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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Amazing update
love the convo between father and son
ahad's innocence is worth reading
poor child is right on his place
he did not like fahad bcs of him zoya did not give time to ahad
i think its wrong from zoya's side
i was not surprised when asad took the decision to go away from zoya's life
please reveal the reason why he left her
Dilshaad came to know about ahad and promised zoya not to tell asad 😡
i hust wanted to stragle her that time
after fully knowing about asad's reason she is doing this
he is a father and deserve to know about his son!
love the entry of fawad and ayesha
when ayesha told that anaya is in her life bcs of asad ,everyone got shocked
i can imagine asad's shocked face
ayaan does not like fahad and his family
how could he after all he loves his bhaijaan more than himself
song from kal ho na ho why?
do not make asad srk
zoya is determinded to talk to him
loved the update
please update soon

let me answer your question... dilshad knows the whole truth so she supported Asad but never blamed Zoya or say any other thing... in Ahad's case she supported Zoya because Zoya being Ahad's mother have the actual right to tell Asad... she didn't stop her she just promised her that she will not reveal as she wanted Zoya to do so and she knows Zoya will tell him one day

Asad is not SRK 😆

and yes the reason will be out in this update

keep reading dear

and last but not the least

thanks a lot

Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Love the update
So full of events
Wow dilshaad came to know about asad
Aargghh can't expect anything from this stupid asad
Asad's side story is hidden till now only came to know about Zoya's miseries so definitely a tight slap
Every guess for this story turned down till now
Every twist is unexpected
So decided to go with flow
Want to read soon
Thanks for pm
Update soon

thanks a lot dear

Asad's side of story will be out in this update

keep reading

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Yes he was zoya's friend from New York comes to help zoya and make asad jealous but in a good way
he was full of mischief in that story i just love him

But but he was in love with Zoya too...

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Interesting Update Ashii..

First of all sincerely I am not at all happy with this third entry...but khair it must be your thing to bring some twist in the story...😆

Coming to the update..

I still feel hiding about Ahad from Asad is still a wrong decision on Zoya's part...and even if Dilshad is with Zoya on this...then i don't know what to say... , this reminded me of HUMSAFAR , their also till the time the girl was supposed to be diagnosed , Asher ko pata hee nahi tha ki uski beti hai...

And you also fullfilled your own fantasy of bringing in both your favourite Men in a single part...waahhh😆

And about the last thing...why should he be slapped now ????????

Waiting for the next update..

Continue soon..

first thing first... i'm also not happy with 3rd element but its necessary for the story

Mayur... you should think like Zoya... just imagine the way Asad left her, whole Khan family tried to find him, Najma lost her baby, Zoya lost her father, Ayan and his sister lost their mum... why???? just because they met with an accident while searching Asad

let me remind you the day when Zoya gave birth to Asad

Asad and Zoya were on call and the credit goes to Meher, but what Asad did, he didn't hear her any plead...

then what you want from Zoya??? ke woh asad ko kahe accept her as she is the mother of his child... come on yaar kon aisa karega... Zoya ne wait kia par Asad ki be-rukhi ne usse yeh decision lene pe majboor kia...

as you said like HUMSAFAR, Zoya acted just like KHIRAD, the way she moved in her life with her daughter, Zoya also doing the same with Ahad

no offense but being a girl i truly think Zoya did the right thing... jis admi ko rishte ki parwah nahi thi usse koi haq nahi ke woh baap kehlaaye

and mai jazbaat mai zaida hi bol gayi 😆

and slap thing was just a thought as per my readers's earlier demand

thank you for reviewing

keep reading and i hope now you are satisfied with Zoya

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: MayurChan

But but he was in love with Zoya too...

check my reply on ur review 😆

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: ayat20
Nice update
Hope asya sits out everything
But I don't like fahad with zoya
N want the pm kindly add me in it buddy list plzz

thank you dear

you are already in my buddy list

keep reading !

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: Amina...
Awesome Update Ashiii...!!!
It was Really Very Amazing...!!!
Very Very Very Very Very Beautifully Written...!!!
Feeling So Bad For Zoya... They Both are Helpless 😭
I think Asad is suffering from some severe health issue... and from today's update... may be related to the Heart...!!!
Asad n Zoya have gone out together, hope they sort out some of their Misunderstandings...!!!

And After Reading The Last Two to Three Parts, I DON'T THINK ASAD DESERVES A SLAP...!!!

And I Still DON'T LIKE Zoya with Fahad

On the Whole... LOVED THE UPDATE...!!!
Please Continue Soon... This "likes" warning is not helping yr... There are not much people here 😕

thank you very much dear

I'm glad you like it

I have stopped asking for likes so worry not I'll update on time

stay tuned

thanks again