AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Interesting Chapt...👏

Continue soon..😊

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: iluvasya

See I told you I'll be back with a new story soon
And here I am 😆
This story is quite predictable...I am sure you must have read another fuction with similar story line
I really the twin concept where one is good and the other one evil
😃
Hopefully Mayur can help with the other story you've mentioned :)

Yes I'm liking this story too...

Just read the second part...

Asya meeting was crackling...

Firecrackers everywhere lol...

Let's see how this turns up to be..

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Second one is the girl he never noticed by Simran 😊

Yes u r right...

That is also a very nice story.

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Avie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Another wonderful chapter I must say..👏

Finally Asad and Zoya meet.. And he mistakes her for Zoe.. 😕

Zoya was so afraid of losing Lily that she played along.. But now I am terrified for her..

How would he behave when he will know she wasn't the right girl after all..😕

I feel really sad for Zoya..😭

First she has to fight with her sister for her niece.. The sister who doesn't care a penny about her own daughter.. Her own flesh and blood..😡

And now she has to marry this man so that she can keep Lily with her..

Asad has his own reasons for doing so...

He can't let her take Lily away from the family..

I wonder what he will do to Zoya when he finds the truth.. 🤢

This whole mess is so complicated.. And I am loving it!😆😃😉

PS: I am totally astounded by your stories.. I know they are adaptations but still they are so damn good.. You have a very keen eye for these stories and I am guessing an even awesome reading list! ⭐️👍🏼

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Abi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Awesome update👏
Asya meeting😲
Asad thought her as zoe and talked so harshly with her😔
Love the scene where they take lilly
Now he want to marry her wow so excited

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nilusoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Awesome part

Asya talk wow

Excited for next

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

WOW 👍🏼
IT WAS MINDBLOWING 👏
SUCH AN AWESOME STORY ⭐️
VERY VERY VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
I THINK , I SHOULD SAY IT IS REALLY VERY ATTRACTIVE ... I M FEELING A PULL TOWARDS IT ...!!!
THE WAY IT HAS BEEN WRITTEN ... ITS OUTSTANDING ... IT IS SO MUCH APPEALING ...!!!
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS AMAZING STORY 🤗
I AM LOVING IT SO SO SO SO SO SOOO MUCH ❤️
PLZ CONTINUE SOON 😃

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Nice update
Asya met & he misunderstood her as Zoe. Liked the scene when Asad hold his niece for first time. Zoya wanted to keep lily with her & she will do anything even if it is marry to Asad. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm