#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13)

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CaptainV

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I'll just leave it here and wait for your comments 😆

Mine and V's extended thanks to

A.Hajnal's super fast proof-reading. Wish I could write as fast as she proof-read 😆

For Updates : Buddy Me / Leave a Comment

Adios.

added : anopama requested me to add the translation to hindi/urdu dialogues so that's done. 😊 😳

Let me know if there are other demands of yours (all of you inclusive) for me to fulfil 😆

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago

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CaptainV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

ANKIEEE YOUR BACK AND SO AM I!!!

I'm going to write this comment from two perspectives:

1) AS A PERSON READING IT FOR THE FIRST TIME-

OMGGG I loved loved loved the update!!!!! Poor Azammm, why is akdu soo akdu?!?! why?!?!😡😭 azam is the cutest thing on the entire planet!! no competition at all!! I have sooo many questions-

What happened to azam? Where is zoya? Who are azam's parents? Why does he need help? Why is asad into illegal activities?? sooo many questions.. only you can answer😕😕

Its getting all the more interesting 😃😃 update sooon😳😳

2) AS A PERSON WHO HAS READY READ IT AND KNOWS THE DETAILS-😉😉😉

OMGGG I loved loved loved the update!!!!! Poor Azammm, why is akdu soo akdu?!?! why?!?!😡😭 and all the questions I have asked-ANS- I know the reason/answer 😉

You have written this chapter sooo amazingly well Ankie!! The conversations are my most favorite thing about the prologue and this chapter! It is beyond adorable😳😳😳😳

I already know the story and cant wait for the next update or better update all together😃😉 LOL but I will wait and more strength to your readers too 😛

Is this a sad or happy story?! happy ending or not?! hmm *WA thinking emoji*

also I want to thank everyone who has helped ankie with any part of this SS 😃THANK YOU😳

😃😃

loads loads and loads of love

Edited by TheNamesV - 9 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Heyyy...finally read the update...it was awesome Ankie!!😃

Asad was rude to the kid 😭

Loving the story...update soon Ankie... 😳

Thanks for the pm!!! 😊

Edited by --Aishwarya-- - 9 years ago

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊

Asad(KSG) and Kid Part was so Interesting.😊

Asad(KSG) Shouted on that kid and he started crying,it was so sad.😭

Who s that Kid?Waiting for it.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Interesting..
Asad is cruel to kid...
So the kid is zoyas...
But not asya..
I think his father is not good man..
He want asad to help him n his mamma..
That's so heart touching that the kid love his mamma a lot n wanna protect her...
Plz update soon

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Fatema

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Awww this kid azam is damn cute poor azam wants asads help who is a famous lawyer but asad being asad is so arrogant
So guessing zoya is azams mother
Continue soon
I'm loving azam 😳

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dmg15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Yeyeye update mil gaya finally

But why did u stop there :(

Asad is so mean to azam 😡

I don't like :( my poor baby crying

U better update next part soon ankie 😭

N it is so well written .u catch every emotion aptly.👏

Plz continue soon.

Edited by dmg15 - 9 years ago

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Aashka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Wohoo!

Even you update!

Now this mama is Zoya right?

Better late than never to figure it out! 🤡

Bechara Azam! 🥺

How much that kid took upon himself and look at our arrogant ass, Mr. Hotshot Jahapanah! 🐷

I too today had a story plot of a lawyer and commoner. But wouldn't want it to be called as stealing or anything hence playing it safe by discarding the idea there and then! 🤣

Even Prasad didn't help much here. But then he was bound by his duty. 🤔

But why is our Akdu so damn Akdu here? 😡

At least in the beginning!

And is Azam Zoya and Asad's son?

Please say yes?

Azam is so damn adorable! ❤️

The way he takes Asad's name is simply mind blowing! 🤗

And how can Asad be so cruel? He actually asked the kid to simply go die? 😡 🥺

Asad has majorly pissed me off here. But then he too has had his own set of headaches.

But then he should take care when it's a small cute wala kiddo! Who might as well be his own long lost child!

Update soonish!

Aashka