*New* AsYa OS 'Sajdah e Ishq'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Assalam o Alaikum !!!

I know I know I have to update my stories but kya karon ek purana promise yaad aa gaya

some months back my Choto Moto aka Yumna requested me an OS

sooo here I'm with her request

hope CM teko acha lage 🤗 🤗 🤗

coming to the OS it is based on Atif Aslam's Tajdar e Haram and AsYa going for Umrah

so plz listen to that Qawali while reading the OS

enough of my blabber

scroll down for the OS

Ashii...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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banner credit goes to my Arshu aka asyaarshilover 🤗


Asad and Zoya were childhood buddies, soon their friendship turned into love, their families were on cloud nine when AsYa broke the news of their togetherness, as soon AsYa completed their studies, they said "Qubool Hai" to each other and entered in the sacred bond of marriage...
In the first year of their married life, Asad and Zoya were more than happy, they never planned a baby, they knew that when the time will come, Allah will bless them with a baby for sure, but after a year of marriage, some relatives started taunting on Zoya's pregnancy...
Khans and Farooquis never took that seriously but after hearing such talks, they decided to talk to AsYa, they thought maybe Asad and Zoya didn't wanted a child in near future, but they were worried for Zoya, what if someone taunted her on her face, that's why they wanted to make AsYa understand that a child can be planned...
After talking with them, everyone came to know that AsYa too wanted a child but as a gift by Allah, later they gave in saying from now they will surely try for a child...
Asad and Zoya loved each other more than anything in the world, with the talks of baby, they got worried for each other, that was the least which they wanted to face in their life...
"When there is a will, there is a way"
Luck was also at their side, in the second year of their married life, Zoya broke the news of her pregnancy, where everyone was happy, Asad thanked Allah for the hundreds of times, relief washed over him, he was hell worried for Zoya, he had seen her going crazy for baby, but seeing Zoya back to her normal self, happy tears brimmed in his eyes...
Zoya was in her 2nd trimester, she has been pampered by everyone, Asad was lil bit strict to her just to see her lioness avatar, everything was going well but Allah Has planned something else and unfortunately AsYa lost their unborn baby and the worst part was that Zoya can't conceive anymore...
Zoya went into depression, she didn't wanted to come out of her shell, she stopped visiting her parents, she stopped spending time with her in laws, she used to spend her whole day locked up in her room only... Asad tried his level best to bring his Zoya back to life but she was in no mood to hear him out...
Once, Asad found her unconscious, doctors told him that she fainted because lack of food, anger rose in him, without caring about her condition, he took out his anger on her, Zoya was literally shocked seeing him like that, but the truth was that she did wrong... Asad made her understand that whatever happened was Allah's will, they should be happy at least they were together, Zoya realized her mistake and apologized... AsYa cried on their loss together for the first time but promised to make it last, they decided to start a new life, where their love will not care about the world, the only thing which will matter for them will be their togetherness...
"We are better together"
Life was more than beautiful, Asad and Zoya were all set to celebrate their 3rd anniversary, their families were happy to see them together through thick and thin, Allah Had bestowed AsYa with everything except a child...
Asad wanted to gift something special to Zoya, he thought about lots of things but suddenly he remembered Zoya's wish, while, on the other hand, Zoya was going to ask something big from Asad which she knew he will never agree...
Later the party, Asad and Zoya were in their room, where Asad was excited, Zoya was nervous, mustering the much needed courage she started...
Zoya: Asad I... I want to say something...
Asad: you don't need my permission, go ahead... he sat beside her and put his arms around her...
Zoya took a deep breath, she wasn't sure how to say, Asad felt her uneasiness and squeezed her hands...
Asad: kya hua Zoya...
Zoya: tum... tum dosri shadi kar lo...
Asad: are you mad??? how can you say this Zoya, do you have any idea what are you talking about???
Zoya: Asad, ek baat meri baat toh...
Asad: kya suno yaar, tum jaanti ho main tumse pyaar karta hoon, hum dono sath hain, khush hain, hamary ghar wale khush hain aur...
Zoya: main tumhe har khushi nahi de sakti Asad... she interrupted him...
Asad sighed, he closed his eyes and took some deep breaths, he calmed himself down and look at her, Zoya was trying her level best not to cry, she just wanted to see him happy, she wanted best for him, that's why she came up with this topic... Asad sat on his knees in front of her and took her hands in his...
Asad: look at me Zoya...
Zoya looked everywhere expect him, she didn't wanted to talk to him, not right now, she was about to go but Asad made her sit back forcibly...
Asad: tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ke main khush nahi hoon...
Zoya: it's not like that Asad, tum khush ho, par...
Asad: par kya Zoya, tum mere sath ho, mujhe or kuch nahi chahiye... he cupped the side of her face and looked straightly in her eyes...
Zoya: I can't give you a child... she cried...
Asad: so what Zoya, I don't want a child...
Zoya: aisa nahi hota Asad, tum samajh kyun nahi rahy...
Asad: samajh toh tum nahi rahi Zoya, mujhy sach main kuch nahi chahiye, I love you and you love me, is se zaida main kuch nahi chahta...
Zoya: I know but...
Asad: no ifs and buts, we love each other, we are together, so what we can't be parents, I trust on Allah, if He had planned something, then it will be the best for us, just let it be, hum jese bhi hain, sath hain na, and trust me I don't want anyone in our life with whom you have to share my share of love...
Zoya: I love you... she smiled with tears in her eyes and hugged him...
Asad: I love you more... he hugged her back...
Asad broke the hug, wiped her tears and dropped a kiss on her forehead, he gave her an envelope and told her to open it, Zoya opened the envelop, she looked at Asad who was smiling from ear to ear, she was shocked at first, then happiness took over her, without wasting a second she launched herself in his arms and hugged him tightly...
Zoya: thank you so much Asad, I can't believe tumhe yaad tha...
Asad: main kese bhool sakta tha, tumhe acha laga???
Zoya: acha... Asad I loved it, it's what every Muslim dreams about, performing Umrah' with my soul mate was my biggest wish, I can't believe we are going, thank you hubby dearest...
Asad: pleasure is all mine wifey...
After 3 days, Asad and Zoya left for Saudi Arabia in order to perform Umrah...
Kismat mein meri chain se jeena likhde
Doobe na kabhi mera safeena likh de
Jannat bhi ganwara hai, magar mere liye
Aye kaatib-e-taqdeer, madina likhde
The Umrah (Arabic: ) is a pilgrimage to Mecca, Saudi Arabia, performed by Muslims that can be undertaken at any time of the year, in contrast to the Hajj. In Arabic, Umrah means "to visit a populated place". In the Sharia, Umrah means to perform Tawaf round theKaaba and Sa'i between Al-Safa and Al-Marwah, after assuming Ihram (a sacred state), either from a Miqat like Zu 'l-Hulafa, Juhfa, Qarnu 'l-Manzil, Yalamlam, Zt-i-'Irq, Ibrahm Mursa, or a place in Hill. It is sometimes called the 'minor pilgrimage' or 'lesser pilgrimage', theHajj being the 'major' pilgrimage and which is compulsory for every able-bodied Muslim who can afford it. The Umrah is not compulsory but highly recommended...
Asad and Zoya were at Jeddah airport, they performed their Wadhu and wore their Ihram and started their journey towards Mecca...
Tajdar-e-haram, ho nigaah-e-karam
Hum ghareebon ke din bhi sanwarjayenge
Haami-e-bekasaan kya kahega jahan
Aapke darr se khaali agar jayenge
On reaching Haram Shareef, they started walking towards the most holy place in the world, Holy Kaaba...
Tajdar-e-haram
Tajdar-e-haram
As soon Asad and Zoya landed their eyes on the Kaaba, they felt happy tears in their eyes, they lowered their eyes in respect and made lots of dua's... as it is said that Allah fulfills each and every dua that is made after seeing Kaaba...
Koi apna nahi gham ke maaray hain hum
Aapke darr pe faryaad laaye hain hum
Ho Nigah-e-karam, warna chokhat pe hum
Aapka naam le le ke marjayenge
Asad and Zoya started performing the rituals of Umrah, they perform Tawaaf, Sai and Taqsir step by step...
Tajdar-e-haram
Tajdar-e-haram
Perform a tawaf "", which consists of circling the Kaaba seven times in an anticlockwise direction. Men are encouraged to do this three times at a hurried pace, followed by four times, more closely, at a leisurely pace.[1]
Perform a sa'i "", which means rapidly walking seven times back and forth between the hills of Safa and Marwah. This is a re-enactment of Hajar's frantic search for water. The baby Ishmael cried and hit the ground with his foot (some versions of the story say that an angel scraped his foot or the tip of his wing along the ground), and water miraculously sprang forth. This source of water is today called the Well of Zamzam.
Perform a halq or taqsir, meaning a shaving of the hair. A taqsir is a partial shortening of the hair, whereas a halq is a complete shave of the head, except for women, as they cut a little amount of hair instead...
