AsYa OS - Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai. HBD Choco Sis ❤️

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: jas91

1 second u Annie😉
plus mere saath yeh hota hai jab idea yeah koi scene mind main aata hai i find it too too brilliant & as every1 knows meri memory boht buri hai so i try 2 pen it down as quick as possible warna dimag se Delete ho jayega & ultimately that only happens cuz hamesha time pe likh nahi paati main
Isliye i say i m not satisfied😆😆

😆 😆

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: _Annie_
Ress for Choco <3

OMG 😛

I wasn't expecting anything like this Annie, this was so so sweet of you. Thank you sooo much for this lovely present sweetheart. I just loved it

And this was not long at all, I still wanted more 😛😆

Beautifully written 👏

Emotionally balanced all along. Not one place did you faulter in expressing Asad's emotions. I loved the whole thing where without any dialogues you were able to tell the whole story.

I loved how the only two dialogues were those of his proposal and of their confession ❤️

An amazing piece of writing. Hope to keep getting such PMs from you 😳

I love you too dearly and Am so happy to have connected with you here. Thank you once again for this gift 🤗

P.S. Sorry for being late, but mein forum pe hi 2 days ke baad aai hoon. Life is extremely busy with my son home for his summer break. But am trying to check in here as much as I can.

Am sure I will be forgiven 😛😳😆

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

This was so lovely
Asya's love is perfect...Zoya's love pulled him out of the darkness

Beautiful and romantic

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Yash

@_yash_

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

woww ! loved reading this.
so well written with a heart touching melody

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

can't explain...how much i liked it..

simply the best... reminded me another story in between..

very well written..

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

What a romantic OS Annie!!! 😳

I am so glad that I read this OS...thanks a ton for the pm!! 😊

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Hey Aadi🤗 Kaise hoo...

Sorry for being late dear...

Nice os.👏.

Beautifully written...👏

Wonderful b'day gift...👏

His past was horrible...

Zoya is the only one who remained with him always...

Finally he understood zoya's emotions and dropped fighting...great...

Wow..he proposed her..she was waiting for this moment...

Loved the changes happened within him...

Good job dear...

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