#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

nice update...interesting...👏

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

amazing start ankie...
interesting...
what happened to azam's mom 😕
and why asad hating kids...waiting to know...
the asad we saw in prologue is very different from the asad in here...eagerly waiting to know what happened...
plzz continue soon...

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Dude, you found out your way to divide the chapters...And such an amazing end you have found...Which leaves readers with a need to find out more and wait for the next update...

The kid is pure love...I fell for him with his entry in AAK's office. He introduced himself with such confidence, I was and am in awe...❤️

Amazing update, I hope you will find the time and the inspiration, the will and the muse to write more and soon...From a writer to a writer, Man, I feel your pain...And wish you all the needed luck...🤗

P.s...Tell 'Anytime' from my part also to the 'V' of yours. And you know I too wish I could write as fast I can read...And you know my other wish...😆

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Ihopelove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Azam is so cute. Poor baby he wants asads help and asad is not taking him seriously.

I think azams father is not good man n troubling azams mamma.( zoya) Did azam runaway from home to seek help.

Its going to be interesting to see how azam is going to convince asad.

Update soon.

Eagerly waiting.

Edited by Ihopelove - 9 years ago

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

hawww how can asad be so rude ro a kid ...bad very bad ...
n baby please give bigger updates na ...
waiting for it to unfold
jaldi update karo
thanks for pm
but baby along wid pm wa pe notification bhi chahiye plzzzx

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959760

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

it was short but soo cute 😆 aww azoo ❤️ just can't stop imagining the cuteness ❤️
way to go👍🏼
how could asad resist such cuteness such innocence??😕

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Monica

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

RES :D

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OMG!! What happened to Zoya? 😭 Azaam is too damn cute. I hope Asad melts to his charms soon. I wonder what will make him melt.

And I'm guessing he's trying to stop doing illegal activities (defending corrupt politicians). I wonder why he does it in the first place. If he's got such a good reputation now, shouldn't he be able to choose who he defends? Unless he's become that recognized because of them. Interesting, I want to read more 😃

Can't wait to read more! 😳😃👏

Edited by mochhug - 9 years ago