AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 7

Originally posted by: jas91

Congratulations 4 d new thread Pia🥳

a very well deserved 😊

but I liked ur stories in 1 thread😆

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coming 2 updt

it was fantastic👏

so finally after so long Asad agreed 4 4ever yippee

I thought kab ayega yeh pal it was being dragged since long😆

specially cuz since day 1 we knew he want's her😉

& in this part I liked Samar Rehan who threatened d guys 2 leave lol😆

waiting 4 nxt part Pia😉

<em>btw I missed what happened wid Rehan & Khushi?😕

Thank you my dear Jas 😊
Trust me even I like my stories being short only but sometimes they'll be longer like this one :)

Yippee so yeah finally Asad is ready to commit
But I am sure even you must have figure it out by now that this can be happily ever after
Twist is just waiting around the corner 😆
I have no idea what happened between Rehaan and Khushi. I overlooked their part. I am only concentrating on AsYa 😊
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Finally asad is able to see the truth
Mission accomplished for zoya
Does that means that they are together now? ???

I don't think happily ever after will come this easily
But it's a good start. He is at least ready to commit :)

Originally posted by: velvetrose

congrats for 2 thread

awesome update

finally asad gave in

Thank you 😊
Glad u liked this chapter:)

Originally posted by: nilusoni

congrats for new thread

gr8 part

thanx for pm

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: iluvarmaanmalik

Have been a silent reader till now but all your beautiful stories have made me write a comment. I love all your stories. Just saw your index only to find that I've already read all your stories. I've gotten used to your daily updates and absolutely love you for updating the parts so quickly. This story is still ongoing and I've already started anticipating your next story! Don't ever stop writing on asya. I may not be a regular reader to comment but I love your writings and want you to continue your lovely work. My longest comment ever :D chalo ab jaldi se aaj ka update dedo ta kh mein so jaun jaldi!

Love,

Z.

Thanks for this lovely comment
Good to know you've enjoyed reading my stories
I just wany to bring to your notice that my stories are adaptation of famous novels written by professional writers. So, all the credit for the writing goes to the author of these books.

Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Finally asad confessed to himself after seeing her with others. Rehan & Samar were good friends & his words to ease him with this was wonderful. He was ready for relationship & commitment. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

Thank you 😊
Glad u liked this update
Let's see what happens now that he is a committed man :)

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Atlast he accepted his possessiveness for zoya

She's all his now yayy..

It was beautiful and the girls whiskey was the best

Yup at last he admitted
Yeah the whiskey sister was really funny
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: nnn

ohhh! awesome!

continue soon

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">beautiful chapter and I must say finally like Rehaan. It was the most exptected chapter of the story I must say.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">it has everything, it was funny, romantic, intense and sad in the same time. The beginning where Zoya was triying to convince to think about and when she then kissed him in the corner of his lips it was sooo *sigh*. I felt for Asad for a change refusing to himself this happiness because he was scared to be all alone after opening his heart.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">And again, she did as he wants, go to this party, played and laughed with those men that he brought for her and then it came. I must applause to Rehan in this, he forced him to admit it.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">"she is mine" what a beautiful declaration of love, "she is mine" in one sentence, it explain everything.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">And when she started to cry, OMG, my eyes moistened. It was so heart touching that she got him, he came to her, accepting her conditions, ready to do what he never dare to do just for her, to have her and maybe allowed him to dream about a better future...With her.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">However, I had some bitter taste, when he said : I won't lie to you and I expected the same (or something like that). I don't know why I feel something is about to come between them: a lie?</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Did she lie to him about her accident? And she knows who it was or is it something else? Or was he going to lie to her? You said that it still some chapters so I guess the story will not finish so soon and it will happen many things before they will live happily after.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I don't know how he will react when he will know that she manipulated him with Armaan or he will not care😃.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome chapter and will wait for the next, hope everything will be well, at least we are going to enjoy their new couple.</font>

Awww such a lovely comment
Thank you so much 😊

Glad u liked this chapter so much
It was definitely one of the most awaited chapter
At last he is ready for commitment
But is this really a happily ever after for them
Unfortunately no, the doom is awaiting just around the corner 😕
Will be updating soon :)

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

YES

Finally

Now was that so hard Asad

I loved it

It was like Speed dating

Lol

Sameer Malhotra

🤣

Finally Asad

😃

Thank you
Yup at last he admitted
😊
Will update soon