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Priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

boring??? really??? this is so damn romantic
i so luv this

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey Annie...😊

How are you Dear...Hope your EXams were good...😳

Coming to the OS , this is Amazing and Beautiful stuff Annie...

I still don't know why writers find their own stuff boring...😡😕...

Still I am not good in how to properly analyze this but yes...the Way it was written is outstanding...I mean I have read a similar OS sometime back...but the ending was different...and this thing I liked the most about this one as how Asad realized what actually Zoya wants and deserves after all her hardships and Unconditional love she is giving him since a long time...👏

Liked reading this...😃

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: _Annie_
Ress for Choco <3

Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awww

Beautiful

Made me 😭

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Welcome back Annie 🤗
so exams over han... good badiya hai 😆
coming 2 OS its awesome blossom
such a beautifully weaved story
Asad ke man ki baat when he decided 2 stop was really touching
& them performing prayers 2gather was so serene
& than I loved d ending Marry me so simple yet romantic...Loved it sweetu... great job👏 👏

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Annie...😊

How are you Dear...Hope your EXams were good...😳

Coming to the OS , this is Amazing and Beautiful stuff Annie...

I still don't know why writers find their own stuff boring...😡😕...

Still I am not good in how to properly analyze this but yes...the Way it was written is outstanding...I mean I have read a similar OS sometime back...but the ending was different...and this thing I liked the most about this one as how Asad realized what actually Zoya wants and deserves after all her hardships and Unconditional love she is giving him since a long time...👏

Liked reading this...😃

mayur... i never said my work is boring 😆

abhi apna work khud ko hi pasand na aaya toh koi or kya tareef kryga

sometimes we writers can't word out our actual imagined plot but it doesn't mean boring hai

let's start a campaign against such writers 😈

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jas91

Welcome back Annie 🤗
so exams over han... good badiya hai 😆
coming 2 OS its awesome blossom
such a beautifully weaved story
Asad ke man ki baat when he decided 2 stop was really touching
& them performing prayers 2gather was so serene
& than I loved d ending Marry me so simple yet romantic...Loved it sweetu... great job👏 👏

marry me was actually so damn good bestu

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

mayur... i never said my work is boring 😆

abhi apna work khud ko hi pasand na aaya toh koi or kya tareef kryga

sometimes we writers can't word out our actual imagined plot but it doesn't mean boring hai

let's start a campaign against such writers 😈

Baat bas itni si hai mayur aur ashii pie...k a writer is never satisfied with what he/she has written, no matter how much a reader loves it, a writer is never completely satisfied.

Hence, words of encouragement are necessary 😉