#2-AsYa-FF-Ek Pal Jo Dil Mein Utar Jata hai-ch22-pg#30-28/12/15 - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

215

Views

22.2k

Users

23

Likes

291

Frequent Posters

--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Yayy!
RES for jas, shailu, nayab,simmo,sum,binshi,sathya,asif bhai,juhi and all others following

🤗
Thanks sue 😳
--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Nona unres your post on both my stories
NnonaA thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay

Nona unres your post on both my stories

sorry sorry sorry sorry... Ja rahi hoon abhi... Kaan pakard k sorry
--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
OriginalJuhi_04 thumbnail
Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 9 years ago
+ 1 Like

Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Dis Ayaan is too much😡
Upar se dis aapi not letn Zoya live in peace wid her never ending marriage plan😡
Hope Zoya gets to know dat Ayaan kidnapped her
I don't like Zoya agreeing to marry anyone just cuz Asad betrayed her😲
Why Asad hurt Zoya now wen Ayaan left her?
NnonaA thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

+ 1 Like

Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Dis Ayaan is too much😡
Upar se dis aapi not letn Zoya live in peace wid her never ending marriage plan😡
Hope Zoya gets to know dat Ayaan kidnapped her
I don't like Zoya agreeing to marry anyone just cuz Asad betrayed her😲
Why Asad hurt Zoya now wen Ayaan left her?


Thank you so much juhi
Ufff tu aur teray sawal
But I like them
I like explaining my point
Ok now zoya is planning something else (that's a big hint)
And Ayaan didn't left zoya, he brought zoya home to make Asad say bitter words to zoya
NnonaA thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04



Thanks Sue for Resing🤗


+1 Like

Mera kabhi kabhi like button kaam nahi karta hai😆



Awesome Update Nonu👏😊
Ayaan is such a jerk😡
Making Asad hurt Zoya😭
Hope Zoya is not in dark for long but comes to know soon dat Ayaan kidnapped her
Iss story me Zoya actress hokar bhi thodi dumb hai. Use bahot der tak pata bhi nahi chala ki 2 bhai use bewakuf bana rahe hai apne identity ko lekar aur ab use thoda bhi doubt nahi aa raha hai ki use kidnap kaun kiya hai. Hope she soon realizes Ayaan's true face.
Wen will update d other half part?
Beshabri se I am waiting😆

khair hai I like this idea hmmm juhi the innovative.
Nahi re abhi zoya ka chalaki wala part aya hi nahi
Haan start mei thorda dumb ho gai thi but abhi daikhna uss ka tashan start keroon gi next chapters mei.
Yup she will definitely know the whole story when her detective mood will turn on 😆
And for u only her mood will turn on soon very soon 😉
jas91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Such a emotional part Nona
Yeh kya kiya jo mna kiya tha wahi kiya na😡
pouts Appi jise I don't like much now will fix Zoyaan mrg
& Zoe MU main han bol degi
Hate Ayaan he's a cheapster
Angry on Zoe 4 being so dumb since d start
& Angry disappointed & Sad 4 Asad 4 all d reasons
btw is bar 2 part padke bhi mujh short lga updt Nona😆
aur han who teri pariyon wali kahani ka kya hua jiska naam mujhe yaad nahi uska updt kab degi😆
OriginalJuhi_04 thumbnail
Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA

khair hai I like this idea hmmm juhi the innovative.
Nahi re abhi zoya ka chalaki wala part aya hi nahi
Haan start mei thorda dumb ho gai thi but abhi daikhna uss ka tashan start keroon gi next chapters mei.
Yup she will definitely know the whole story when her detective mood will turn on 😆
And for u only her mood will turn on soon very soon 😉



U take ur own time on how u want to show anything widout rushing. Its ur 1st story so don't mind if we get to read 10 more parts😆.
NnonaA thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Me

ye kya tha re jalebi?
Ittu sa update?
Well it was written well
i thnk ab tk ka best kyuki emotional level pe u nailed it
even ayan asad dialougs in beginning were gud

agey daikh aur hai
Thanks yaar
Actually problem ye hai k Minh se heavy duty ronay wale scene nahi likhay jatay its just not my cup of tea. Phir bhi thorda boht guzara ker liya 😕

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 7 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".