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Posted: 9 years ago
lol tissue box tiyaar hai just in case bhai.. Aw Zoya must have went through a lot.😲

Maria ke bharay mein toh suna padega! She seems like a really sweet person. Kya huwa Maria ke saat, will be finding out hopefully soon!

Aaj rukhsat ho gayi duniya se ek parinda,
dard aisa dil mein uttah, jaan lekar hi gaya..!!


Her Abbu wanted her wedding to be grand I'm guessing! Chalo, saadgi se bhi at least acha insaan mila hai Zoya ko zindagi guzarne ke liye.

Afreen and Madeeha, uffo...😔

Take your time with the foundation, these details and developments are captivating and make it more interesting to read on.⭐️

Wah, Wah at your poetry Bhai.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enhance

lol tissue box tiyaar hai just in case bhai.. Aw Zoya must have went through a lot.😲

Maria ke bharay mein toh suna padega! She seems like a really sweet person. Kya huwa Maria ke saat, will be finding out hopefully soon!

Aaj rukhsat ho gayi duniya se ek parinda,
dard aisa dil mein uttah, jaan lekar hi gaya..!!


Her Abbu wanted her wedding to be grand I'm guessing! Chalo, saadgi se bhi at least acha insaan mila hai Zoya ko zindagi guzarne ke liye.

Afreen and Madeeha, uffo...😔

Take your time with the foundation, these details and developments are captivating and make it more interesting to read on.⭐️

Wah, Wah at your poetry Bhai.👏

Haha.. that was a joke! 😉 Hmm.. poor girl tasted the harsh side of the world at the wrong time.

About Maria I can say is...

-REMOVED-

She was indeed a pious soul, loved to spread smiles and love. She kept family united all the time. But died tragically due to failed operation.

Wow, your poetry described it exactly how it felt for Zoya, she felt dead after her...

Both Zoya and Maria are Zubair's most loved daughters. After Maria's tragic death Zoya had been the only source of happiness for the old man because his elder daughter Sadia is already married and visits rarely even after being in the same city. Anyways He wants to spend twice on Zoya's Wedding to fill the gap of happiness he would have received at Maria's marriage in the future. He wants to spend his savings made for Maria's wedding also on Zoya's wedding but its still a sorrow phase in the family.

Zubair's only happiness is his daughters smile.

But his desire was left desires because Zoya wanted a simple marriage, she broke all her dreams regarding her lavish marriage. She turned realistic. Zubair was happy with Zoya's happiness.

Haha, Afreen (name not fully confirmed because she is present in qubool hai as a witch, but her personality almost personifies her. You can suggest something new if you like. 😉) and Madeeha, big problem at the present but will turn good later.

Actually the twist in the tale is that the real villain of the story is someone totally unexpected.

Hmm.. actually I wrote the whole story concept at the beginning itself. I'm just trying to implement it beautifully with a better back story.

Two new entries will be soon introduced, Heena and Farzana Begum. One is positive and one is veteran negative respectively.

Guess who will they be? 😉

Thanks again for your Wah Wah.. 😆

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting update..
Loved it..
AsYa proposal...
😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Interesting update..

Loved it..
AsYa proposal...
😳


Thank you so much sis. 😳 Glad you loved it. 😊

Wedding bells!! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks a lot. 😳Glad you loved it. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update MN bhaiya!!!
zoya ki shayrii!!! wah wah kya baat kya baat hai!!! subhanallah!!
why r they hiding in dubai?😕

maria kaun hai? how she died? waise she is apearing a damn sweet kinda character!!😆
i should say ki aap ke sare dialogues are spectacular
mazza aata hai mujhe padhne mein!!
catching urdu for me is bit diffrent but understanding each and every word makes it fun for me!!
mah!! vocabulary is increasing!!
my persoally fav scene was asad's three keys scene!! kya soch thi!!! i hope you wont mind if i steal your three keys idea in my writings!! (Only if you permit!!😛)
i wanna say that i srsly luved the update!!

ek baat bolna chahungi ff mein thoda thriller aur enjoyment bhi add kardo!! ou know a kind of romcom thing!! (only if the storypermitts!! and han dont think ki mai abhi ke updates ke liye bol rahi hoon i meant ki future story mein agar ho sake then u plzz add it!!! agar ho sake to!! only if possible


once again you are faboulous writer bhaiya!!!😊

Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vidhu1

awesome update MN bhaiya!!!

