AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Awesome..
Very interesting..
Plz update soon



Thank you 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome part

Asya talk wow
Excited for next
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next



Thanks dear 😃
I am so glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW👍🏼
IT WAS MINDBLOWING👏
SUCH AN AWESOME STORY⭐️
VERY VERY VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
I THINK , I SHOULD SAY IT IS REALLY VERY ATTRACTIVE ... I M FEELING A PULL TOWARDS IT ...!!!
THE WAY IT HAS BEEN WRITTEN ... ITS OUTSTANDING ... IT IS SO MUCH APPEALING ...!!!
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS AMAZING STORY🤗
I AM LOVING IT SO SO SO SO SO SOOO MUCH❤️
PLZ CONTINUE SOON😃



Wow! What a beautiful comment 😃
Thanks Amina
I am equally excited to share this story with you all :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asya met & he misunderstood her as Zoe. Liked the scene when Asad hold his niece for first time. Zoya wanted to keep lily with her & she will do anything even if it is marry to Asad. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm



Both are ready to marry a stranger for the sake of Lily
Lily had horrible parents but she has a great uncle and Aunt who loves her so much 😳
Zoya is landing herself in trouble...Asad will feel betrayed 😕
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

Loved the explosive meeting between zoya and asad. Can't wait to se how this little lie of zoya will work once they r married.



I don think it's a little lie
She'll get marry to him while hiding her identity
He has all the right to get upset
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Yes yes Im tryig 2 stay regular lol😆

so as expected Asad came at Zoya's door 2 take back his niece & mistaken Zoya as Zoe hmm & Zoya played

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Asad offering money & even a mrg was also I was guessing at so this updt was more of was just proof of my imagination lol


But still I enjoyed it Pia 😃


Asad & Zoya both noticed their emotional bonding wid lily & I loved ASad's scene wid baby😛


I feel Asad is ready 2 give her a 2nd chance only bcuz he knows a kid needs his mother more but yes he needs 2 b there wid her as a father bcuz he can't trust d girl knowing her past


btw I loved when Zoe gave it back about d player thing...Asad being a player doesn't have right 2 disgrace a lady who does same what he does..


<em>there r so many small things I wanted 2 point out but I m not doing that 2day as I have less time

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but I m just saying I m getting hooked wid this 1 too Pia 😉



Yes, AsYa's scene with Lily was really adorable
Well, Asad is saying all those things to Zoya because he thinks she is Zoe
Whatever the information he has about Zoe is not pretty good one
He hates her and feels responsible for his brother's death
Zoya is right to defend her sister
But the thing is Zoya hetself doesn't know what all Zoe has done but Asad do know 😆
She'll be shocked to know her sister's 'karname' 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Wohoo!

You started another one and we don't have to even wait!

I have resed a comment on some page but I'll just unres it here!

I'm just so glad...

But I feel terribly horrible for Zoya...

She surely has done no wrong to deserve this has she?

Asad is being too harsh but I guess he is under the pressure to make his father happy...

Why can't anyone notice Ayaan's mistake? Wasn't it his fault too? Surely Zoe was wrong but didn't Ayaan too have equal part?

And what about Humeira?

Many threads left untied... let's see how the story progresses...

Surely Asad cannot be serious that he will resist Zoya...

But Zoya should let Asad know soon that she is Zoya and not Zoe...

I have a gut feeling that if not immediately Zoe will soon make an appearance and thimgs won't be pleasant than...

She has never helped Zoya and even now she will stand to be a thorn...





Asad is being harsh to Zoe not Zoya
Zoe has done horrible things and he hates her
Zoya doesn't deserve this but it is Zoe who should be blamed for her condition
Asad doesn't even know he is dealing with some different person
He'll feel cheated when he finds out 😕
Ayaan is surely to be blamed...he is also at fault but now he is dead
Humeira is innocent...she is the one who was cheated by her fiance 😕
Zoe will make her appearance when it is not needed 😆
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Oh no
Mistaken identity
Zoya will surely end in trouble




Ha ha yup she's getting herself in lot of trouble
Glad you liked this update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Omgg new story amazing!! I'm in love pls continue soon!!



Thanks
Glad u liked it 😊

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