AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Yes yes I m tryig 2 stay regular lol😆

so as expected Asad came at Zoya's door 2 take back his niece & mistaken Zoya as Zoe hmm & Zoya played

Asad offering money & even a mrg was also I was guessing at so this updt was more of was just proof of my imagination lol

But still I enjoyed it Pia 😃

Asad & Zoya both noticed their emotional bonding wid lily & I loved ASad's scene wid baby😛

I feel Asad is ready 2 give her a 2nd chance only bcuz he knows a kid needs his mother more but yes he needs 2 b there wid her as a father bcuz he can't trust d girl knowing her past

btw I loved when Zoe gave it back about d player thing...Asad being a player doesn't have right 2 disgrace a lady who does same what he does..

there r so many small things I wanted 2 point out but I m not doing that 2day as I have less time

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but I m just saying I m getting hooked wid this 1 too Pia 😉

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Hey Jas so good to see you here 😃
I hope you'll be a regular reader for this one too :)
It's good to read your feedback
I purposely kept the name Zoe. It will be easier to trick Asad 😆
Zoe hurt Lily and that's why she had the blue marks 😕
Will update soon :)

oh ok now got it its just 2 ullu banauing Asad😆

OMG really Zoe is really horrible mother than & I m sure now she won't give up on Lily that easily now as she's a greedy selfish lady & now I feel whatever Asad thinks or says about her is true..😡

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Wohoo!

You started another one and we don't have to even wait!

I have resed a comment on some page but I'll just unres it here!

I'm just so glad...

But I feel terribly horrible for Zoya...

She surely has done no wrong to deserve this has she?

Asad is being too harsh but I guess he is under the pressure to make his father happy...

Why can't anyone notice Ayaan's mistake? Wasn't it his fault too? Surely Zoe was wrong but didn't Ayaan too have equal part?

And what about Humeira?

Many threads left untied... let's see how the story progresses...

Surely Asad cannot be serious that he will resist Zoya...

But Zoya should let Asad know soon that she is Zoya and not Zoe...

I have a gut feeling that if not immediately Zoe will soon make an appearance and thimgs won't be pleasant than...

She has never helped Zoya and even now she will stand to be a thorn...

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Oh no
Mistaken identity
Zoya will surely end in trouble

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kobeb

@kobeb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Omgg new story amazing!! I'm in love pls continue soon!!

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

And by a dead man

She means Ayaan

Dude Zoya is gonna get into big trouble

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Asad go f**k yourself

Lily

❤️

I loved this chapter

I felt so mature, serious in reading this chapter

Loves

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MonnaS

@msingh27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Wow...another great story line. ...am loving it & am totally hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for the PM. Plizzz update soon

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Okay! This.Is.Another.Beauty.

I can't wait to read more.

I don't think Zoya will reveal her identity anytime soon.

Who's the hidden twin by the way Is it Zoe, because she is in some other land, living her own life, hidden from the eyes of Asad or is it Zoya, who's real identity is hidden beyond the mask of Zoe.

Update soonish Pia.

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
Res
Unres
Finally asya met.
What a meeting as expected he misunderstood her as zoe and she played along.
She was trying to keep Lily with her and he is too edmenant to take her back with him.
He is ready to pay anything even if he has to get married to her
After reading first chapter I guess this thing is happening.
To be very honest with you I love it.
I want to see how this to deal with each other once they got married.
I am in love with this one and super excited for the next update.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the pm