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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Loved it

Awesome

When you will mine pout

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Aww this was so touching

From when I read abt his pull towards Zoya

I guess she was his wife but I thought memory loss

from accident but didn't guess als.

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful...

That's all I'm able to say...

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

an awesome os on a different topic

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Beautiful work...

Loved it so much

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Srashtu 🤗
pehle to ek aur jhappi pa fr writing ths beautiful os 🤗
Love u ❤️
and thanku fr res 😃

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Happy diwali to u too in advance 🤗
I loved ths diwali ka cute sa os! Yes i will call ths cute too along with many other adjectives

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Banner oye hoye ❤️
paru to hai hi jadugari
kitna apt lagraha he banner story ke hisab se
simple and perfect
title b acha, banner b sundar, banane wali b sundar, aur likhne wali b sundar
sb shundar shundar ❤️
mu mia mitthu bt padhne wali b sundar 🤣

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

To begin with concept
kudos to u mehrun pari
ek ache writer ki pehchan yehi he ki wo apne aas pas cheeze observe kare and uspe apna kuch original likhe
and u did a grt job with ths
a different fresh and heart touching os

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

I adore i always adore how flawlessly and swiftly u carry the story forward
and ths tym in between the flashback makkhan ki tarah fisalta gaya os
short and real unique