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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

So Sehan to be engage
And asya want the same for sanam
But sanam only wants ahil
Zoya tries with her even confront ahil
But he is a worst case of Asad in the old days
So now sanam decide to marry
Poor ahil listen to maya more u will end up with no one
Continue

Thank you! Sehan will finally have a happy ending 😃 Zoya's way to take care of her daughters is so weird in my story because I'm not quite sure about the bond they should have she just found them so she doesn't know their personality but I think she wants them to find love just like she did, she wants them to be happy..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sanam's pov.

I was in my bathroom, crying relentlessly. Ma' had tried to calm me but I couldn't. Aahil didn't want me any more. I had destroyed everything left between us.

"Sanam?" Seher called behind the door. I got up to open the door.

"Oh no.." She said before engulfing me into a hug. I broke into tears as she patted my back.

"Sanam please don't cry." She said and I tried to stop my tears but I just couldn't.

"How is it possible to be this hurt Seher? He doesn't love me, he plays with my feelings and I can't stop thinking about how he always do this. He has done anything but hurting me."

"Sh don't cry for him. You love him but soon you will forget about him. Ma' has told me about the guy abbu and her have chosen for you. I have already met him and believe me, he's the kindest man I have ever met. I have already talked to them and we agreed that if you don't want to marry him they will accept your decision because what we want is your happiness." Seher said and I was sure about this. If Aahil didn't love me, I wouldn't spend my time crying about him. I would meet the man ma' aur abbu had chosen for me. We would spend time together and if he was able to make me fall for him then.. I wiped my tears away and I left the room with Seher. When I arrived in the dining room, my parents and badi ammi were looking at me with sadness but I smiled at them.

"Kya hua? Have you seen a ghost?" I asked then I giggled. They looked at me worried as I sat next to Antara.

Aahil's pov.

"Look Aahil, I know that you love Sanam, but you'll end up killing each other. You can't stop drinking alcohol and you hook up with every girl you meet. As for Sanam, she has killed your ammi. You said that it was an accident but do you really think that you can forget her for killing your mother?" Maya said and I rubbed my forehead.

"I think it's better for you to forget each other." She added. I left the room upset, thinking about it.

"It's so easy to say it but I can't forget about you Sanam. I can't forget our kisses, your scent, your angelic face.. I would tell you my real feelings if I could protect you from myself but I can't." I stayed in front of my window imagining Sanam with me.

Few hours later.

Seher and Rehaan were sitting in a bench quietly. Rehaan had wrapped his hands around her petite waist and he was smelling her hair. They had a sweet smell of pomegranate.

"Rehaan, I think we should do something for Aahil and Sanam." Seher said and Rehaan just hummed.

"I mean, it's possible that Sanam falls in love with her future husband but she would miss this thing she shares with Aahil. They love each other that sure but it seems like they're too blind to realize it. I mean he's the one who can't see it!"

"I'll try to put some sense in Aahil's head. But I can't be sure to manage to make him realize his love for Sanam."

"I'll try to stop this wedding. Even if the groom seems perfect for Sanam, she won't be happy with him. I eventually asked her to meet him." Seher declared and Rehaan kissed her forehead. Seher was the kindest woman he had ever met and he was happy to claim her as his soon.

"I love you Seher." He said.

"I love you Rehaan." Seher declared blushing. They stayed like this for a while just sharing a peaceful moment together. Seher remembered how in front of her parents he had decided to marry her.

Flashback.

"Mr and Mrs Khan, actually, the reason why I came here is the fact that I fell in love." Rehaan said and Seher who was behind her parents and badi ammi blushed. Zoya smiled while Asad glared at him. He still couldn't accept that his daughters weren't little girls any more.

"I know that being the son of Tanveer, you may refuse it but I love your daughter Seher Ahmed Khan. And I want to marry her." He said and Zoya and Asad stayed there freaking out the poor Rehaan with their silence.

"Rehaan, don't blame yourself for what your mother did. I agree with this wedding only if Seher and Mr Khan are agreeing as well." Zoya said and Dilshad nodded. She too was okay with this wedding.

"You may realise that you're taking my baby from me, right?" Asad said with a stern look. Rehaan gulped a bit frightened.

"Seher tell me, do you want to marry him?" He then asked to his daughter. Seher looked at Rehaan and she couldn't say no. Her soul and body were dying for him.

"Ji haan." Seher said shyly and Asad smirked.

"Welcome into the family then." Asad said and Zoya gripped his hand tightly while Seher and Rehaan were smiling like fools.

End of flashback.



Zoya's pov.

I was cutting some cucumbers when I felt an unbearable pain in my stomach. I gripped my belly tightly fearing that I was losing the baby.

"As..Asad.." I said while tears were streaming down my face. Antara came running towards me and she held my hand.

"Kya hua ammi?" She asked worried. I fell on my knees due to the pain. I didn't want my baby to see me like this but it was hurting so bad.

"Please..baby, go call someone for help." I said as I felt myself like I was going to faint. She let my hand go and left.

"As..Asad.." I whispered then I felt on the ground and everything went dark.

Chapter 4

Edited by Perriewinkle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Amazing update
Loved reading it
Aahil and sanam both miserable without each other. Hope they sort out all the differences before sanam's marriage
Seher and rehan were very cute. Loved the flashback
But the end was cliffy
Hope zoya and the baby are fine
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice update
Sanam decided to move on. Maya brainwashed aahil & he thought whatever he did was right. Seher told Rehan to do something for them as they wont be happy with out each other. Rehan talk to Asya abt his wedding was nice. They agreed. Zoya was in pain. Hope she & baby was fine. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Wonderfull update
Sahil in so much pain
Seher comforting sanam
Asya accepted sehaan's relationship
Maya playing with Ahil's mind
Cliff hanger
Plz continue soon :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
zoya losing baby
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Omg
Plz plz don't make zoya lose her baby
Wow love how Rehan face the lion ask for his daughter
Ahil needs to stop being an idiot
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update

Loved reading it
Aahil and sanam both miserable without each other. Hope they sort out all the differences before sanam's marriage
Seher and rehan were very cute. Loved the flashback
But the end was cliffy
Hope zoya and the baby are fine
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

Sorry for the Cliffhanger 😳, I promise everything will be alright 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Sanam decided to move on. Maya brainwashed aahil & he thought whatever he did was right. Seher told Rehan to do something for them as they wont be happy with out each other. Rehan talk to Asya abt his wedding was nice. They agreed. Zoya was in pain. Hope she & baby was fine. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Actually, Sanam didn't decide to move on..You'll see why later. Don't worry, Zoya and her baby will be okay😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Wonderfull update

Sahil in so much pain
Seher comforting sanam
Asya accepted sehaan's relationship
Maya playing with Ahil's mind
Cliff hanger
Plz continue soon :-))

Thanks 😆 I think they're not ready to be together yet 😕 Seher and Sanam's bond is a loving one! Everyone is so upset about this Cliffhanger.. I'm so sorry 😳

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