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Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome update as always

Thank you so much sis!!

Beautiful work

aww really?

Loved AsYas interaction

Glad you loved it1 😳

Najma n Sultans engagement on the way

yup shockingly!

Loved Zoya-Alisha bonding

hmm yup it was nice.. glad you loved it too..

Cintinue soon

next update scheduled for march 1st week!

Thanks big for your comment!!

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

God bro! Such a long chapter

hehe yup it was long... 5.6K words long..

Definitely took a good amount of time to read it

aww Thanks for reading it and spending so much of your free time.. I had been writing for it since 10 days😆 haan 3 days chutti bhi ki 😉

But it was awesome bro

wow really ?Thanks!!

Beautifully written

Thank you tons and tons

The start was amazing. hehe really? You beautifully described how zoya was missing her family hmm yup and her emotions.those were real type LOL Have always loved the flashbacks of zoya with maria and this chapter was no exception hmm me too love it becoz it makes me emotional and happy 😆

Asad zoya romantic scene was cute especially when dilshad catches them red handed lol *no comments* yup it was cute and we will have plenty ahead!

Zoya joining office was sweet yup it was indeed ... especially how the whole family has supported her in her journey haann I loved it.. bcoz zoya would have felt sick at home then...

Then the whole najma and sultan scenario

hmm it was shocking ..

Honestly, not getting any good vibes from this character sultan

hmm his character will have drastic changes.. just wait and watch.. oops read... but I dont want to leak.. at the time of introduction I had said something...

Hope i am wrong!

may be and may not be...

And last but not the least, hmm the entry of the vamp. hehe not exactly though! 😆Well not exactly an entry wohi na.. but a small notice telling us that she is here to bring out the possessive side of zoya exactly.. jealous zoya!

Looking forward to know what happens next

hmm there is so much to say and I'm stupidly hurrying up.. next chappy is zoya's operation, najma engagement, rania's introduction, and ...*top secret* {progress of asya's relationship}

And congratulations in advance for the new thread bro

hehe thanks but there is a small twist! 😉

And thanks for the pm

sorry yeh wala thanks mana hai so not accepting!

Wish you update the next chapter soon next chappy update is around march 1st week abhi to dil_kinaare FF ka update hai.. cinematic action update! but without compromising your health I should look into this! or your studies thats not a prob.. or you will definitely have to face the wrath of your smiley sista OMG sorry in advance..

Anyways. Loved the chapter to the core bro😊

aww glad you loved it smiley-sista Mission accomplished.. but sorry I somewhat rushed and deleted 2 scenes becoz it would have been over.. (8000 words)😆

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome part

Thank you so much sis! 😳
The kitchen scene between them was hot

hehe hot ... bcoz it was kitchen.. right?😆
I loved the update

hmm glad you loved it! 😃
And it was a long part

haan.. compensation for the delay! 😆
So more than happy and contented

wow thank you so much! so glad you are happy and contented.. mission accomplished!
Update soon..;)

update March 1st week! 😉

Originally posted by: ayat20

Beautiful chapter

Thank you so much sis! 😳

Thank god zoya came on time otherwise what would najma done

hmm yup Zoya saved her lil sis in law on right time. Najma is very naive and presently emotionally broke thats why she took wrong steps

She chose a wrong path

yup wrong path.. due to heartbreak.. her family was busy when she had the heartbreak.. and sultan took care of her at that time.. so she finds Sultan as best man for her..

I hope salim err sultan 😆is a right guy for her...hmm lets see how much will he change or not?

Thank god everything is fine with zoya

yup she is fine and happy!

Happy for her

hehe glad you are happy 😉

Who is this raina???

rania? is Asad's boss's wife... in simple words she is also his boss! The antagonist !😈

Originally posted by: mahadev07

comment for ''HIS EYES'',

oye hoye my kulfi sista is here!! yippie! 🤗

cute and lovely update😳

Thanks so much for reading this FF and its updates just for me Kulfi sista!

bhaiyya for the first time i laughed out after reading ur update

wow really glad you had a laugh!!

