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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow

Love the updates
Ah sanam so much like ur father
U treat ur sister just how he was with ur mother
Omg tanveer was seeing triple at the party
And the best part is they were wearing zoya clothes
Haha tanveer faints in seher arms
Omg so sanam touched her mother calling her sister name
Aww always love Asya passion
So nikhat is coming for rahat wedding
Wonder when the reunion will happen
Continue

Thank you! Yup she's totally like Asad! Yes Tanveer got the shock of her life! 😆 AsYa passion is the best in this show! Like I love Saahil but Qubool Hai is nothing without AsYa 😲 Yes Nikhat will come! The reunion will happen in 3 chapters I think, I must check first but it's not so far 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Loved it
All 3 in the party which make tanveer shocked & fainted.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you! I think everyone agrees with me if I say that the best part is Tanveer's reaction 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
OK.. I finished reading the whole ff now...
I just want to say that u have written all the parts very beautifully..
Asad n Zoya love scenes r just sooo romantic...
In the last update Tanveer's reaction was mind blowing..
She deserves to be punishes by ASYA n her daughters...
Plzzz pm me when u update next part...
Would love to read ur other works...
~JAZ~
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

OK.. I finished reading the whole ff now...

I just want to say that u have written all the parts very beautifully..
Asad n Zoya love scenes r just sooo romantic...
In the last update Tanveer's reaction was mind blowing..
She deserves to be punishes by ASYA n her daughters...
Plzzz pm me when u update next part...
Would love to read ur other works...
~JAZ~

Oh thank you! I didn't know that I was this talented to receive all these nice comments 😆,Yes they will take revenge from Tanveer all together 😃 I'll write an Index were I'll put all my stories and I'll pm you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

No one's pov.

Aahil was going to pick water for his mother when he saw Sanam in the kitchen.

"Sanam? What are you doing here?" Zoya took the opportunity to go away and she told Asad that she was waiting for him in the backyard.

"Aahil? What are YOU doing here?" She asked.

"Well it's my house and my brother's birthday so it's normal for me to be here."

"Forget about it, I need to go." She was going to leave when he held my arm.

"Why did you kiss this boy in Punjab?" He asked. She was going to tell him that the woman he saw was Seher then she realised that he didn't deserve an explanation as he had hooked up with a girl.

"You know what? Forget about me. Don't waste your time with me. You have plenty of girls who are head over heels for you." She urned around to leave when he grabbed her arm again and he kissed her.

"There must be plenty of girls, it's still you that I want."



Zoya was looking at the scene with a grin. They were just so cute. It reminded her of her relationship with her Mr Khan. She left and waited for Asad. She had to tell him that she had found Sanam and that their daughters had reunited. While she was waiting, someone put a hand on her mouth and she was going to kick him when she realised that it was Asad.

Sanam broke the kiss and left. She couldn't be with Aahil because she feared that he would cheat on her. She loved him, but she couldn't believe that he would be faithful to her. She went outside and saw Seher. It was odd, she had a white dress instead of the red salwar kameez she was wearing earlier.

"Seher." Sanam shouted and when Seher turned around and saw Sanam in a deep purple attire, she found it odd as she remembered her having a red salwar kameez while dancing. When Sanam reached her sister, she hugged her so tight that Seher thought she was dying.

"I'm so sorry Seher. Please forgive me. I promise to try to understand you like you understand me. It's just that it's so new for me to have you. You know I have seen ammi and abbu being killed... I have seen this Tanveer and I was so scared that someone or something would take you away from me like she took our parents away from us.. I was so scared to lose you that I shut the doors of my heart for you and I'm very sorry Seher. Please forgive me.." Seher held her hand tightly and she smiled at her sister.

"I forgive you Sanam. I understand how hard it can be for you. It's hard for me too but don't worry we'll manage together because we are sisters." They hugged each other and left.

They left the place and when they were on their bed just cuddling, Zoya decided to tell him.

"Actually, Asad I have seen Sanam." Asad turned to me and grinned.

"Really?" I nodded and he hugged me. "How is she?"

"She's beyond beautiful. And I think we'll have to meet them quickly as she seems to have a fianc!"

"A fianc! My baby can't have a fianc! She's so innocent.."

"Jaan! They're almost twenty.. we missed a lot of things but insh'allah, we won't miss their nikkah." Zoya snuggled into him and she closed her eyes as she fell asleep peacefully. Her daughters were together so she wasn't preoccupied any more.

Sanam and Seher arrived at their home and Dilshad was happy to see her granddaughters. They were both dressed as her little Zoya and were back at home. Dilshad kissed them on the forehead.

"Actually girls, we have to go back to Punjab in a few weeks. Haaya will soon get engaged."

"And what about Tanveer badi ammi?" Seher asked.

"Talking about Tanveer, I didn't show you how she looks like." Dilshad searched in a drawer and ended up finding the photo.

"This is Tanveer, the one who destroyed our lives." When Seher saw her, she collapsed on the ground.

"Kya hua Seher?" Sanam asked concerned.

"Tanveer..She's Rehaan's mother!" When Dilshad heard this, she was astonished. That meant that Rehaan was probably Haaya's step-brother. And regarding to Sanam, she couldn't believe this. How could she fall in love with Aahil who was Tanveer's son!



Sanam left the living room and went to her room.

