Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Omg chap 7 and it gets better when

Too much pain even I am feeling it

Zoya returns but Asad is gone

He has been gone since she asked for distance

Now he knows she is back and he doesn't plan to return

And now she is leaving so he can return

Oh god can the 2 of them stop playing hide and seek

The friends should butt out none of them have the right to play Cupid or judge and executioner

Asad nor zoya never confided in any of the friends they just kept their feelings of love and pain to themselves

Yeah the friends may suspect something is their but the duo never said

So leave them alone to reach for each other just how he couldn't see her in pain and hurt in the past he will reach for her again

Asya has a lot to talk through and sort out and hope they does it soon

Love zoya reaction on seeing the office and pic

Continue soon

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

very emotional part aapi..very wel writen..cntnue soon

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Beautifully written...

What they both are doing...just running away..from each other...

It feel so bad to see Zoya's pain...& Hadia...i hate her...why she is creating more problems...

so beautifully portrayed each character...

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#384

sorry for being late...
chapter 5
wonderful chapter..
finally past is out...
loved the khan mansion moments and zoya's bond with everyone.. u beautifully penned it.. :)
first zoya misunderstood asad as driver ...haha...
but at last their bond reached such which can't be separable...wow...
really enjoyed this chapter very much..

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

wonderful chapter...
zoya is back and went to Khan mansion...
but luck was in not in her favour... :(
radil got their daughter back..
in asad's friends' POV they r correct..
but don't know whom to blame...poor souls...
wow..asad decorated his office in zoya's choice.. great..
finally she planned to leave khan mansion :(
hope everything will be fine...
plz continue soon..
this story is becoming more interesting chapter by chapter...

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#386

I wanna read ur armaan stories... will u plz tell the names of that stories...

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing chapter
Beautifully written and very heart touching
Zoya wanting to meet asad but asad refraining from it
Hope they meet in the next chapter
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

Thank you dear 😃

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: ajuswa19
a very sweet cute n beautiful part
m really touched!😳
keep it up!👏👍🏼
love u🤗
tc stay blessed! b happy always!😳

Hey Aju,

Thanks dear.😃

Stay blessed and love you too 🤗

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Why do Asad and Zoya have to undergo such pains?

As much as I love Asad and respect Hadia's affection for Asad, I believe that she has no right to play with Zoya's life or Asad's life. Let them decide what to do instead of Hadia deciding Zoya needs to be punished.

I mean how much does she even know about the matter? It may have been a misunderstanding on Zoya's part or probably Asad being immature then actually uttered those words, but who is she to decide that Zoya needs to be given a lesson?

Has not Zoya suffered enough for her share? She had to leave her own family, friends and city for someone who meant so deep to her. Whereas asad, at least had his family, friends around to be there for him!

Somehow Hadia's behaviour had me majorly pissed.

And why do these two always feel running away is the best thing to do?

Now that Asad has escaped, Zoya too is going away but where?

When will these two be able to actually sit and discuss and clear the matter/misunderstanding?

Please do update soon!

Hey,

I agree with you. Hadia dsnt hav the right to punish Zoe here but she is thinkn as Asad's sis who cant see his pain. Dnt worry she will learn a lesson soon.

Just a little wait n then AsYa will sort the differences.

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: asyafreva
You always stun me with your magical writing skills because I guess this is the only story where I actually can feel their pain whenever you write about it.

Honestly this myriad of emotions have been experienced by me only in this one story!

I could actually feel Zoya's pain and helplessness and the way she would have felt...

Though Dilshad and Rashid truly love her like their own daughter but the awkward rejection will always be felt by her because she now knows that Asad left because of her.

Brilliantly written

I honestly am humbled by your comment. Thank you so so much for your kind words my Dear, they mean a lottt to me.😳😃

Im glad you could feel the emotions i was trying to portray.

Thanks again. 🤗