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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

As for the writing part
tumse acha koun
the launguage is soothing whenever i read ur story yar
how it started i thought 45 saal tk apni wife se confess ni kiya...i thought wahi anniversary wali story hogi bt ths surprised me beyond my kachra thinking!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

And even i thought his wife died! Bt it was zoya and she wanted him to feel fr her without help
amazingly thoughtfully conceptualized!
coz they were meant to be destiny again made him fall for her

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Also it brought out a truth of those who suffers frm the disease
their plight,frustration how they seek somethng smoothng to distract themselves
like asad found solace in zoya's company

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

A very well done 👏
mene pura pg khaya wah kya baat he 😆
aur bhuk lagi he
srashtu aur likh ese updates

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Awesome & Interesting OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next OS Soon...😃

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Amazing os

Loved reading it

A very new concept

Asya already married by asad forgot his life

Really painful for the person and more for the relatives

Hope no one suffers a situation like this

Beautiful os 😊

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Srashti yaar
u written very well
i love u yaar 😊
Kitna sweet lag raha tha padne me
Waiting for next os
jyada time nahi lena

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
A very well done 👏
mene pura pg khaya wah kya baat he 😆
aur bhuk lagi he
srashtu aur likh ese updates

teri bhook koi nahi mita sakta bhukkad 🤣

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

teri bhook koi nahi mita sakta bhukkad 🤣

🤣
srashtu ke piche padungi mai
har cheez ka ilaj he ushke pas

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Brilliant os so emotional
It must be painful for zoya that asad doesn't remember her 😔
But asad heart knows that she is the one 😊
Finally asad confesses his love
Zoya told him that they are already married 😊
Beautifully written
Banner is nice
U r amazing dear
Keep writing 😊