for a lovely comment :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sorry I miss ur last 2 updates
Loving the boys in this
Especially asad seeing him.so carefree love it
The teazed najma
Love their family bond
Aww zoya love her gudiya qnd her abu alot
Seems like akram may hve hqrm zoya in pass
And thinking maybe her ammi knew tht is y her death may have fowlplay
So finally asya met
Love it both are mesmerize by the other
Love how zoya hqnd back to asad but when he shouted she became timid
So she thinks all men r same and only boost their ego
Lets hope asad can change tht
So ayaan is too much alien chimpanzee but ayaan is drawn
But he wants to be cupid for his bro and then he will worry abt alien
Dont worry najma is the link to get ayaan what he wants
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