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Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update as usual bro, loved it.
Asad and Zoya's scene was cute.Good to see that Asad and Zoya are getting more comfortable with each other. Liked that how the family supported Zoya in her work. I dont like Sultan's character though, there is something fishy about him. Hope he doesnt breaks Najma heart though.
Continue soon plz.

Originally posted by: taaniroyal

Reswa,.

will read from the start

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Thanks for the note bro (hope i am allowed to say thanks for this)😉

Hmm yeh wala thanks accepted. 😳

Although it is sad to know about her death but i am looking forward to the character.

Hehe she is indirectly a cupid. Lol. But a Very interesting character!

Honestly, i have never been so excited for the entry of a negative character bro

Hehe I can sense.. 😆

And sorry for the pm wala thanks. Will definitely keep in mind about it from next time

Hehe it's ok smiley Sista

And bro your secret calculations have really surprised me

So less story left.

Hmm actually all the upcoming 7 chapters are single part updates. But will be considerably lengthy.

Actually seems like just yesterday when it started

Haan.. Like. Yesterday.. But it had been months now.

And new thread mein new twist

Hehe. New thread is new twist. Lol

Kya baat hai bro!

Hehe thanks. 😆

Eagerly waiting for it

Hmm yeh wala thread to complete hone go still 15 pages I guess

And you seriously deleted 2 scenes.

Likhne se pehle.deleted.. But one of the scene will be a part. Of next. Chappy.

Agar 8000 words se zyada ho jata toh installment's mein padna padta bro😆

Hehe.. Wohi toh..

Anyways accha hua aapne meri threat ko seriously le liye warna mujhe kuch aur sochna padta

Hehe.. Sorry.. But I use all my energy for everyone who care and love me. And don't care about health. :)

Chalo bye bro!

Take care🤗

Originally posted by: zehra07

another gr8 update frm u..
um jst in luv wid dis story n nw i want to read d nxt part so plz update soon 😊

Originally posted by: vidhu1

Wow..such a lOng and beautifulll chappy it was...

Hehe thank you so much lil adorable Dhamkane wali sista.. Long one to compensate the delay. 4 days delayed update. 😕

awww...asya's kitchen romance was sooo cute 😳 😳

Hehe asad is naughty kiddo.. He always want romance... And shy Zoya... But things are slowly moving.

Hehe..bichara asad..kitni help aur kitni mohobbat!! 🤣

Hehe.. Yup pakde gaya.. It was hilarious

Then zoya's awww sooo cute emotional side was said really very well!!

Hehe airplane wala? Window scene? Thanks

I jUST loved that part in airplane when asad comforted her knowing the turmoil in her heart without her speaking a word!! 😊 such an understanding...

Yup it was awesome... Asad knows everything that runs in Zoyas mind. 😉

Lol...asad kissing najma hand thinking it be of zoya 🤣 🤣

His old day dreaming habit. It was funny. I wanted to add surprise comedy.. Glad you liked it

Then zoya joining her new new office!! 😃 😃 Ammi is really very lovely 😳

Hehe lovely ammi.. Hmm. Zoya finally a jewelry designer. 😉 no longer a dentist.

hehe i wish future mein mujhe bhi koi aisa hi mile.. 🤣 🤣

Aaye haaye! 😆

Sultan's entry..i dont lIke that guy..

Haha control control.. Itna gussa sehat ke liye accha nahi.

why the hell was he starring zoya...huh!! 😡

Becoz of her sexy new look. I mean she is looking so different. And he loves irritating girls lol

i should say that thankgod zoya has got a really nice sixth sense

Zoya was very tensed about najma's closeness with Sultan

that she was able to sense smthn fishy in sultans room...sahi time pe andar gayi thi zoya!!

Haan.. Right moment. But it was equal mistake of najma to allow herself and push herself to Sultan. And Sultan ka kya he is a dirty minded from his attitude.

Haww..dilshad slapped najma 😲 but this was smthn any would do..

Haan bohot bohot zor se.. Khoon bhi aaya cheek se. Yup najma committed sin. That's why it was necessary. Think what would Rashid would have done else. Even worst. But thank god they are in uk and they can't do something that happens in India. Like khoob pitayi lol

zoya ne ye sab kitni achi tarah se manage kar liya...gr8 to seee the bonding between them...