"Ammi how can I fall in love with Aahil when he's your killer's son?" She asked looking at her parents picture which was hanging on the wall just above her bed.

"Being his son don't make him as bad as his mother." Seher said entering her room from the window.

"How can you be so sure about this?" Sanam asked.

"Because look at us..We are both sisters but we're so much different. Plus love can change people. Do you remember what badi ammi said? Tanveer's love for power and money made her kill her own best friend. Your love for Aahil is sure stronger than everything because even though you hurt each other, you still love him more than you loved him the day before."

"Thank you Seher. Thank you for being there for me."

Sanam said hugging her sister tightly.

Tanveer had finally gained her consciousness. She sat on her bed and looked around her room. She was alone.

"How can it be possible to see three Zoya at once? I am becoming crazy." She whispered and switch on the light. She almost screamed when she saw photos of Asad and Zoya on her mirror. In the centre, there was a photo of them kissing and it was written with a red ink "Love will never die" she looked closely and saw that it was blood! Then she heard a laugh. A high pitched laugh.

Najma appeared out of nowhere and sat on her bed.

"Your look it's priceless. Do you like the gift I offered you. This, she pointed the blood, it's my own blood!" Najma laughed again then she just smirked at Tanveer.

"I have to go, but don't worry. In less than two weeks, you will join me Tannu! Plus, Bhaijan aur Zoya bhabhi will be there as well!"

Najma disappeared and Tanveer sat on her bed crying relentlessly. She was frightened as hell.

She mumbled some words and she tried to sleep but she couldn't. Each time she closed her eyes, she would see Zoya and Asad looking at her accusingly.



Next morning.

Zoya had woken up smiling. She couldn't be less happier knowing that her daughters were together, plus she had an appointment for her pregnancy. Then Asad and she would meet Saif for the plan regarding the kidnapping of Rehaan, Tanveer's son. They needed something or someone for Tanveer to fall into the trap so they had decided to use her son.

"Jaan! Breakfast's is ready." Zoya shouted and Asad came towards his wife. He hugged her and kissed her neck. Zoya chuckled and snuggled into his arms.

"Soon we'll be with our children Mrs Khan." He said and she smiled.

"But we still have to see this little one." She said and he smirked.

"Yes let's eat then we'll go see our little one." They ate then they left. Zoya was stressed as hell knowing that a pregnancy at 40 years old was a risk for the baby and the mother.

She gripped Asad's hand tightly as she lied in the bed. Tears were falling from her eyes when she saw her baby.

"He's so little.." She said. Asad wiped the tears from her face he kissed her knuckles and smiled.

"Mrs Khan, you may now that it's a risk to be pregnant as you're 40 years old. Plus I have seen that you've been stabbed few years ago and it injured your uterus."

"But ma'am, I have managed to have two children after this injury.."

"Yes that's correct but being forty and due to the state of your uterus, you're highly exposed to a potential miscarriage or an early birth. So you must be very cautious. Don't stress a lot and eat healthy. Your next check up will be in four weeks. "

Asad was very sad to hear this even after all the bad things she did to them, Tanveer wouldn't let them alone. Because of her injury, Zoya and her baby weren't safe and they didn't take their revenge yet.

"Mr Khan, we have to go see Saif."

"Listen Zoya, I think you should stay away of this right now."

"Kyun Asad?"

"Didn't you hear the doctor? Zoya you can miscarry! I won't bear losing you or another child."

"Asad, please, we're near our goal! Jaan, we have reached our goal. At the end of the week, Tanveer won't be a threat to us any more."

"I know Jaan, but I can't risk your life. If you don't listen I'll have to send you back to England."

"Asad!"

"Zoya stop it!" He shouted but regretted it as he saw her crying. As they were arrived at their house, she left the car and ran to her room. She locked the door and sat on the floor crying as if they were no tomorrow.

"Zoya, baby, please open the door." Zoya didn't listen to him and just cried until she fell asleep on the floor.

Asad's pov.

I was sitting next to the door of our room waiting for Zoya to open the door when I got a call from Saif.

"Mr Khan?"

"Kya hua Saif?

"I kidnapped Rehaan. He's at the place you showed me."

"Good job Saif. Take care of him. I'll be there in a few hours."


~.~

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipeeeree
First tym first place
Interesting update
Zoya had Seen her daughters
Tanveer ka end in 1 week
Sanam N seher gonna take revenge Tanverr along Asya
Zoya is upset with Asad
Amazing update
Continue soon :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Yipeeeree

First tym first place
Interesting update
Zoya had Seen her daughters
Tanveer ka end in 1 week
Sanam N seher gonna take revenge Tanverr along Asya
Zoya is upset with Asad
Amazing update
Continue soon :-))

Yes 😆 Thank you! Actually, he just saw Sanam! And yes Tanveer will die in a week! And Seher and Sanam will help Asya killing Tanveer 😳 He has to learn not to mess with mrs Khan! Thank you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it in 1 go its amazing n pm me fr dis stry also
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

I read it in 1 go its amazing n pm me fr dis stry also

Thank you! I'll pm you don't worry 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Aw zoya saw sanam and knows her daughters r together
So tanveer haunting spells r so good and having Najma added to the mix too sweet revenge
So zoya pregnancy at risk and Asad is scared
Rehan kidnapped
Tanveer doom is near
Continue

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