ASYA OS:EMBRACING MY BEAUTIFUL FUTURE

Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Edited by -ABI- - 9 years ago

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

res

unres..

beautifully written...

loved ur os..

Asad's past, zoya's memories with him in childhood, thunder wala scene...amazing

Adorable asya😳

thanxs for pm.

Edited by kadia717 - 9 years ago

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

This was such a cute OS! Loved the plot...it had everything in such a short story. You really write well!

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

This was seriously such a beautiful os

Loved the whole plot of it

Actually was gripping with many twists and turns

Flawless work

Thanks for the pm😊

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing update dear

thanx fr d pm

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

OMG this was fantastic and fabulous the story was very intriguing,full of twists and turns

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Aleena

@aleena008

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

wow...it really was a heart touching story...loved it...I really missed reading ur works... 🤗 DO WRITE MORE...&&&thanks 4 the pm...

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 9 years ago

omg am I dreaming!!!!!!?
it is a pleasant surprise to see your pm ...
loved this OS...
mostly from zoya's pov...
asad',s jelousy over ayan...then their childhood memory...
asad's drowsy state...that was best part...
asad's past nd nightmare s...
rain sequence... his fear to loose her..
then the end was perfect...
keep writing... nd update marked by him too