😆😆..dont know why,, hehe it was actually kinda lovely update...hmm really? but i felt like laughing...hehe good medicine for heart 😉 i might sound crazy..but i really felt soo😆😆

hehe its ok i can understand!

it should have been her eyes rather than his eyes lol kyun?? ...he was the one which seemed more mesmerised in her😳😳.

lol right but zoya too.. 😆

..but still made sense..hmm her mentioning of his blue eyes...

yes blue eyes!! 😆

i guess i have to check it out..after a while..😉

its fiction sis! 😳 I had almost forgot the color of his eyes but coincidently I type blue eyes or dark blue eyes only LOL😆

his suit mentioning had me cracking up😆😆.

hehe.. why??

..board meeting suit.haan office se direct he came na!.after his reasoning session i felt he was soo naive...ahann!!

i know it has reached 9 th update.yup happiily!! .but what to do i am still here..😔 hmm koi baat nahi.. its a long journey.. come on slow cycle speed.. I'm on tortoise!😆

excited to read the next update😛😛

hmm go ahead whenever you got time.. dont stress and do all your lovly things phir jab time mile tab read this.. In reality we are at part 20th and you are at part 2nd! ... just peep into chappy 6 and 7 and 8🤣

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Lovely update Thank you so much Asif bhai glad you loved it.
Asad & Zoya reached London. yup finally Airport scene was nice.hmm real type hehe! Asad being romantic & caught red handed by his mother. lol that was funny.. bechara asad always in romantic mood.. especially in mornings 😆She told Zoya to join her office & liked the way everyone welcomed her. yup bcoz zoya was feeling homesick and she was emotionally down due to it..Najma & sultan mystery finally out yup finally out & shocked Zoya as well as dilshad. yup it was shocking verry much.. They agreed for their engagement.hmm yup to save Najma especially.. and Sultan is not really that bad Hope everything go well in najma life.hmm it will She opened her sister gift yes & surprised hehe haan... & happy to see her family photo. right so happy she was there..There was mistake in that paragraph, oho thanks for finding it.. u wrote ammijaan twice instead of Abbu.hmm corrected LOL.. Plz edit it when u get chance.done.. thanks for telling .. felt so good! Facebook msg scene was good. hehe thanks Zoya told her online sis abt her heart problem.yup becoz she is somewhat tensed if she dies her online sis should not feel dumped she sent a clue... Asad phone rang & she saw a lady name. hehe yup naya twist.. Liked her wife instincts hehe yes.. glad you liked it.. & she wanted to know abt that lady. haan like every wife.. Finally entry of vamp. hmm yup .. not exactly vamp like tv shows but she is a tough character for zoya Curious to know what happen next. hehe as always ... Update soon plz. hmm update is scheduled for march 1st week asif bhai.. please hang on! Thanks for PM

hmm 👍🏼

Originally posted by: vidhu1

Wow..such a lOng and beautifulll chappy it was...
awww...asya's kitchen romance was sooo cute 😳 😳
Hehe..bichara asad..kitni help aur kitni mohobbat!! 🤣
Then zoya's awww sooo cute emotional side was said really very well!! I jUST loved that part in airplane when asad comforted her knowing the turmoil in her heart without her speaking a word!! 😊 such an understanding...
Lol...asad kissing najma hand thinking it be of zoya 🤣 🤣
Then zoya joining her new new office!! 😃 😃 Ammi is really very lovely 😳
hehe i wish future mein mujhe bhi koi aisa hi mile.. 🤣 🤣
Sultan's entry..i dont lIke that guy..why the hell was he starring zoya...huh!! 😡 i should say that thankgod zoya has got a really nice sixth sense that she was able to sense smthn fishy in sultans room...sahi time pe andar gayi thi zoya!!
Haww..dilshad slapped najma 😲 but this was smthn any would do..
zoya ne ye sab kitni achi tarah se manage kar liya...gr8 to seee the bonding between them...
Now i am waiting eagerly for the next part in new thread!! 😆
reading the precap i can tell that next part is gOnna be super intresting
Now last but not the least bhaiyu your poetry was super se bhi upar wali!! 😃 😃
And han thankss for dedication!!
Urs little adorable dhamkane wali sista

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

hmm small note especially for my smiley-sista:

not every human in the world is really born bad... some have very bad fortunes, bad-luck, worst past, big struggle and on going struggles which make them bad but are really very strong and love wanting people... Rania will die in the end of the story... she will be strong gal!

{I ended her character sketch last month --- she will have a short story to tell about herself in her life's end}

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Keep smiling and hugs!

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