Coffee with AsYa(KaBhi) Shot 5-Part 5, Pg 59 (22/08/17)

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Yayy ! Awesome tweety
jach raha he asya pe bhi
i love the way u blended the office staff hahaha ayan 😆
gud quality coffee i like it
bt mujhe kaya version jada acha laga tha
maybe pehle wo padha isiliye ya it fitted more perfectly to that storyline of show
bt ths is truly appreciable how u blended asya in it
awesome tweety 🤗

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

OMG This OS is cuteness overloaded. I loved loved loved this. The concept and the whole of it.

The first part had me in stitches, how can she just turn up and then offer him coffee, and then try and make conversation with him while he looked at her like who the heck is this crazy girl! I suffer from second hand embarrassment syndrome, and Zoya's behaviour made me cringe but laugh too. This girl has guts. This merger, I had a feeling it would be with Asad. Her friends/colleagues are too cute. I loved that small moment at the end of part one, Tanu's name made me cringe. I hate that name with a passion.

Their interaction made me laugh. He was shocked to find his stalker working for him. LOL! So cute. I love the way they built their relationship, over coffee. It was sweet, they way you described the little moments. My heart burst with warm feelings.I couldn't stop smiling. And then when he took her to the coffee shop on their 1 year anniversary. Ahhh sighs. Dreamy.

And then ending, that was the best bit. I cannot believe you ended it there. I wanted to read more. This is such a feel good OS. I am smiling like an idiot after reading it. Thank you so much for your PM. And for writing this. I loved the concept and the way you executed it. Keep writing more of this fluff, I love these. Sighs. We want more of these coffee series please please please?

Much love

XOXO

Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 9 years ago

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hey deepti

Loved it.
Kuch bhi ho sakata hai

Well written

Thanks for pm

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: arakad
Aww...this wat I call a cute yet romantic OS...wonderful job...loved it
Love Zoya

Thanks a lot dear for commenting
I m glad you like it

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thank you so much Abi 😊

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Deepti Di..
This was Brilliant...
Mujhe aaj bhi samajh nhi aata sab aache writers fluff ko CRAP kyun kehte hai...jabki Aise Cute stories likhne ke liye bhi utna hee time lagta hai shayad na...
I toh L.O.V.E these kind of stories...No rona Dhona...bas sab Dil se Hona...
The Best thing I have read in days...
Loved this Part...Maybe Coffee too...but mujhe Milk nhi pasand...& Black coffee kabhi try nhi ki...khair iske baad coffee peene ka mann zaroor karr raha hai..
Bestest OS read in days...Thank You for This...
Do continue more in this Coffee series...
Take Care...
&
Yes..
Enjoy Your Coffee..

Hey Mayur
Awe...the smile on my face is not ready to fade away...after reading your so lovely comment...I am so happy you enjoyed it...
coffee series...I have already started writing that on other forum...but two os complete kiye & then third one is still pending...I will definitely write another with AsYa...coz coffee has it's special space in my life too...
Thankew so much...you really made my weekend...
& yes...man kar raha hai to coffee jarur peena...Kya pata...coffee may bring...something special for you too...

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: cutie15
Very sweet and adorable os..:)
I loved it. ! :)
The best part was that you made them bond over coffee which was same in show..
It was very cute..!

Thank you so much dear...for commenting...
I am so happy you like it...