AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 63

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Really nice part...

The distant Asad😆as if his fav toy was taken away from him.

Loved the girls conversations and khushi lol...

Waiting to read more now...

Thanks Tehs 😊
Glad u liked it
The girls part was funny...typical girly talks 😊
I really enjoyed reafing this chapter as well

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update pai 👍🏼
Asad behaving differently with her 😔
Love girls conversation
Continue soon 😊

Thanks Shailu
Glad u liked this chapter 😊

Originally posted by: nizahairu

Waiting for next part

Will update tonight at regular time :)

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome update as always .
loved it..
zoya was in a mess.. she so badly wanted to talk to someone..
priya finally helped her..
excited to read next update. .:)

Thanks for this lovely comment
Yes, she finally made some friends
And Priya gave her a good advise
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: Amina...

Lovely update👏

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: jas91

Hey there again Pia🤗

I m proud of myself now that I m being regular wid this 1😆

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<em>so another amazing updt it was

Zoe thought Asad will kick her out now😆

but he didn't after all he has fallen hard 4 her😉

but he's being angry & pissed obviously like a spoilt child😆

I Loved Zoe's scene wid d girls it was so entertaining

there reaction's on Asya's equation were reallyfunny 😆

specially Khushi I m sure she must b thinking how she got d players eyes while she can't😆

& I love Priya here 4 d awesome advice she gave btw that scene was also lovely when she & Zoe were talking on phone...I m just thinking is she being nice on her own or wid what relation she shares wid Asad

I am proud of you too Jas...you are reading reading and comnenting regularly 🤗
I thought this chapter was so funny too
I like the scene when Priya said 'you kissed' in the background Khushi was repeating everything like 'they kissed'. It was so typical girly scene...I could just imagine me and my friends chatting like this 😆

There is I mentioning the book why Priya is being nice to Zoya...I believe she feels Zoya has changed. Asad could be the reason too as priya really cares for him. Either way it's a good thing. Zoya need some friends in her life.

Will update the next chapter soon

Originally posted by: jas91

Oh ok this Rehaan guy na really confused us😆

<div>Yeah right even I got that but d way he said it mayb that was confusing😳😆

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<em>Waise 1st I thought during d make out Asad will get 2 see her scars & he will leave her which will break her & steel her resolve that she has nothing 2 do wid him he-shit as she fondly call him😆

Nothing like this is going to happen Jas 😆
You'll get a better idea for the future story in the next chapter:)

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Interesting..
Asad is giving cold shoulder to Zoya..
Loved how Khushi told that its because his favorite toy had been snatched...
Loved the whole convo of girls..
Continue soon...😊

Thanks Arpita 😃
Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So, what to say. Ok, I have to admit, I maybe reacted quickly by saying that Zoya should leave this house and Asad. I reacted emotionally😆. A girl will run but not a woman. She didn't do anything wrong and he didn't do anything wrong, both of them stayed on their opinion which pushed them apart. Like I used to say, love and attraction were not enough for life commitment.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">And in the same time, Asad proved me wrong, he still care for her and he didn't save her from her misery just to have some favor from her (even if a handsome guy save you, you will feel debt to him).</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">A typical girly chapter : gossip and gossip. It was really funny to see three different personalities fighting their inner voice to help her or not. At the end, Priya's advice was the best to give, if he liked her for what she was, she should not change at all. And I can't agree more, if he is worth, he will come back and she didn't need to fight for someone who will only make feel low.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Anyway, if I have to think logicaly ( which I don't have at all).</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zoya want Asad + future= forever [infinity]</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Asad wants Zoya - future= short time [ days]</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zoya has feelings = known</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Asad and feeling = unknow</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So the equation will be :</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">y=AsadX + Zoya with y correspond to the future and x to Asad's feelings</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Am I make sense to you? If it's not, then it's good😆</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Lovely chapter and you said that chapter 13 everything will change, is he going to see her scars or I imagine that Asad will be in trouble and Zoya will stand by his side.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">And for her scars, was she beaten by her father or did some guys took revenge from her?</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hope to read the next soon😃</font>

I was following you but by the time I reached X+Y part ...I lost it 😆
Oh my god how did U come up with all this 😆 I am laughing like mad so thank you for that

Ch 13 will not change everything but things will change between them...I really feel like goving you a small clue 😊

So far Zoya is not ready for one night stand but Asad wants.
Ch 13 will interchange the scenario ... She'll be ready to have even one night stand but he will refuse because he will realise he's not good enough for her...and she deserves better ...now how they reach to this point will be a good read 😃

Will update tonight at same time :)

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Lovely update
Now zoya has a gang to help her win asad

Ha ha yup now she has a gang to help her 😃
Glad to know you liked this chapter