ASYA MOHABBATH KE BINA ZINDAGI ADHOORI part 14 page 35 11 oct 2016 - Page 2

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She returns by evening sees that Dilshad and najma have not come and asad roo door is opened. She peeps into his room n listens to him

Asad: haan, main kya karoom,mein pehale jaise baath nahi kar saktha hoon, pehale ammi aur najma aane thak mein baath kartha tha, par ab koyi aur bhi humare saath rehrahe hain, samjha karo yaar, mein mantha hoon ki tumAustralia jaa rahe ho,aur hum 1 saal thak mil nahi paayenge, par ab mahaul teek nahi hai

Zoya listens till this n leaves

Asad: Ayaan, mera baath suno, tum Australia javo, mein skype karoonga, ok bye

{

note:

Asad n Ayaan always meet up in asad house after najma n dilshad leave. But since zoya is staying, asad fears that zoya will tell his ammi abt his meeting with Ayaan n asks him to leave.

Ayaan is leving to Australia for an year, internship.

Zoya doesn't know that asad is speaking to Ayaan n mistakens him that he is speaking to some girlfriend}

Zoya mv: arrey phupi tho ithni achi hai, tho e mr.khan kyun is ladki ke bare mein chupa rahe hain , patha nahi, mein bhi nahi bathathi hoon

Zoya prepares food for all n is baking cake. Asad comes out of room n sees zoya mixing cake contents in sofa

Asad: miss. Farooqui, aap ye mixng vagera kyun na kichen mein karein

Zoya: ahi meri style hai mr.khan

Asad receives a call n he leaves his presentation cd on table.

Zoya remembers abt her family in nyc and puts the cd in cake mixtue n bakes it

Asad returns after a call n he searches for his presentation cd. At the same time , najma n dilshad arrives.

Zoya: meine sab ke liye cake banaya. Bas 2 min

Dilshad sees asad searching smething.

Dilsha: doond kya rahe ho beta

Asad: meri cd ammi

Zoya: baad mein doondiye cd, ak kaayiye cake

Asad: mujhe cake nahi pasandh.

Zoya face falls down, dil asks asad to stay.

Zoya brings the cake, it is a nice cake she takes selfies with cake.

Zoya gives knife to najma.

Najma tries cutting, but cake is not cut n later they see cd

On seeing cd inside cake

Asad: meine bola tha appse kitchen mein cake ki mixture lagaiye pa nahi aap kabi ksi aur ki baath maananege , nahi naa musibat magnet

Zoya: tho ithni imp thi tho table par kyun rakha

Asad shouts n goes off. He makes another cd from saved data n leave.asad comes late,by that time all have dinner and have slept.

Next morning,

Zoya makes coffe for asad as she felt bad that she spoiled his cd.

She enters his room n hears his voice in skype with a girl.she sees girls face in asad mirror whichis facing laptop

Asad: no, I cannot leave my mom n sister

Margy: par I came al the way from Australia to ndia n u break my diil(deal)

Asad: I am sorry, I know my mom wants only my happiness, but she will not be happy . sorry. You check out from ur hotel California n leave to Sydney. I am so sorry

Zoya leaves without giving coffe

Zoya mv: ab samajh aa raha hai, he was talking with firangi yesterday, mr.khan loves a foreigner n he fearsthat phupi wont agree. I will convince phupi n make her accept that firsngi as her bahu.zoya changes her dress n goes to hotel California n makes margy wear a indian suit brings her to khan villa

Asad comes to dining hall, he notices zoya absence

Asad: ammi, zoya kahan hai

Dilshad: patha nahi beta, subah se kahan hai patha nahi chala

Asad: ye ladki na ammi mjh epagal bana degi

The bell rings n asad opens te door, he is shocked to see margy in a salwar

Zoya: hatiye mrkhan, mein apke liye aik farishtha bankaraayi hoon

Zoya enters house with margy

Margy says salaam waalekum

Dil: uzoya , ye kaun hai beta, tumhari frnd kya, bahuth sankari hai

Zoya: meri friend nahi phupi, aapki bahu , I meam mr.khan ki irlfiend

Asad: ye kya badtameezi hai miss farooqui

Zoya: mr.khan abrayiye math, mein hoon na

Haan phupi, mr.khan inse pyaar karthe hain, n margy came to india for mr.khan , but mr.khan feared that u might say a no for this and broke her dil

Dilshad is shocked n she asks margy

Dilsha: is she saying truth margy

Margy, ya , asad broke my diiil.

Dilshad: ye kya kiya asad, I never expected this from u, I want ur happiness only beta, if u love her then don't have a problem in that, I accept her as my daughter in law

Margy: daughter in law, what are u saying mrs.khan, I am already married, how can I marry asad

Zoya , najma n dilshad: aap/tum ek shaadi shuda aurath se pyaar karthe hain / ho mr.khan/bhai/asad

Asad:ammi, aap inki bakwas math suniye, in did break her deal not dil ammi, margy wants me to work in joint venture, for which I will have to stay abroad for 2 yrs, she came here to convince me

Margy: ya, asad u broke my deal

Zoya shuts her eyes in embarrassment. Asad asks margy to leave n glares at zoya

Asad: aap samajthi kya hai, apni aap ko miss farooqui, aap na ek number ki pagal aurath hai, jo deal aur dil ki faraq nahi samajh sakthi hain, patha nahi aapse nikah karne vala zindagi mein kithna pachthayega

Dilshad n najma finds the whole scene funny.dilshad gives zoya affidavit n she herself takes zoya to pancard n rto office as she is sure that asad wont do this work

Since dilshad is lawyer, they promise to give pancard in a week, n from zoya international license, zoya license will come in 3 days.

