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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Very interesting start

Loved the chapter in its entire
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start
Loved it
But it has some typing mistakes as u used Zoya name instead of humeira.
Story was interesting
Liked the way they treated haseena & chand bi. Alarm scene was nice
Update soon plz
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Thank u😊

D name mistake was in prologue but I corrected it in d 1st part. We all r used to only read AsYa stories na so it happens😆.

Dat Ayaan shutting them up scene is inspired 4m Fashion movie where a stupid aunty asks Samir Soni's character's mom abt his marriage n whether he is gay amusingly n then he asks her abt her daughter who shifted in London after marriage n her divorce making d aunty go away 4m there. So, tuk dat scene idea😆. Ayaan was hurt to see his aapi n jeeju hurt n fighting for him so he shut their mouth to make them happy n smile😃.

Alarm scene was supposed to be funny😆
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well written...
thanks for the pm...
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Hmmm didn't read this.
Saw it in pms.
Though of reading but forgot

Good plot again.
Dearie awesome
But mostly ur precape r thrilling
Loved it

N yes title??
Kaho na pyaar hai.
HUM tum bande pyaar ki dori se.

Ayaan accident and face changed?
Is this the real plot?
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Part 2

"Good morning, Sir," said d interns n other employees.

"Good morning," said Samar.

Samar lukd at d interns n smiled.

"1st of all, I will introduce myself. Then, I wud like u all interns to introduce urselves," said Samar wid a smile, "I am Samar Akhtar, owner of SA Fashion House. SA stands for my name. I am 25 years old. I am interested in fashion designing 4m 15 years."

All d employees smiled n clapped for him. Samar signaled d interns to introduce themselves by waving his hand at them.

"I am Imraan Hussein," said Imraan.

"I am Ayaan Farooqui," said Ayaan.

"I am Sameera Kapoor," said Sameera.(Let at least 1 person be Hindu)

"I am Humeira Siddiqui," said Humeira.

"I am Tanveer Beg," said Tanveer.

"I am Farhaan Mirza," said Farhan.

"Nice to meet u all," said Samar wid a smile, "Since its ur 1st day, we will only photos n videos of different works of fashion designers but 4m 2mrw we will work hard."

"Yes Sir," said all d interns unanimously.

D day went fast wid interns just talking n watching photos n videos of several fashion designers. They liked Samar as fashion designer n their boss. As it was their 1st day, d interns were allowed to go home in d afternoon instead of in d evening.

Scene shifts to KV. Ayaan comes home.

"How was ur 1st day?" asked Dilshad.

"It was awesome but a chudail irritated me," replied Ayaan.

"Who chudail?" asked Zoya.

Ayaan narrated them abt Humeira. Everyone burst out laughing.

"Wats there to laugh?" asked Ayaan, "Ek to bachao aur uppar se blame karo."

"Kaam k pehle hi din ek ladki se jhagda," teased Dilshad.

"Don't tease me, Aunty. She is so irritating," said Ayaan wid a pout.

"U will have to see dat chudail everyday," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"I know," said Ayaan wid a sulk look.

Scene shifts to SM.

"How was ur 1st day?" asked Razia.

"It was very nice but a bandar irritated me," replied Ayaan.

"How come a bandar come in ur office?" asked Rahat confusingly.

"I am not talking abt dat bandar but a man," replied Humeira.

"Which man?" asked Haya.

Humeira narrated them abt Ayaan. Everyone burst out laughing.

"Humi, dat guy wud have really saved u. U sud not blame him," said Razia.

"But ammi, he made me fall down after catching me," said Humeira.

"Cuz u were blaming him so he did a prank," said Gaffur.

"U both r supporting a boy u did not met," said Humeira.

"We r not supporting him but teln wat actually wud have happened," said Razi.a

"U will have to see dat bandar everyday," said Rahat wid a laugh.

"I know," said Humeira wid a sulk look.

