ASYA STORY: MUKADAR NE BADALDI ZINDAGI KE LAKHIRE part 5 on page 73..

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Assalamu alaikum
friends...


I'm warmly
welcoming each and everyone of you to this thread...🤗





How are you all?


I can guess the
expression in your faces .😲😲..yeh henaa...


Binuu that too with
a story...unbelievable henaa..😆


Bilkul...I don't
know is it worth to call a story..bilkul my bakwaas h...


You can blame my EVS
exam...Because I got this idea from examhall...


As well as my 2
beautiful friends shaluu(MeDHellsAngel) and shamuzz(Missadorable)...


so please ignore my
mistakes and forgive me...


I'm dedicating this
each and everyone of you...


I would like to
mention my friends who were with me...


First of all my
crazy roomies who caught me red handed with my work and encouraged
me.😳.(my 6 idiots... you guys became my world within these 2
years...luv u guyzz..🤗.)


Shamuzz...meri
jaan...Who gave all the support which I needed...She helped me too
much...Title credit too goes with her... luv u my jaan...🤗 Deal pakki
hogayi naa..you are the first and best...
😆


Shaluu...my
bestuu...Because of whom I'm here with my bakwaas...The girl who
encouraged me very much...You don't know how much important h tu
mereliye...😳🤗


My BD..Sue yeh koun
h...


Azu..My loving and
caring sis... I know this will be a surprise for you..


Yabi..Your shidhu is
posting something...


where is my pyaari
si beegum...my chudail beegum sha...


Sinu aappi...I'm
really missing you...


meri khushi Aju...


aaroo..my lovely
friend..Ashii...Afi..Jash...Thankyou for being amazing friends..hugzz everyone🤗

You guys are the best..


Hope I didn't
forget anyone...


Enough of my
blabberings...Seriously sorry for wasting your time...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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. PART 1



A beautiful little girl clad in red gown entered into the St.Michael school by holding her mom's hand.This is a big day for St.Michael school,the day to inaugurate their digital library for the high school students.And the guest is none other than Mr.Asad ahamad khan,one of the famous buisness tycoon in India who gave lot of contributions to open this library.
The little girl is looking everywhere,she is hell worried about her dress.Just like her mom she love to wear jeans.So she is adjusting her dress minute by minute,by seeing this her mom asked
'Zuni,kya hua beta'
'Allah miyaan,what's wrong with you mom?aapko patha henaa,I don't like these type dresses'she said by placing her hand on her head.
'Ek din ki bath h beta'
'han mom,stupid dress code'
'Zuni...'
'soyyi... I will adjust this '
'that's my sweet girl'.
Zuni is zoya's world.Her reason to live,for whom she is living this life.The boon she got from Allah.
By disturbing their little moment,Zoya,s phone beeped.
'Hey Zoya beta,you have to come office urgently'.
'arehh..uncle..why this sudden call,aapko patha henaa about the programme conducting in Zuni's school'.
'haan beta,I know about it,but I'm really sorry.you have to come here quickly',by saying Rafeek khan cut the call.
Zoya can't say no to her uncle,because of him only she is standing here without fearinr anything and leading a beautiful life even after the problems happened in her life.But what about her daughter,she was very eager to participate in this programme and also she is performing a dance programme too.Zoya is in big dilemma.She don't know what to do, two important persons whom to choose.
By seeing the facial expressions of her mom zuni asked about the problem and zoya explained the situation to her.As an understanding girl she is Zuni told Zoya to go office.She told she will go with meenu and Rachael aunty.Meenu is Zuni's best friend and her mom Rachael is Zoya's bestfriend.
Asad ahamad khan entered into school by driving his black SUV.When he took a step into the school he felt a big relief wash over him and calmness in his heart which he didn't got past seven years after Zoya left him.He felt something will happen today,that will change his whole life.But what is that,he has no idea.by masking his innertermoil with a smile he lead to the inauguration hall and inaugurated the function.
After the inauguration principal spoke,'As per Asad ahamad khan's request we conducted a test to select a student to grand scholarship from lower primary class.As per his request we selected the student and this is the time to announce the winner.The winner is none other than Zuni khan from second standard B division.I warmly welcoming Zuni and Asad ahamad khan on the stage.
Suddenly that girl came from crowd by wearing her beautiful dimple smile.After seeing her time became still for him and felt an instant connection with her.Something inside him was feeling restless.This girl is making him remember someone most important in his life,his love of life.The girl was feeling difficulty to enter the stage.He came forward and held her hand.He felt a completeness in that moment,he smiled widely and gave the gifts and papers associated with the scholarship , without knowing she is his own daughter.



I seriously don't know is it worth to post...
please let me know...
I know that was a small part..If I get good responses then I will give long updates...
please ignore my mistakes...


MY ZUNI...
Edited by binuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1: BELOW
PART 2:page 22
PART 3:page 45
PART 4:page 63
Edited by binuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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meee
unres

binnnuuu chalooo pehlaa bdaa wala hugiee is khushi mein🤗

finally u posted it i m soo hapiee for u...🥳

verryyy welll written yaaar their convo an all loved it😳

nd i totally loved dis concept of urss asya wit babyy aww😳

nd zunii aww kitni cutee h yaar

nd luking forward to knw d things btw asya their reason for split😕

nd i m wishing u al d very best for dis story nd i knw u will make us al(our gang) proud😉

chalooo continue soon

nd i will nt able to give long comments r nt even comment sumtimes nd u knw Y soo pehle hii mene apni apologise letter submit kardii maam ji so gussa mat honaa😛




Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yay. Finally uh posted binshu 🤗🥳
I was eagerly waiting for this one isliye bar bar bol rahi thi ki post kr *teeth vali*

Firstly i love such stories jisme baby girl hoti h, zoya alg hoti nd stuff.
So obviously i had to love this too.
And trust me on this you did a fabulous job.
It didn't seem ki yeh teri first story hai.
Kuki meri first toh bht hi gandi thi but than mere pas koi guide karne ko nahi tha nahi frnd tha
Par yeh seriously bht achi thi.
I loved the part jb asad use lene ata hai.p
Plz jldi update krde plz .
Jldi. Plz
And thnks for mentioning me binshu puttar 😆😉
Love uh❤️
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago
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maiii yayyy congo on pehli stry 🤗
🥳
u knw m so so happy frm the second u told me u wrote! Oh god oh god
imagine me already jumping yayy 😆
isi khushi me do teen aur le
🤗
🤗
🤗
and ofcourse is forum me ek hi BD h 😆 ME! 🤣
teri zuni bohat pyari h
and title b interesting h
muqaddar muqaddar muqaddar gul ne to bheja fry kiya tha iss word ko leke tu mat karna
and what a pyara ehsaas it wud be na when asad held zuni's hand
zuni khan h mtlb asad ki daughter h na
asya k bich dooriya kyu fir
btw update was written beautifully and well planned
keh de koi ki ye teri pehli stry h
u have ths hidden writer in u
i never knew!
Woah that rhymed ^
😆 mai meri rhyming baad me karungi but tu likh pls likh
i am so curious to read next
🤗 LOVE U MWUAH THANKU FR GIVING US A STORY ❤️
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so so so happy that tu likh ri h yaar yayyy cant contain my excitement jaldi unres kar na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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le teri pehli stry pe pg khaya mene how lucky u are aww 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
Loved reading it
Seems like an interesting plot
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
Plz update soon..
If possible plz pm me

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