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Originally posted by: enhance

Bohut enjoyable reply Bhai!😊

Wow really 😃

The way you described her in the poetry adds how impressive Maria's character is. No wonder, she's everyones favorite!⭐️

hmm.. it was a part of next update, I couldnt wait to show that poetry. LOL She was the apple of everyone eye but had a tragic end. (This story shares a lot from someones real life (semi fiction) thats why I'm easily writing so many details)

Zubair is very caring father who lives to see his children's smile. Especially his daughters.

yup, he is an old man around 63 years works hard to have a better after retirement life. But in my story all these characters will be slowly washing away as Zoya gets married. But will try to add something about them like flashbacks.

Ye betiyaan toh babul ki raniyaan hain

mithi mithi pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniyaan hai

- from Na Tum Jaano Na Hum movie

wow so appropriate thanks for sharing

Samaj mein ata hai that Zoya has become more practical and sober and wants a simple marriage. She's been through a lot and hasn't had the time to fully recover from it and start dreaming again. I guess, Asad will help her dream again.

once upon a time zoya was a spoiled and (bigrihui not appropriate to use the word here but awara type ladki) she lived in her artificial world of love, but going too deep in her fake world she was cheated, abused, and defamed by her first love. She then attempted suicide and wasted an year in her Dental course. The zoya we have at present is a product made with those broken pieces which hurts her all the time. The ribbon from her eyes has come down and when she was almost trying to stabilize her life Maria her support died leaving her shattered and destabilized again. She wants to prove herself strong, independent and clean spots on her character. Thats why she dont want marriage so soon.

Yeah, Afreen is currently in the show Qubool hai. I would love to suggest but I don't want to interfere in your masterpiece. I rather you keep it original and only yours! You are very mehnati bhai, itna kuch likh lete ho itni ehsaani se.⭐️.. I'm sure you'll think of a good one!

hmm if till chapter 8 I dont find a better name or I dont think it will trouble readers I will use Afreen because of her on screen personality look and beauty. Else someone more dangerous will replace her... I hate tanveer, else would have used her as a perfect villain.

I'm super lazy and busy man. 😆I love writing as it gives me few more breaths to live.

Now I'm really curious about the twist😲. If its someone totally unexpected, apko pata nahin how interesting you have made the story, lol.😆

hahah... not that big twist, but the whole story will be changing colors. The unexpected is a surprise surprise...! Wow really?😆

Acha new entries, I think they will be relatives of Zoya. Looking forward to the positive one, I think it will be Heena who is positive?

new entries ke bare mein I already added on Page 1, character list. Heena is Maaz's love interest and future Zoya's pyaari choti bhabhi... The other Farzana is Azhar's (Zoya's first love) mother.

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

thank you so much! 😳

If I was Zoya I would work all day too

haha... me too.. 😉 if only I was a girl 😆

Omg she has a bhabi who wants to get rid of her

yup because she wants to stay separately with Faaz or get rid of everybody in home. Actually if zoya gets married her parents will go back to india ending their job in dubai and she will be ruling the house and inherit the house furniture and everything. Maaz will be forced to settle from scratch. or left in India to struggle.

Y I don't know she should be happy she has a nanad

she hates zoya, personal enmity because she gets all the love at home and zoya is more beautiful and jolly. Her personality is the key to have enmity with her.

Her ammi is influence by them and wants zoya marriage I hate when parents thinks their daughters r burden

hmm that too and also because of other several reasons.

Her Abu is awesome and give and amazing answer to them

yup best dad

Maaz seems to be the one trying to keep everyone happy

yup again, he wants a happy united family

Maria seems to have been the apple of everyone eyes

yup again, she used to bind the whole family with love and smile

So a proposal for zoya from Asad

yup 😳

She looks and sounds like his first love and fiance sania

yup

Asad should marry zoya for zoya and no to fill a void

right, he will somehow starts loving her for her... but late.. after marriage

So love his answers to her though and Najma like her to be

najma was prepared to act like that, asad made her... Asad working hard to make her tell yes to marriage by attracting her...

So they moved away from India to Dubai bcuz of the past incident

not moved but stopped going to India because of it.

How horrid was it

yup..

Looking forward to read more

update probably this sunday.. I really hope I can make it.. worst week ..

Instead of writing 2 separate update y don't u put the English in brackets after the Hindi

So like subtitles in a movie 😊

thats good idea but I was in a hurry to release it. 😆 Will try this time. Thanks 😳

Continue

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Originally posted by: cutie15

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