Asad and Zoya completed basic steps of Umrah hand in hand, they thanked Allah again and again for blessing them with such an opportunity, they thanked Allah for each and every thing, they made lots of dua's for their family, friends and for themselves...
Kya tumse kahoon aye Arab ke kunwar
Tum jaanat ho mann ki battiyaan
Darr furqat toh aye ummi-laqab
Kaate na katath hai ab rattiyaan
Turi preet mein sudbud sab bisri
Kab tak ye rahegi beqabri
Daah-e-ka pigan duzdi da nazar
Kabhi sun bhi toh lo humri battiyaan
Aapke darr se koi na khaali gaya
Apne daaman ko bhar ke sawaali gaya
Ho habeeb-e-hazin par bhi aaqa nazar
Warna auraq-e-hasti bikhar jayenge
Allah created this universe for His beloved Prophet Muhammad (SAW), to show His love towards His beloved one, the biggest example of love in this world...
Taj dare haram
Taj dare haram
Our religion Islam teaches us the basics of love, love for Allah, love for His Prophet Muhammad (SAW), love for His all creatures, love for our parents, love for our siblings, love for our relatives, love for our friends, love for our spouses...
Maikashon aao aao madine chalen
Aao madine chalen, chalo madine chalen
Aao madine chalen, Isi mahine chalen
Aao madine chalen, Haj ke mahine chalen
Asad and Zoya headed towards Madina Shareef to complete the second stage of Umrah, a place where Allah's beloved Prophet Muhammad (SAW) resides in His final rest place...
Tajalliyon ki ajab hai fazaa madine mein
Nigah-e-shauk ki hai inteha madine mein
Gham-e-hayat na khauf-e-khazaa madine mein
Namaz-e-ishq karenge adaa madine mein
Barah-e-raas hai raahe-e-khuda madine mein
On reaching there, Asad and Zoya moved towards men and ladies section respectively, as men were allowed to look at Roza e Rasool while ladies were not allowed to do so, they have to look down in respect...
Aao madine chalen, chalo madine chalen
Aao madine chalen, Isi mahine chalen
Maikashon aao aao madine chalen
Dast-e-saaqiy-e-kausar se peene chalen
Yaad rakho agar, uthgayi ek nazar
Jitne khaali hai sabb jaam bharjayenge
Tajdar-e-haram
Tajdar-e-haram
Asad and Zoya spent the next 8 days in Madina only, in order to complete Umrah, every Muslim should offer 40 prayers in the Haram Shareef of Madina, for the first time, as AsYa were on their first Umrah so they had to complete each and every ritual properly...
Asad and Zoya used to spend their whole day in Haram Shareef only, they do the Zayarat (visiting holy places) in their free time, the calmest place in the whole world...
In Riaz al Jannah, Asad and Zoya offered some Nawafil and in dua, they cried their hearts out and prayed to Allah Almighty and His beloved Prophet Muhammad (SAW)...
Khof-e-toofan hai, bijliyon ka hai darr
Sakht mushkil hai aaqa kidhar jayen hum
Ap hi garr na lenge, hamari khabar
Hum musibat ke maaray kidhar jayenge
Tajdar-e-haram
Tajdar-e-haram
Ya mustafa, ya mujtaba, eraham-lana, eraham-lana
kast-e-hama, bechara ra
Daama tuhi, daama tuhi
Mann aasiyam, Mann ajizam
Mann bekasam, Haal-e-mara
Pursa tuhi, pursa tuhi
Asad: Ya Allah, I know my thank you is not enough, but I can't get enough of thanking you, you blessed me with everything, you completed my deen when Zoya came in my life as my wife, now I want nothing for myself, I want each and everything for Zoya only, no doubt she has everything, but being a female, she is incomplete, she can't be a mother, but she can be, if and only if YOU want... bless her with that blessing, complete her Ya Allah, complete her... he prayed for Zoya with closed eyes and some tears rolled down of his cheeks...
Zoya was also praying, she lifted her hands above and prayed...
Zoya: Allah Miyan, I have everything, Asad is with me, I can't give him a child, still he is with me and loves me, now I want nothing for myself, plz fulfill his every wish, I just want him happy, so grant his prayers...
Aye mushtub-e-zambar fishaan
Paike naseem-e-sub hadam
Aye charagar insanafas
Aye moonis-e- beemar-e-gham
Aye qaasid-e-parkhundapaye
Tujhko usi gul ki kasam
Innal tayari has saba
Yaumal ila-ar-dil-haram
Ballig salami roza tann
Fi-han nabi-al-mohtaram
Tajdar-e-haram, ho nigaah-e-karam
Asad and Zoya headed back to Mecca to complete the third stage of Umrah, on reaching Haram Shareef they performed their Alwidayi Tawaf, Asad and Zoya were together throughout the Umrah, it was their 4th circle out of seven when Zoya felt dizziness, but before she knew she passed out, thankfully Asad was there to hold her...
Asad immediately took her to the medical camps that were outside the Haram Shareef, doctors checked on Zoya while Asad waited outside the camp... some minutes later, doctors called Asad in and broke the news of Zoya's pregnancy, Asad and Zoya looked at each other in total disbelief, shock was visible on their faces, they asked again and doctor confirmed it, without caring about the audience, Asad took Zoya in a bone crushing hug, both cried with happy tears...