In d evening, Zoya goes to d mall wid Najma n Ayaan. Humeira too had come to d same mall wid Haya. Both d families were unaware of each other's presence. While Humeira was walking after shopping, her trolley wid things gets bumped wid Ayaan's trolley. Some of their things falls down on d floor. They got down to pick their things. Zoya, Najma n Haya were not around. Both r shocked n annoyed to see each other.

"Youuu?" asked Ayaan n Humeira shockingly to each other at d same time.

"Can't see u while walking?" asked Humeira annoyingly.

"I want to u ask u the same," replied Ayaan annoyingly.

Zoya, Najma n Haya spotted them n went near them to help them pick up d things.

"U made my trolley fall along wid d things," said Humeira.

"U made my trolley n things fall," said Ayaan.

"You did dat," said Humeira.

"Its ur fault," said Ayaan.

"Ayaan, wats going on?" asked Zoya.

"Humeira, wats happening?" asked Haya.

"Aapi, she is dat chudail 4m d office," replied Ayaan.

"Bhabhi, he is dat bandar 4m d office," replied Humeira.

"U called me chudail?" asked Humeira annoyingly.

"Sorry, I insulted chudails," replied Ayaan coolly.

"Shut up, u bandar," said Humeira wid irritation.

"Don't call me bandar," said Ayaan wid irritation.

"Bandar ko bandar nahi to kya kahu?" asked Humeira coolly.

"Shut up, u chudail," said Ayaan wid irritation.

"Shut up, both of u. Stop fighting like kids," said Haya.

"He made my trolley fall," said Humeira.

"She did it," said Ayaan.

"Guys, stop it," said Najma, "Stop fighting now."

"Lets go," said Zoya, "(lukn at Haya n Humeira)Sorry for d trouble."

"Its okay, sister," said Haya n asked, "I am Haya, Humeira's bhabhi. Wats ur name?"

"I am Zoya, Ayaan's aapi," replied Zoya.

"I am Najma, Ayaan's jeeju's sister," said Najma.

They talked for some more time while Ayaan n Humeira were shocked dat while calming them down they started talking wid each other as if they r friends 4m ages. Zoya, Najma n Haya exchanged their mobile numbers. Humeira n Haya got to know dat Ayaan lives in his sister's in-laws house but they did not even thought of ridiculing him.

"Well, we will talk often. Do come at our house," said Haya.

"Iss bandar ko saath mat laana," said Humeira.

"Humi, don't say like dis," said Haya.

"Aapi, iss chudail ko humaare ghar kabhi na aane dena," said Ayaan.

"Ayaan, don't say like dis," said Zoya.

Everyone left for their homes after some more talking.

Next morning, in SA Imraan n Tanveer were standing in line at d cafeteria to get coffee for themselves. Imraan was standing just before Tanveer. After Imraan got his coffee, he turned n accidently spill some of his hot coffee on Tanveer's hand making her shriek.

"I am so so so sorry, Tanveer," said Imraan in panic.

He tuk a tissue n started wiping off d coffee off her hand.

"I did not meant to do it. I am sorry. Is it still hurting?" asked Imraan.

"A little. But its okay. I know u did it by accident," replied Tanveer.

"Okay, give ur order now," said Imraan.

Tanveer also ordered a coffee for herself.

"Our friends have still not come," said Imraan.

"There is still some time left for d office to start. So, lets sit 2gthr n talk while we have our coffee," suggested Tanveer.

"Good idea," said Imraan wid a smile.

Tanveer also smiled. They went to a table n sat opposite each other.

"U were in Mumbai only na before we met?" asked Imraan.

"Yes," replied n asked, "Why?"

"I never saw u & ur friends before," replied Imraan.

"Same here," said Tanveer n asked, "U were in which college?"

"St. Xavier's," replied Imraan n asked, "You?"

"Wilson," replied Humeira.

