Teri Meri Muskil Kahani part 3 pg 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: azsumay

Beautiful ashu

Love you
Happy new year
Hope you are fine
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Originally posted by: SEHANISFAN

sorry i am late but loved the story yaar

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
3 last part.3 last part.
Ayaan dejectedly moves out of the doctors clinic. But the words of the doctor keep ringing his ears.

Flashback
D:Ayaan pink I'd the colour of love. The colour u have seen is not recognised by your eye instead by ur heart. Who is the luch one Ayaan?have u confessed ur love for her?
A:No sir not yet.
Doctor said Ayaan don't u watch hindi movies? U make don't hurry then another person takes up the chance?
Ayaan just smiled n came out.

Flashback ends
Ayaan didn't love humaira.but he had seen her dress pink.He mind was baffled with questions?
Did he actually love Humeira? What the doctor was saying was it right?
No it just can't. He knew he loved Priya only Priya.

He was walking when Priya phoned him saying that she would leave Dubai this evening.
He felt the ground under him was shaking and ultimately someone snatched it from him.

His little world was broken into several pieces. Before he could stop her the call ended.

He immediately ran to a gift shop n shopped a greeting card n expressed his feelings in it.
He rushed to her house but it was locked.The old man said him that she left to the airport.

Ayaan started his bike n drove at a high speed.
Ek mulakat zaroori hai sanam plays...

His bike stopped in between ,then what ? He asked for lift but none helped him.he started running.breaking all traffic rules and regulations he finally reached airport. He rushed inside n called out Priya at the top of his voice.

Priya turned out to see Ayaan. She thanked him for all his help from the day 1.
Ayaan is about to say when the airport announcer announce the arrival of Priya flight.
Priya says him bye n promises him to call him everyday. She just turns to leave when Ayaan holds her wrist.He hands her tha card.
She goes through it. She slaps Ayaan .
"I thought you r a nice guy that's y helping me but ur in tensions were too cheap.I hate u I hate u u heard, get the hell out of hear.how could you imagine that I will love u,U a painter. How low u r haan. I m a good actress now going to dubai to become famous over there n u such cheap . Get lost from here"

She tears the card n throws onto Ayaan s face.

Ayaan breaks down over there.

At home Humeira gets worried about him. She asks Reba an to go out in seach of Ayaan. But Ayaan hin self return.

AFTER A MONTH.

Raja shouts for help and all gather to see what happened?
Humeira has cut her right wrist. Ayaan gets baffled seeing her like that. He hurriedly picks up in his arms ban rushes to the hospital. She gets admitted. Ayaan prays for her well being n someone taps his shoulders. The same doctor.
Doctor enquires of Ayaan y he was here?

Ayaan narrates him about humaira.
The doctor happily reply him that nothing will happen to her as she has such has a loving guy,Ayaan.the doctors says that he can measure how much Ayaan loved her. He reminds Ayaan about the pink colour he had seen. He assures Ayaan that she will get cured soon.

Ayaan stands there emotional less. What happened to him.? What were the doctor saying. .
IS IT TRUE THAT HE LOVE HUMAIRA. How to certify it.?

He immediately went to the colony took out hispaper closed his eyes n stated painting something.
After few minutes he opened his eyes n saw the picture . He was shocked. It was of humaira .
He again closed his eyes to find his and humaira s beautiful cheerful images.

He realised that he loved humaira n not priya. He felt as if his strength was reviving. He didn't lose his Humaira he didn't lose his love.

The air around him filled his heart with happiness .

He went to the hospital.

Humaira regain senses Dad a ji asked her y she did all these
She told that she immensely loved Ayaan but she doesn't thinks Ayaan loves her that's y.

Ayaan came and hugged her tightly.
He said I LOVE U HUMAIRA MORE THAN THIS WORLD AND MORE THAN ANYTHING.

Humaira too joined him, I LOVE U TOO AYAAN.

All were happy at their reunion.


THE END.

HELLO PEOPLE,
THIS IS MY FIRST COMPLETING STORE.
I ENJOYED THROUGHOUT WRITE ING IT
WHAT ABOUT U ALL.?
Remember criticism are always welcomed whole heartedly.

Bye bye
Edited by ashlesha2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
This part is dedicated to my dearest buddy angel_juhi04.
She is an awesome writer reader as well as an wonderful debtor.
In her stories u will find the problems of the society r discussed.

I am really inspired by her.
She is my inspiration.
I like u n salute u my friend.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
awesome update..
well written..👏👏
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Awesome update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Wonderful update
Thanks for the pm :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
PART WAS VERY NICE😳😳
LOVED IT!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Amazing update
Loved reading it especially the ending
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Ayyan and Humeria Love moments were so Cute.😳
The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Thanks for ur likes and comments

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