AsYa(KaBhi) FF 'You Are Mine' Ch.7 updated,pg 50-(28/04)

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sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

I know I am too much..
But plzz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: sasir
Nice..
Loved it..
Eagerly waiting to know what happens..
N how they will end up..Together or not...
Is the kid asya only Na waiting for that update ..
Plz continue soon

Thank you so much dear

yes...they will end up together only...

Okay...let me give you some hope...yes kid is AsYa's only...but still I don't know how you readers will react when that track will come in the story...

will continue soon...😊

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: fatima30
Such a lovely update

I'm worried about Asad though...
It would be good if Ridz came in his life again and she's evil so he can really hate her...

I don't want to see my bubbly Zoya crying...she's falling in love with him

Thank you for the PM
Looking forward to the next update

Thank you so much Fatima 😊

Yes...Ridz will come back but...she is not evil...thats what I can say right now...

me too can''t see my Zoya crying...but it's needed in some track...

Edited by -Prinky- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: -jerry-
L❤️ved It

Thank you dear 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: MissSparkling
nice..

Thank you dear 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update dear
Loved it
Liked dilshad Zoya scene.
Asya met again but this time she wanted his help to reach hospital.
Asad was restless as his mother wanted him to settle in his life. Shaad & Asad talks was good. Waiting for next update soon.
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much Asif

I am glad you like it

will try to update soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Wow such a quick update...
I loved this part deepti...

Very very interesting...

Zoya's feelings were so well described...

And asad's past definitely will create a lot of problems for him in his present...

Nikaah to hoga Asya ka...

But I am sure Ridz must be having a valid reason leaving him...

But she will only return to create havoc in Asya life.
And the prologue still haunting me.

Hey Tehs...how r u??

haha...actually I delayed in posting this...part 2 & 3 ek sath likhe the...so you got it quickly

hmm...past will definitely create havoc...when Zoya will meet Ridz...and I am repeating it again...Rida is not evil...lets see what she will do...

prologue ko to abhi bohat time hai...lets focus now on the beginning of AsYa's story

Thank you so much for lovely comment 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: sasir
I know I am too much..
But plzz update soon

Hey...you already waiting for next...

okay let me start writing the next part...will try to come soon dear 😊

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Interesting Update Di...👏

So both Asad and Zoyaa were informed about their alliance and in a way I guess Zoya is ready for it tooo...but this is going to be a hard road ahead for Zoya...because Asadd still love that Ridz...😡

Coming to the other thing...I enjoy the talks between Humeira and Zoya in this story...😆.., Zoya and Dilshad's part was nice too...

Continue soonishh...

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Hey Jas Darling 🤗
jaldi...actually both part 2 &3 ek sath likhe the maine...still I delayed in updating
Hmm...yes...you r right...at this point...coz he loved Rida immensely...it's going to be difficult for him to love someone again...but at some point he will start feeling for Zoya but he wont be able to accept it...there will be many reasons...i can't reveal it now...and many unexpected things will happen too...i don't know how readers will take that all...but still with all up and downs their relation will progress for sure...but then again something will happen...and that will be the test for Zoya and Asad too...
Do SACRIFICE for your love...but DON'T SACRIFICE LOVE itself...this one line i read somewhere and the story is all about this fact only...lets see who will sacrifice...
I just hope the story will turn out the way I thought...

Haha...Hakikat...there are only 2 parts and will try to update both ek sath 😊

# he is Rida's Asad now...but when he will be Zoya's...he will forever be hers only...I thought to give you some hope 😆
but still it will be Zoya's decision then...lets see what she will do...Sacrifice or...??? 😆

oh like that 😆 but it's ok main bhi kayi baar yahi karti hun super lazy😆

Hmm... well justified hai i mean it's not like u can't experience love more than once...I was just confused over will Asad b able 2 love her completely cuz if not that will b wrong 2wards Zoya, why should she bear d pain but i hope u'll write in such way that hame shikat ka muka na mile😆

Great i m loking 4ward 4 Hakikat than 😆... also bcuz mujhe sad stories pasand nahi this story will b in bottom of all stories I read by u😆 logic samajh aa gya hoga na🤣

What Depu hope bhi de rahi hai & Zoya ka sacrifice keh ke dra bhi rahi hai😆