Thanks a lot sis. 😳

zoya ki shayrii!!! wah wah kya baat kya baat hai!!! subhanallah!!
haha.. Thanks again... subhanallah! 😆
why r they hiding in dubai?😕
Due to zoya's past. Many things are behind the curtains... will reveal soon...
maria kaun hai? Zoya's sister, check first page for characters list... how she died? due to failed operation. waise she is apearing a damn sweet kinda character!!😆 haha yes she will be sweet and touching character...
i should say ki aap ke sare dialogues are spectacular
mazza aata hai mujhe padhne mein!!
wow.. thanks you again, glad you liked it...
catching urdu for me is bit diffrent but understanding each and every word makes it fun for me!!
mah!! vocabulary is increasing!!
hmm.. great if you ever find it difficult then english only version is also present.
my persoally fav scene was asad's three keys scene!! kya soch thi!!! i hope you wont mind if i steal your three keys idea in my writings!! (Only if you permit!!😛)
Wow you really like it so much? 😲 karlo chori...no problem..😃 but gimme the link of that specific chapter to read. 😆

i wanna say that i srsly luved the update!!
haha.. gald you loved it... Efforts paid off! 😉
ek baat bolna chahungi ff mein thoda thriller aur enjoyment bhi add kardo!! ou know a kind of romcom thing!! (only if the storypermitts!! and han dont think ki mai abhi ke updates ke liye bol rahi hoon i meant ki future story mein agar ho sake then u plzz add it!!! agar ho sake to!! only if possible
Hmm.. lots of thriller, mystery etc is present at the moment but romcom is specifically a bit weak because I'm sticking as much as to the realistic scenes but I will introduce romcom when AsYa will get married. We will have a lot of sudden laughs ... Abhi ke liye I'm rushing from back stories of both Asad and Zoya. May be sixth chapter will be marriage and seventh something like a shuffle in their after married lives and from eight it will be the real story to read.

once again you are faboulous writer bhaiya!!!😊
Wow... Thank you soo much sis! 🤗


Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
haha bhai am nt kanjoos... am fr sure gng to comment on evry stry of yurs... bhai... pls unveil zoya's past soon... i guess der was smethng happened fr her dat she got so much hurt... nw she is nt willng to get married... but nw i thnk she found her mr right nd is in thnkng mode... his wrds affected her so much...
haha dat keys cncpt seems funny but has so much meang in dat... his way of proposng her... loved it... hope she agrees fr d proposal... nd nazma char was same as serial...she already accptd her as her bhabhi... too cute na... update soon... lovng it so much...
lots of love
frm yur fangurl sis
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Originally posted by: priyabarunsobti

haha bhai am nt kanjoos... am fr sure gng to comment on evry stry of yurs... bhai... pls unveil zoya's past soon... i guess der was smethng happened fr her dat she got so much hurt... nw she is nt willng to get married... but nw i thnk she found her mr right nd is in thnkng mode... his wrds affected her so much...
haha dat keys cncpt seems funny but has so much meang in dat... his way of proposng her... loved it... hope she agrees fr d proposal... nd nazma char was same as serial...she already accptd her as her bhabhi... too cute na... update soon... lovng it so much...
lots of love
frm yur fangurl sis
priyabarunsobti


Wow!!! Finally you read it and seems to be happy.. 😳😳

arre not you kanjoos, I'm talking about the silent readers, views 2 thousands mein hein aur sirf kuch hi comments karte hein..

Hmm.. sis but you only read and comment when you are completely fine and ok. Dont force yourself

Zoya's past is coming up next. dont worry. Yes she had been cheated and abused and defamed. That too her first love did with her. I dont want to disclose in comment replies LOL!

Yes she found a nice person and has been affected by his words.
That key concept was Asad's answer for her to say that she is best for him. I agree a bit funny.

Glad you loved it.

She will be forced to agree for her dad and mom. It will be an emotional thing ...

Yes Najma was just like that.. shes cute and future support for Zoya...she will take place of Maria in her life.

Hmm.. update weekend probably sunday night, I'm damn busy with assignments and office work. Managing personal as well as professional life... huh! I'm already exhausted.

Love you too sis! take care!
ur loving momo bhaiyya! 😆





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