Hum ghareebon ke din bhi sanwarjayenge
Haami-e-bekasaan kya kahega jahan
Aapke darr se khaali agar jayenge
Tajdar-e-haram
Tajdar-e-haram
Asad and Zoya thanked Allah for blessing them with a child again and again, they completed their Alwidayi Tawaf and made lots of prayers for their unborn child...
"A child fills the place in your heart that you never knew was empty"
Allah blessed them with a baby girl, a daughter, indeed a blessing of Allah Almighty... Asad and Zoya were more than happy, Allah completed them and they can't even thank Him properly, but they knew Allah is with them and know how much they are happy and thankful, after 3 years, Asad and Zoya along with their daughter Maha performed Umrah and thanked Allah for showering them with lots of happiness...


NOTE: extremely sorry if you found anything misleading... do let me know where i was wrong so i can correct myself... Saima Api, Tehs and Nim... specially u 3 have to tell me... Choto hope mene teri request ka blunder nahi kia... Arshu u Umrah kiya hua na abhi i kch galti ki toh bolna haan... in fact all Muslim readers plzzz feel free to point out my mistakes... i'll appreciate it...

Sooo that's it...
Ignore my mistakes plzzz...
Hit like and leave your precious replies...
Ashii...
Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mera :D
Assshiii pieee...I'm overwhelmed to read this. I mean, I salute you for the topic you chose, it was indeed a very noble one, but you needed guts for that. Thumbs up, Sis👍🏼
Hajj and Umrah is the dream of every muslim. Everyone wants to experience the feeling of sheer peace which we can get nowhere except for the House of the Almighty. The details were beautifully given, from start to end, every ritual they performed step by step, Tawaaf, Sai, the info about the holy water of Zam Zam, taqsir, everything. This was so beautifully poignant that it brought tears to my eyes.

