Nikhat FS: Finding true love- Part 3 on Page 7 on 23rd Feb

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Teaser:
"Drink dis milk wid kesar then u will definitely have a fair baby like Imraan not a black baby like u," said Haseena wid a smile handing a glass of kesar milk to 7 month old pregnant Nikhat on her godh-bharaai.
Nikhat as well as her family members r shocked. Even Asad n Zoya who got married a year ago were invited(Remember, Asad confessed to Zoya after Mangalpur incident so no slap, no big insults n most importantly no Tanveer. He married her after 6 months of d confession after Zoya shifted her online shopping company head-office in Bhopal. Zoya was 1 month pregnant as they were not eager to have baby soon after getn married while Nikhat got pregnant in just one month of her marriage.)
"How dare u insult our sister?" asked Ayaan angrily.
"I have not said anything wrong," replied Haseena, "Wat will people say if a black baby is born?"
"Ayaan, she is ur elder so u sud not get angry on her," said Shirin.
"Zoya beta, u also drink dis milk so dat u also get a fair baby," said Haseena wid a smile.
Asad got angry n slapped d glass out of her hand making it crash on d floor.
"Wat have u done, Asad?" asked Shirin hurtfully, "Cuz of ur behaviour, my Nikhat's function is ruined."
"As if I care," replied Asad n left wid Zoya.
After d function, Nikhat confronts Imraan abt his mother insulting him n he slaps her for talking against his mother. Imraan never loved her but just married her just his family told him n he was interested in only her money. After marriage, he wud just fulfill his needs wid or widout her will but wud never even talk properly wid her n wud abuse her physically n mentally several times but Nikhat kept quiet as they wud always emotionally blackmail her dat if she talks abt anything to her family, then d people will blame her only n her family.
A week later, Nikhat tells Asad n Ayaan everything n they gets furious. They get her to file for divorce n convince Nikhat to luk for a job. Wen her family denies, she goes to live wid AsYa. Nikhat soon finds a job as a dance teacher in one of d biggest dance academy which is owned by Azaan Mallik(Ashish Sharma). Wen she gets d job, she had 2 month remaining for d divorce to be finalized. Nikhat had prematurely given birth to a dusky but beautiful girl so she lukd for job after d delivery. Imraan n his family r not happy wid a dark baby dat also a girl as they wanted a fair boy. Azaan starts getn attracted to her no knowing dat she is married n recently going thru a divorce proceedings while Nikhat is unaware of his attraction for her. Imraan n his family starts getn jealous of her getn a job wid a good salary. Imraan once reaches her office n tries to persuade her to give him another chance n he will change but Nikhat does not agrees. Imraan in anger raised his hand to slap her but Azaan who saw everything stopped him 4m slapping n threw him out of his office building. Azaan came to knew abt Nikhat but still his attraction did not stopped. Will Nikhat ever realize Azaan's feelings for her?




I can't update my ongoing stories due to heartbreak I mentioned yesterday due to a show but for now I can give a little teaser of my another story which will be TS or FS. I wanted Nikhat's story to go dis way. I mentioned AsYa a little n like one of d writers here who is not seen now I mentioned dat Asad did not slapped her in dis stroy like she used to do while writing a AsYa story. Dis story is mainly abt Nikhat. Ashish is her real life husband n he is also dusky like her. I watched his only one show RSSI. I really wished Nikhat to get her true love.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful concept
Loved reading it
Looking forward to it
Please try to continue soon 😊
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Wow juhi m in ;)
ths is different and very gud
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A very sensitive issue Juhi...I appreciate you decided to write on it :)
Great plot...Glad Nikhat decided took a stand against her in-laws, and with her brothers' support managed to become independent :)

Would love to read more...Continue soon Juhi :)
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Nice concept dear
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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a very very very nice concept..
very realistic.cnt soon
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Loved the concept
loved the way how nikhat stands up for herself
continue soon :-))
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awesome juhi !

it was great!
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Nikhat was truly beautiful and I really felt bad how she was seen as a burden bybher family members
Nice sneak peek

Wanna read more
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