AsYa(KaBhi) FF 'You Are Mine' Ch.7 updated,pg 50-(28/04) - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Interesting Update Di...👏

So both Asad and Zoyaa were informed about their alliance and in a way I guess Zoya is ready for it tooo...but this is going to be a hard road ahead for Zoya...because Asadd still love that Ridz...😡
Coming to the other thing...I enjoy the talks between Humeira and Zoya in this story...😆.., Zoya and Dilshad's part was nice too...
Continue soonishh...


Thank you so much Champ 😊
Zoya is kinda ready for it...and yes...a hard road for her...and it will for Asad too...
haha...don't hate my Ridz...coz she is going to...well m not going to reveal much 😆
I am happy you enjoyed...
will try to continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91



oh like that 😆 but it's ok main bhi kayi baar yahi karti hun super lazy😆

Hmm... well justified hai i mean it's not like u can't experience love more than once...I was just confused over will Asad b able 2 love her completely cuz if not that will b wrong 2wards Zoya, why should she bear d pain but i hope u'll write in such way that hame shikat ka muka na mile😆

Great i m loking 4ward 4 Hakikat than 😆... also bcuz mujhe sad stories pasand nahi this story will b in bottom of all stories I read by u😆 logic samajh aa gya hoga na🤣

What Depu hope bhi de rahi hai & Zoya ka sacrifice keh ke dra bhi rahi hai😆




hehe...but maine hold kiya coz I want to know ki if readers want to read or not...but then I thought chalo kar deti hu update...though I wasn't in a mood in updating looking at the response...

You are right...it's not like ke pyaar ek hi bar hota hai...though it's hard to love again when you got betrayal once...But still it can happen...and Asad will love Zoya trully...it will be difficult for him but he won't be able to hold himself for long...
well...shikayat ka mauka...I doubt...coz I don't know readers kaise react karenge...to some plots...but still I will try to make it interesting by adding some QH plots like...wo Zoya end up in jail then wo CD wala incident...will not use ditto that scene but like that...
Haan Hakikat I am trying to complete but not able to write down the way I want...but will complete that soon for sure...
Me too not much into sad stories...but this plot I want to explore for some reason...
I get the logic...and hope aapka yeh opinion change ho...with progress of the story...
hahaha...darna mana hai...if you know me better 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Love it

Continue soon
Love it


Thank you dear
will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Prinky-



hehe...but maine hold kiya coz I want to know ki if readers want to read or not...but then I thought chalo kar deti hu update...though I wasn't in a mood in updating looking at the response...

You are right...it's not like ke pyaar ek hi bar hota hai...though it's hard to love again when you got betrayal once...But still it can happen...and Asad will love Zoya trully...it will be difficult for him but he won't be able to hold himself for long...
well...shikayat ka mauka...I doubt...coz I don't know readers kaise react karenge...to some plots...but still I will try to make it interesting by adding some QH plots like...wo Zoya end up in jail then wo CD wala incident...will not use ditto that scene but like that...
Haan Hakikat I am trying to complete but not able to write down the way I want...but will complete that soon for sure...
Me too not much into sad stories...but this plot I want to explore for some reason...
I get the logic...and hope aapka yeh opinion change ho...with progress of the story...
hahaha...darna mana hai...if you know me better😆



awe I know Depu different concept hai & jaie hardcore Asyashippers hum sab hain so aisi stories likhna kaafi risky hota hai 😆 ... chalo good u updated & response yaar sabke saath ho raha hai so koi fayda nahi zyada soch ke 😆
Not only betrayl agar sache man se or we can say Pyaar boht gehra ho tab bhi it's diffecult 2 fall in love but more than accept it ki we fell in love again so I think yeh angle bhi u'll use 😉
LOL I know ab subject aisa hai kuch unlikely scenes toh ayege hi koi ni main skip karke pad lungi 🤣 acha those Zoya secne Saadi ke baad honge poor Zoya achi class lagegi uski... usually Saas Bahu fights hote hai yahan Miyan biwi ka honge 😆
Koi ni take ur time I just reminded u taaki bhool na jaaye 😆
Han dekhte hain but filhaal ke liye it's in d bottom 😆
You didn't wrote any such story so main still confuse hun 😆
Chalo see ya & TC 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Let the story progress the way you thought
i am sure you have thought well before updating
but give some happy moments between that
and happy ending
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91



awe I know Depu different concept hai & jaie hardcore Asyashippers hum sab hain so aisi stories likhna kaafi risky hota hai 😆 ... chalo good u updated & response yaar sabke saath ho raha hai so koi fayda nahi zyada soch ke 😆
Not only betrayl agar sache man se or we can say Pyaar boht gehra ho tab bhi it's diffecult 2 fall in love but more than accept it ki we fell in love again so I think yeh angle bhi u'll use 😉
LOL I know ab subject aisa hai kuch unlikely scenes toh ayege hi koi ni main skip karke pad lungi 🤣 acha those Zoya secne Saadi ke baad honge poor Zoya achi class lagegi uski... usually Saas Bahu fights hote hai yahan Miyan biwi ka honge 😆
Koi ni take ur time I just reminded u taaki bhool na jaaye 😆
Han dekhte hain but filhaal ke liye it's in d bottom 😆
You didn't wrote any such story so main still confuse hun 😆
Chalo see ya & TC 😃


Hey me too hardcore AsYashippers se hi belong karti hu...😆 that's why I told you darna mana hai😆
hmm...I know aur main sochti bhi nahi jyada...I am happy with some of loyal readers who always manage to read & review...but still sometimes we expect na...
Fall in Love again...it depends on many things you know...if I start to discuss I don't know where it will go...bottom line is it's not easy but it may happen...when you meet someone who make you see the beauty of this world all over again...differently...wholeheartedly...
haha...yes Miya biwi fights...
na na...main na bhoolungi...😆
well...I will try my best to change your opinion😃
hehe...that's why I told you not to fear...😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

Let the story progress the way you thought
i am sure you have thought well before updating
but give some happy moments between that
and happy ending
update soon


You know I am so happy that some of you are interested and want to read this story...thank you for always there with your lovely comments
and yes...I have thought about whole plot...and I will go with the original concept only but with little differently...of course with happy moments...and promise for happy ending 😊
will come with next part soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Honestly i always loved your cup of coffie most
but the last coffe and this story becomes my favourite ones
i just love both of these
bcs these srories forced me to comment regulary
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Prinky-



Hey me too hardcore AsYashippers se hi belong karti hu...😆that's why I told you darna mana hai😆
hmm...I know aur main sochti bhi nahi jyada...I am happy with some of loyal readers who always manage to read & review...but still sometimes we expect na...
Fall in Love again...it depends on many things you know...if I start to discuss I don't know where it will go...bottom line is it's not easy but it may happen...when you meet someone who make you see the beauty of this world all over again...differently...wholeheartedly...
haha...yes Miya biwi fights...
na na...main na bhoolungi...😆
well...I will try my best to change your opinion😃
hehe...that's why I told you not to fear...😆



Bas jo sunna hai sun liya ab I can stop worrying 😆 😆
that's a good approach Depu & I totally understand but khair chalo chodo 😆
Han I meat d same Depu bas convey theek se nahi hua shaayad 😆
& I m looking 4ward 2 these fights but only nok jhok 😳
or ye hi acha bhi hoga 😉
bola na now I m not too scared u ne bol diya na Asyashipper bas wahi kafi hai 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful!!!

Continue soon!! 😃

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