-Ishq Nahin Asaan-AzMa fiction(note @ pg14) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -shimmer-

Ria ki bachi Ff b likhleti hon ?? 😡

Utne din se Mute kiu tha Mode??

I like title..us se zada Story!

update kr b do ab!



arey yee hulk ki tarah gussey wali sakal mat banao.. dar lagta hain...
haan yaar thora bahut likh leti hoon... dusre forums mein likhi hain... iss forum mein yee mera pahela try hain.,,😆... actually have a nack on writing... maine IF join hi ki thi story likhne ke liye..😛😆
actually i was waiting to progress the serial a lil bit more.. itne earlier phase mein maine kabhi FF start nahin kiya... but AzMa compelled me so much..😳

yaar thora too time de do.. kaal hi too update kiya hain...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Aahana.

yaar tu aisa kar isse as prologue karle

fir iss prologue ki story ko middle of the story main dalde
start hi main patha chalega tho story kaise aage badegi
start main mahi and azzu ki nok jhoks
fir azzu getting attracted to mahi
fir azzu trying to distance himself from mahi
fir afrin entry
fir azzu ignoring mahi
mahi getting restless
fir ek party hothi hain
jaha pey couple dance hotha hain
azzu with afrin
afrin wears stylish white gown aisa kuch
mahi gets pissed and mahi does a makeover
comes with a short skirt and 2 plaits
and chesma and braces
all making fun of mahi
fir mahi crying and moving frm ther amaad comes and close dances with mahi
azzu dancing with afrin
azzu getting restless seeing mahi and amaad
afrin makes fun of mahi's makeover
mahi overhears
and pushes amaad and runs upstairs
azzu bhi leaves afrin and goes behind mahi uske peeche peeche
to console her



OMG!! tumne too poori story hii bata di woo bhi suru hone see pahele... sochti hoon yaar... thora vivid idea too mujhe hain ki agey kya karna hain... lets see ki tumlogon koo kitna entertain kar paon..🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Aahana.

kya 😲

sr shaadi ke baad 😲
kya kya kya😲🥺🥺


Yaar tum bhi naa..🤣.. pahelibaar kissi koo dekh rahi hoon ki shadi ke baad SR sunke itni upset hoo rahi hain.. mujhe pahele soch nee too doo ki main agey kya likhungi!!🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Aahana.

me have to go for bath

muma dant rahi hain
jaldi jaao jaldi jaao
take bath take bath
so me going cya
thode time ke baad ya fir kal
kal bhi kuch ideas de sakthi hoon😉


ta daa.. jaldi anna...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ifians


Yaar tum bhi naa..🤣.. pahelibaar kissi koo dekh rahi hoon ki shadi ke baad SR sunke itni upset hoo rahi hain.. mujhe pahele soch nee too doo ki main agey kya likhungi!!🤣

kuch tho kar
chemistry shaadi se pehle hot hosakthi hain
tu kudh sochle😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ifians



OMG!! tumne too poori story hii bata di woo bhi suru hone see pahele... sochti hoon yaar... thora vivid idea too mujhe hain ki agey kya karna hain... lets see ki tumlogon koo kitna entertain kar paon..🤣

yeh sab kuch lik dal masala keliye
fir he goes to console her
but she doesn't want to listen
fir khan begum announces nikaah with afrin
yaha afrin is a childhood frnd or nieghbour aisa kuch
afrin is also rich lik azzu
iss wajese khan begum announces
fir mahi shatters
and goes to jungle
jungle main zoro ki barish
mahi fully wet
and drenched
azzu comes to mahi
touches her from behind
lightening strikes
thunder bhi
mahi gets scared and hugs azzu tightly
aisa kuch 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Aahana.

kuch tho kar

chemistry shaadi se pehle hot hosakthi hain
tu kudh sochle😳


haan woo too main bhi maanti hoon.. shadi ke pahele wali chemistry ki baat hi kuch aur hain.. shadi kee baad woo wali baat nahin raheti!!😎😆
sochti hoon yaar... jaise hi kuch idea aa jayein i will update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ifians


ta daa.. jaldi anna...😆

me aagaayi
fatafat 🤣
aur ideas ke saath😉
Edited by Aahana. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Aahana.

me aagaayi

fatafat 🤣
aur ideas ke saath😉


aur bhi haoin baap re.....🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ifians


aur bhi haoin baap re.....🤣

peeche ki page dekh
ROFL

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