Zoya in these three days goes to 10 mosque with najma as she had holiday , n takes photo of mosque n she searches for her ammi n abbu tomb. But she cannot find them.

That day is Sunday, n she receives her license inn post

All are having breakfast

Zoya: ab se mein kudh drive karoongi n nahjma ko bhi pareshan nahi karoongi

Naj: tum meri bff ho, aur tum mujhe bilkulpareshan nahi kar rahi ho zoya

Dil: acha beta, portio mein jo car hai use le lo

Zoya: nahi phupi, jiju ne mere liye already car book kar lie hain, brand new AUDI, aaj register hokar ayega, aur dekhiyega phupi, mein kisi ko bina taker mare kaise gadi chalahi hoon

Najma: audi, zoya kya aap mujhe car chalana sikhayengi, bhaijaan ke paas time nahi hai , scooty tho bahuth din lage kyunki unke paas furzat nahi hoti hai

Zoya: why fear when zoya is here, mein tumhe sikhavoongi

Asad: najma, inhe paidal chalna hi nahi aatha hia, kahin na khai girthi rahethi hI, meri suno zoya se gadi chalna math sikho

Zoya : mr.khan kya mathlab mujhe paisla calna nahi aatha , aapne dekhe kya

Asad: haan, apko yaad nahi zoya n smirks

Dilshad n njama thinks abt their 1st meeting

{

Zoyafb:

Yesterday bight, zoya was not feeling sleepy n she came to backyard, there she sees asad sitting in a bench. So, she goes n makes cold coffe( apko patha chal jayega cold coffe kyun) for both of them

She approaches asad n by mistake she collides with a stone n falls down with the coffee falling on asad night dress( ab patha chala kyun cold cffee n not hot , arey bechare ka skin jal jaatha , phir romance nahi daant hi sunegi na bechari zoya)

Asad: ye apne kya kiya missfarooqui n he goes to his room

Zoya smaks her head n follows him

Asad removes his dress n puts it on floor, he is abt to remove his pants

Zoya barges into his room, strikes her leg with his bed n falls on asad and both end up in bed.

Asad and zoya are lst in eah others eyes ( mitwa plays)

Message on asad mobile breaks their moment, zoya gets up n asad also. She takes a step, n her leg tangles with asad clothes n she falls once again, n asad catches her by holding her waist n zoya keeps her hand on his bare chest, zoya n asad feels butterfly in their stomach with close proximity.

Zoya cheeks turns red colour with blush, asad sees this n comes near her ear n whispers

Asad in husky tone: aaj tak mujhe laga apko sadak par chalna nahi aatha hai, par ab patha chala aapko chalna hi nahi aatha hai miss farooqui

This breaks zoya thinking n she goes to her room murmuring kadoos kahike

Asad smiles at her n says pagal ladki

Fb ends

}

At the same time, door bell brings zoya from her thoughts, she goes n recievs the audi key.

Zoya: ab mera car bhi aa chukka hai, license bhi, kya hum sab ek saath kahin film par jaa sakthe hain meri car mein, pls phupi

Dilshad agrees, najma is excited, zoya turns towards asad

Zoya: mr.khan aap bhi aayiye pls

Asad: zaroor aavonga miss farooqui

Dilshad n najma are shocked as asad agreed

Asad: aur nahi tho kya, mein apke driving par bilkul barosa nahi kartha hoon , isliye mein kudh dekhoonga aap kaise gaadi chalathi hai

All get ready, asad wears a suit, zoya a skirt n top; najma n dilshad salwar

Zoya: mr.khan business meet pe nahi jaa rahe hain, pls kuch casuals pehaniye na

Dil:haan beta, pehali baar movie par ja rahe ho aur vo bhi aise kapde par

Najma: aap casuals par handsome dekhenge bhaijaan plsss

Asad comes back in blue jeans n white t shirt

Asad sits in copassenger seat

Zoya drives well , she is so careful she was not so careful even for driving test

He doesn't comment abt her driving

They reach theatre

Asad:kaunsi movie hai

Zoya : kung fu panda 2

Asad:aap apni umar ki film select kiya kya

Zoya glares at him

Zoya: ji nahi, isliye select kiya thaki aap vo dekhkar hanse , jo aap normally karthe nahi hain

but he enjoys the movie

, they reach home.

Asad: thank god, apko car chalana aatha hai, ab aap najma ko sikha sakthi hai miss farooqui n he leaves

Zoya n najma hi-fives. Dilshad smiles at both zoya n najma.

Asad turns n sees all this n his happy as he has not seen his mom n sis this happy in hs life. He realises that he has to take them out often.

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Super - Duper Amazing
Awesome Start
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nice
i like it
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Originally posted by: azsumay

nice
i like it
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lailu! tum yaha bhi??😳😆
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Nice updates.
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Nyc story
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Very nice
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Super amazing update😃loveddd it tooo good plz cont soon thanks for pm
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I just completed reading three Parts of this Story.😊
It was So Interesting and Awesome Story.😊
These Two Pars were Amazing.😊
ASYA(KABHI) nok-jhok was so Cute.😳
Dilshad Story was so sad.😭
ASYA(KABHI) car Incident was so Nice.😊
The CD was so Interesting.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Cold Coffee and their Eye lock was so Cute.😳
Asad(KSG) and Family went for a Movie and Zoya drove the car,it was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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