Just then, their friends came there. They were surprised to find them 2gthr.

"We did not knew u guys r here 2gthr," said Ayaan.

"We both were here early n ordering our coffee so we decided to sit 2gthr waiting for u guys," said Imraan.

"Ohh," said Sameera.

"Well, then sit 2gthr n talk till d office starts," said Farhaan.

"Others too ordered wat they want n sat wid them.

"How do u all like Samar Sir?" asked Sameera.

"He is very nice n hard-working," replied Tanveer.

"I wish we too bcum famous like him," said Imraan.

"He seems so decent n respectable man," said Humeira.

"Right," said Ayaan.

Dis is d 1st time Ayaan n Humeira agreed on sumthn.

"For d 1st time, u both guys agreed on sumthn widout any arguments," said Farhaan.

Ayaan n Humeira lukd at each other but did not said anything. Even though they agreed on sumthn, they had no idea how they will be proved wrong one day.

Scene shifts to a bedroom of a large house. A man was naked wid a girl. They were having sex while moaning in pleasure. D man was revealed to be none other than Samar.

"U were awesome," said Samar giving her a bundle of notes.

"Wen can we meet again?" asked d girl seductively.

"Never. I think 5 times was enough for a struggling model like u to have fun wid a famous fan like me," replied Samar coolly, "Very less girls get more than 2 chances to sleep wid me & u r one of them. So, consider urself as lucky. I think I am bored of u now."

"Fine," said d girl wid a reluctant smile.

D girl dressed up n left. Samar too got dressed for d office.

"I sud not be late since I own SA," said Samar as he got into his car.

Dis was one of Samar Akhtar's reality. He wud sleep wid random girls. He wud lure them wid better offers due to which some slept wid him unwillingly while some willingly as they felt privileged to sleep wid d great Samar Akhtar. There r more secrets of him.

Samar reached d office. He greeted everyone n then sat wid interns. He talked abt some project which they had to do. Everyone listened to him wid concentration.

"It will be a 2 member team project. So, I will make pairs for d same. D pairs r Farhaan-Sameera, Imraan-Tanveer n Ayaan-Humeira," said Samar.

Imraan n Tanveer smiled to themselves for being paired wid each other. Farhaan n Sameera had no problem wid each other. But Ayaan n Humeira were shocked.

"Sir, I don't want to be paired wid Ayaan," said Humeira.

"Plz Sir, change our pairs," requested Ayaan.

"Dis is ur project so u both sud forget all ur differences n work 2gthr. I don't know why u both have problems wid each other but u both sud adjust wid each other," said Samar.

"Okay Sir," said Ayaan n Humeira 2gthr reluctantly.

"U all will get 2 weeks to complete ur project. All d best," said Samar.

"Thank u, Sir," said all d interns unanimously.

"I will have to tolerate dis chudail for 2 weeks," said Ayaan in mind.

"I will have to tolerate dis bandar for 2 weeks," said Humeira in mind.

"Now, all d pairs sit wid each other n discuss ur project," said Samar.

D interns got up 4m their seats n sat wid their partners. Samar gave each pair some briefing on wat they have to do in their project which d interns listened carefully.

Precap: #Ayaan n Humeira wud bicker wid each other while doing their project.

#Humeira came to Ayaan's house for their project. Unfortunately, Haseena n Chand were at home. They started commenting on Humeira's short dress n how Ayaan sud be away 4m a girl like her. Ayaan was furious but he said witty lines to them saying how they sud stop chewing paan as it has lots of nicotine in them n how they sud stop wearing more make-up otherwise they will get more pimples. He then tells Humeira calmly to come to his room.


A/N: I revealed Samar's one of the dark sides in this part itself. But will reveal others at proper time. I got my title for the story which is Kaho Naa Pyaar Hai. It is suggested by Aslesha😊.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome :)
nice precap :)
please update soon :)
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awesome!👏
continue it soonish!😳

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