Allah ke ghar se koi khaali haath nahi jaata. The missing piece in AsYa's life was also filled by the presence of their baby. Khuda chaahe tou kuch bhi ho sakta hai.

Hands down, this is, from now on, the best amongst all your writings, for me. :)

Take care Ashhii piee...Love you loadss 🤗
Edited by _Annie_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
unres
kaan pakad k sry fr being late
well meko zada samajh ni ata agar me directly padhti
bt tehs and saima di ki chats se kafi kuch knwledge mila and mene mumma se b discuss kiya thoda bohat
and then ye os padha to meko esa laging ki mai b asya k sath gai thi 😆
THS os was totally different in a gud way to stand out
i really loved how u wrote it considering the religious facts it enlighted us with
and the quawali is awesm
concept was heart touchng
when i read it i was so into it ki zoya ki pregnancy news jb break hui mere rongte khade the
effective well written os and thanku fr writing ths
🤗 MWUAH
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres
wonderful os
loved it
thanx for pm

Edited by nilusoni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

Kab post karengi? 🤔


kar dia

abhi padh 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very Good and Well written Part Ashii..
Came to know many things from this part..
I just recalled this thing that first time i heard about UMRAH was in Aapi's story KAYA's FF #TPM...
Thanks for sharing this with Us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good and Well written Part Ashii..
Came to know many things from this part..
I just recalled this thing that first time i heard about UMRAH was in Aapi's story KAYA's FF #TPM...
Thanks for sharing this with Us.


thank you so much mayur 😛

i'm glad by this piece of writing you came to know lots of things

yeah i too read on Umrah in TPM only

credit goes to Yumna... she wanted such type of story on AsYa

hope it went well

thanks again dude...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear it's an amazing OS
I loved it
Dear thr is some mistake in the update
For doing Umra we will get in to Ihram from India itself not from Jeddah
Thr is a place before Jeddah and we should enter in Ihram in that place
And Umra we will do only in Makkah only
In Madeena we only go thr for Ziyarath Nabi ( SA)
Thr is no rule regarding 40 namaz in Madeena mosque
It's some some misunderstanding in our Muslim Umma
And we females also get to visit Roudha and we can also do Ziyarath Nabi (SA) but the timings are different
I knew about all these things cause I was lucky to live in Madeena in my child hood and I done many Umras & Hajjs by the grace of Allah
Now also I am living in Saudi Arabia only
I hope I clear all ur misunderstandings
Love u dear
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aseelashah

Dear it's an amazing OS
I loved it
Dear thr is some mistake in the update
For doing Umra we will get in to Ihram from India itself not from Jeddah
Thr is a place before Jeddah and we should enter in Ihram in that place
And Umra we will do only in Makkah only
In Madeena we only go thr for Ziyarath Nabi ( SA)
Thr is no rule regarding 40 namaz in Madeena mosque
It's some some misunderstanding in our Muslim Umma
And we females also get to visit Roudha and we can also do Ziyarath Nabi (SA) but the timings are different
I knew about all these things cause I was lucky to live in Madeena in my child hood and I done many Umras & Hajjs by the grace of Allah
Now also I am living in Saudi Arabia only
I hope I clear all ur misunderstandings
Love u dear
Take care


first of all thank you so much for letting me know where i went wrong

firstly i know about wearing Ihram before reaching Jeddah but dont know how i forget that imp thing... that place is called Mekaat right???

and about 40 namaz in Madina i heard on 1st umrah u have to offer 40 namaz and that's compulsory and all

my mom recently performed Umrah and she told she was told not to look at Roza e Rasool,, i mean she was allowed to go there but nazar utha kar dekhny se mana kiya tha

M.A u r really lucky... may Allah bless all the Muslims with such blessing Ameen

yup all clear now

thanks a lot dear 🤗

it really means a lot to me...

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