Zoya knows the worth of a lil sis. So she did everything to control it. Najma too sees an elder sis in Zoya. She will be closer to her now. And even najma will reciprocate her support to Zoya in her need. This all is just for that. Lol.. Sorry. Couldn't stop leaking lil.

Now i am waiting eagerly for the next part in new thread!! 😆

Hehe abhi to tei FF dil kinaare ki baari hai. Cinematic action update.

reading the precap i can tell that next part is gOnna be super intresting

Ofcourse it is but I'm so afraid. I have no idea how it will be.

Now last but not the least bhaiyu your poetry was super se bhi upar wali!! 😃 😃

Wow really thank you so much sistu

And han thankss for dedication!!

You deserve it!

Urs little adorable dhamkane wali sista

Urs

Dumabooo bade monster bhaiyuu

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Sorry. For late reply.

are its okkk!!

Originally posted by: vidhu1

ohh...i didnt remebred the date otherwise i would have given you some dhamkis you know!!

hahaha ok

han han...slowlyand gradually done thigs ends up to be most decent ones!!

hmm yup a decent realistic story

han!! seee i cant stop laughing on how dilshaad held his ears and zoya ran from there!!🤣🤣

hehe it was funny.. 😉 next time se asad ko yaad rahega no romance khullam khulla! 🤣

hehe...han and no need of this much thanks and all...formal na hooo app ki hi behan hoon!!😉

hehe ok thanks! 🤣

hann...abb wo zoya hai zoya!! zoya ko nahin janega toh kisi bhoot ko janega kya!!🤣

lol right! 😆

his this day dreaming habit is like a treat and is very advantageous to us!! lol!! gutter mind!!😆😆

yup i agree.. LOL cant speak more on that..

hannn...i hope ki slowly slowly uska dream completely accomplish ho jaye!!

hmm. it will be by the end of the FF

hihi!!! (hidding face and running)😆😆

aww sharam aagayi? 😆 so cute! 😆

no problem kabhi kabhi zaroori hota hai!!🤢

haan wohi toh!

huh!! such a desperate cheappo!! 😡

hww hww hww... aur koi word nahi mila? aage dekho what he turns into! 😛

hh!! uske jaise ladkoo ko toh jutte chapal se marna chahiye!!!

ouch utna bhi bura nahi hai.. he is so sexy and upar se so nice sher shayei he does! 😳 ek dum flirty type ..and his ishtyle! those glares ko upar uthake ladki ko sir se paon tak scanning karna! 🤣 > 🤢

lol!!!! khoob pitayi!! generally aise mein ladkiyo ghar se nikal dete hai and they dramatically says tum hamare liye mar gayi hoo!! 🤣

lol meri story E.K. type sarhivi same old nahi hai.. 😆 something new.

😆😆hihihii!! u can leak i dont have a problem!!

hahaa... kya leak karoon? ke Rania is Asad's company's owner's wife and is 25 years younger than her hubby? 😲

haha!!! aapka wo lights camera action wala bhoot jaa gaya!!😆😆

haan L..C...A! lol

are ask me!! i have full i dea ki wo awesome hi hoga!!

hehe thank you sistu.. hmm my head feels so heavy.. abhi toh no idea but I have greater expectations and its going to be awesome and I need more time for that.

your welcome...🤗

return hugs 🤗

correction requiered here...it is extra cute dumabooo bade monster bhaiyuu!!🤣

hehe.. ok forgot extra cute.. short term memory loss isilye..😆

are its okkk!!

hmm thank you!

Originally posted by: vidhu1

Lol!! Bhaiyu sab kuch leak karke bolte hoo kya leak karoon!!

lol.. utna bhi leak nahi kiya.. and woh toh malum hi hai na zoya ka operation? and she will die!
🤣 🤣 howww cute... 😳

cute? zoya ka expression dekho phir! 😆
Rania Asad's company owner 😲

hmm part owner.. ek buddha jiski taange qabar mein hain usse shaadi karke ban gayi hai woh! 😆
chalo jo bhi hai it will be intresting!!
haan interesting to hain..
Sulatan...fine he is handsome style bhi acha hai..hmm now dont flirt with him too..lol..but that glaring part!! lol...!!! Literally telling agar wo mere samne hota and would be watching any gIRL lIke that toh by god ki kasam mai tongue us time control nahin kar paati!! 🤢 lol.. I can understand but dont worry he is going to be ...*top-secret*