Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

Res for Sis, Choco, IBP, Annie, Jas, Sweety, Bhais & everyone who has left me a feedback.

Thanks a lot. Ur comments mean a lot to me.

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

Amazing chapter

Beautifully written and very heart touching

Zoya wanting to meet asad but asad refraining from it

Hope they meet in the next chapter

Looking forward to know what happens next

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Aju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

a very sweet cute n beautiful part

m really touched!😳

keep it up!👏👍🏼

love u🤗

tc stay blessed! b happy always!😳

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Aashka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Why do Asad and Zoya have to undergo such pains?

As much as I love Asad and respect Hadia's affection for Asad, I believe that she has no right to play with Zoya's life or Asad's life. Let them decide what to do instead of Hadia deciding Zoya needs to be punished.

I mean how much does she even know about the matter? It may have been a misunderstanding on Zoya's part or probably Asad being immature then actually uttered those words, but who is she to decide that Zoya needs to be given a lesson?

Has not Zoya suffered enough for her share? She had to leave her own family, friends and city for someone who meant so deep to her. Whereas asad, at least had his family, friends around to be there for him!

Somehow Hadia's behaviour had me majorly pissed.

And why do these two always feel running away is the best thing to do?

Now that Asad has escaped, Zoya too is going away but where?

When will these two be able to actually sit and discuss and clear the matter/misunderstanding?

Please do update soon!

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 9 years ago

#365

You always stun me with your magical writing skills because I guess this is the only story where I actually can feel their pain whenever you write about it.

Honestly this myriad of emotions have been experienced by me only in this one story!

I could actually feel Zoya's pain and helplessness and the way she would have felt...

Though Dilshad and Rashid truly love her like their own daughter but the awkward rejection will always be felt by her because she now knows that Asad left because of her.

Brilliantly written

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Annie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Res :)

Oh God, when will these two dummies stop playing hide-n-seek. I mean like reallyy...itni mohabbat hai...aur itna tadap rahe hain ek doosre ke liye, then what's keeping them away? She came, he left. Now she's leaving, so he comes. Lack of communication, I tell you

Sometimes I feel like pulling these two, making them sit in front of each other and make them talk. Hadd ho gayi😆

More than Asad, I feel bad for Zoe. Maybe because his feelings are not properly shown yet. Eagerly waiting for moree revelations and a major confrontation between AsYa.😳

This Hadia had me pissed. I mean, pehle se hi problems kam hain jo inn ko bhi amma banne ki zaroorat aa padi. Why is she dying to punish Zoya? Who is she to punish her? Kuch keh ke dikhaye usse😡

Zoe's bond with Rashid and Dilshu was super sweet😳

Length was yummy😉 And magical was your portrayal. It's very difficult to make the reader feel the pain the leads have to go through but you do it Amazingly. Applause👏

Love you Nimmuu Appiiee 🤗 Continue sooon <3

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Interesting Part.😊

Zoya came back to Asad(KSG) house,it was so Nice.😊

Dilshad and Rashid Bonding with Zoya was so Interesting.😊

Hadia😡 wanted to punish Zoya for Asad(KSG) pain,it was so sad,Who is she to give punishment to Zoya.😭

Zoya wanted to meet Asad(KSG),but he didn't want to met her,it was so sad.😭

Zoya also Felt sad because of Asad(KSG) she left her friends atleast Asad(KSG) had his family with him,it was so sad.😭

ASYA(KABHI) both felt pain because of misunderstandings.😭

I hope everything will be fine soon.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#368

Awesome update
Zoya came back but nobody was there. She wanted to talk to asad & finish their misunderstanding. Everyone was sad as asad was away & she felt it. Uma & Zoya convo was nice. Hadia didn't want Zoya in asad life but she didn't know that both are each other life. Zoya heard the conversation between bi & asad. She decided to leave KV as asad knew she was here. Waiting for next update soon plz. Thanks for pm