ASYA STORY: MUKADAR NE BADALDI ZINDAGI KE LAKHIRE part 5 on page 73.. - Page 12

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Very interesting and will Love to read more... pls give next update soon

thank you dear :)
okay...I will...

Originally posted by: khushibano

very nice

thank you ;)

Originally posted by: jas91

Binnu baby aap bhi writer ban gaye ho 😛

are wah ji wah

pehle toh Congratulations & celebrations 🥳

ab kyunki inte new writers saamne aa rahe hain I can happily tale early retirement😆😆

coming 2 story

Asya ki beti Zuni wow 😊

but Asya ko juda kar diya who kyun 😕

yeh Mukaadar word mujhe hargiz pasand nahi jabse Gul mata used it

Hope Tu hamen utna nahi tadpayegii 😆

chal continue soon dear

& 4 mentioning me in start🤗

haha...writer 😳
thankuu shankuu ji...😃
😡 retirement k baare m math socho 😡
mujse bura koi nahi hoga...
haha...muqaddar...gul reached ultimum level...
mujse nahi ho payega 😆
yeah..I will ..within 2 days...
In Sha Allah...
hugzz🤗

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow

Loving this already

Looking forward to reading

Love Asya unlucky love where kids separation r involve

So his own daughter he has no clue

But the connection the feeling is there

So zoya missed seeing him her love

Continue and pm plz

Thank you so much dear 😃
I'm glad u liked it..
yeah..he don't know about it...
just missed ;)
yeah...within 2 days...
of course...I will pm u...

Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW !!!
Its So Cute ...!!!
Awesome Start ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!
Will love to read further ...!!!

thank you dear 😊
will continue soon..

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool

Awesome update

Cntinue soonish

thank you 😊
I will...

Originally posted by: LilChooza

Nice start binnu ...keep it up girl but kyun alag AsYa yeh sabko kya shouk AsYa ke bachon ko bina asad ke bada karna?! ...waise ignore me I am pagal bcoz of exams ...

tumko reply nahi pagli 😆

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Hey Binnu...what a surprise...nice no...very very very nice surprise 😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">congratulations for your first story...👏👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">coming to the concept...it sounds very nice...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">I loved your Zuni...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and the title...Amazing !!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">So now i am waiting to know how it is going to unfold and what actually the past of AsYa is...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">continue soon...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">sorry for late comment...I wasn't here but when I clicked on my inbox the first that I captured is your PM and that of your first AsYa story...😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks for pm and plz continue soonish...</font>

hey deepu 🤗
haha...surprise acha laga na ;)
thankuu so much deepu 😃
I'm glad u liked it..
will update soon :)
koi ni... u came here naaa.. I'm very happy about it...
so don't say sorry...

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear
Asad love Zoya so why they are not together. Zuni is Asya daughter. She reminds him someone close to his heart. He took her hand & felt completed. Waiting for story to start as I am curious to know why they seperated. Continue soon plz. Do pm me if u can. Thanks

Thank you so much asif bhai...
I'm glad u liked it...
reasons ko wait karna padega... ;)
I will update within 2 days...
yeah...sure...I will pm u...

hey pagli jaan 🤗
m teko pg 17 pe reply kiya tha...