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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice prologue dear
Interesting to read how will they cope up with this situation.
Waiting for story to start
Thanks for PM

Thank you 😆 I don't know yet how they'll do it but they'll be together at the end, that's for sure 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: tikit

Really interesting concept. Seems eerie though. Nice start. Poor zoya met with an accident. Do pm me the next part.

THank you! I've never written something like that. My first story "a second chance" has parts of supernatural events but not as much as this one will have 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Asad is an idiot n selfish
Zoya sud have slapped him back😡
Why d hell he always slaps her? Is dis wat his ammi taught him?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Excited for the next update!!! Awesome story. Do update soonnn ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Asad is an idiot n selfish

Zoya sud have slapped him back😡
Why d hell he always slaps her? Is dis wat his ammi taught him?

Calm down darling 😉 She'll teach him a lesson 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piapriya

Excited for the next update!!! Awesome story. Do update soonnn ..

Thank you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Perriewinkle

Calm down darling 😉 She'll teach him a lesson 😆


But I did not liked Asad slapping Zoya dat also its not 1st time which was hard to digest. He is not concerned abt wat he himself did last night. He needs to learn 4m his last mistake n understand how not to raise hand on a woman.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Super duper start. Liking the story line. Abit eerie though. Can't wait for u to continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

Super duper start. Liking the story line. Abit eerie though. Can't wait for u to continue!

Thank you! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome first part
Sounds interesting
Update soon

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