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Posted: 9 years ago
HALF PART:- UP

HALF PART:- NEXT PAGE

next update after the short summary of story from chap 11-20.
Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago
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Yayy!
RES for jas, shailu, nayab,simmo,sum,binshi,sathya,asif bhai,juhi and all others following
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Me

ye kya tha re jalebi?
Ittu sa update?
Well it was written well
i thnk ab tk ka best kyuki emotional level pe u nailed it
even ayan asad dialougs in beginning were gud
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kya yaar nona itna chutu sa update
Ayaan really has gone mad 😡
Poor Asad he is crying 😭
And zoya don't know that is ayaan
Love u 🤗
Edited by shailu123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
chapter 20- part 2
Zoya was gone on a mute mode but her heart was not keeping quiet on what she heard there was a deep conversation going on. The heart was trying to convince the brain that what happened was just a misunderstanding, may be Asad don't know about me being here, the brain was on its own spree but the heart knew that brain isn't wrong though. Silent tears were continuously flowing from zoya's eyes.
Ayaan saw her and found his plan working but he knew that he was not getting the happiness which he wanted from his this act something is not right, his heart told him. At one stage he felt that he is gone to extreme then he shook that thought off of himself and satisfied himself by saying that he is doing right by getting his love at any cost. Ayaan was about to tease zoya for what asad did to her but he somehow stopped and reason was unknown by himself too.
Asad was extremely broken, he has done something which his heart has not approved. He was in pain for giving his love an immense pain. Although he was not there but he can tell what zoya must be feeling. She must broken to the bits. And this was killing him slowly.
A day passed and none of those three slept, zoya by only the thought of betrayal, Asad for breaking her trust and ayaan by strange feel of guilt.
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Zoya 's aapi and jiju came back India to find nobody to receive them, this was totally strange for them as zoya would have come no Matter what. But since they knew her busy schedule so nothing was unexpected. They rented a car and went to home. In the meanwhile aapi was extremely happy.

Zeenat: anwar aaj mei boht khush hoon.
(Anwar today I am really happy)

Anwar nodded and smiled.

Zeenath : bus ab allah keray zoya k liye ye khaber waqai khush khaberi ho
(Now I just hope that this news turns out to be a good news for zoya)

Anwar: inshallah!!!

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Zoya was like a dead tied on a chair suddenly a voice made her happy "ao ghar chalein "(come lets go home),although deep inside she knew it wasn't him. She looked up and her faint smile fainted.

Ayaan: zoya ao ghar chalein.
(Zoya come lets go home)

Zoya: aap?
(U?)

Ayaan nodded and started untieing her.

Zoya: nahi aap chordain, mr.khan aien gai wo le kr jaein gai mujhay.
(No u leave, mr.khan will come and he will take me.)

This angered ayaan a bit but deep deep inside a feeble sense for guilt was building.

Ayaan: zoya wo nahi aein gai...
(Zoya he will not come...)

And then zoya looked at him shocked while he continued to untie her. Her eyes were red and puffy, even her tears have dried but her eyes were still crying.

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Asad: mei kuch nahi janta, kisi bhi terhaan ker k pata kerain.
(I don't know, do whatever It takes.)

Asad threw the phone, he was not leaving any possible way to find zoya. He wanted to find her on his own without accepting any of ayaans deals.

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Aslam ayaan's friend had hired some goons for his own work after the kidnap of zoya ,they came to ayaan for that purpose.

Goons: bhaijaan aslam miyaan kuch kaam diya tha, uss kya ker na hai.
(Bhaijaan aslam had given us some work, what do we do.)

Ayaan: acha mei...(ayaan gets a call)...ek minute.
(Ok I ... ( ayaan gets a call) ... One minute.)

Ayaan: assalamoalikum!

Asad: ayaan khuda k liye zoya khaan ?
(Ayaan for God sake where is Zoya?)

Ayaan was about to say but the goons came and talked to Ayaan while ASAD was hearing.

Goons: acha bhaijaan uss ka kaam khatam ker k hum chalay jaein gai.
(OK bhaijaan, after finishing its work we will go.)

Asad heard this and he misunderstands that they are talking about zoya.

Ayaan: theek hai.
(OK.)

And to his horror ayaan agreed to it.

Ayaan: bhaija...

Asad: ayaan aisa kuch mat kero, tumhari mushkil mujh se hai, jo tum kaha gai mei kero on ga, aisa mat kero.
(Ayaan don't do such thing, u have problems with me, I will do whatever u say, but don't do like this.)

Ayaan: aap hi k liye acha Ho ga... Mei zoya ko ghar la raha hoon.
( it will be good for u, ... I am bringing zoya back.)

Asad was happy to hear this but sad too that this might be his last meeting with her.

Ayaan: khuda hafiz!!!

Ayaan cuts the call leaving asad devastated and goes to zoya who although being untied was still on the same chair like a statue.

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Precap:
Asad zoya face off.
asad: mei aap se muhabbat nahi kerta
( I don't love u.)

Zoya shocked and broken.
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Zoya in tears and determined says to her aapi: mujhay qubool hai.
(I accept.)






Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA

Res
ACTUALLY I FELT THAT THE PART WAS VERY SHORT SO I WILL GIVE ITS OTHER HALF TILL TOMORROW.
Aur jootay khanay ka mera koi mood nahi tu kal shrafat se second half update ker k pm keroon gi 😆


Yayyy aur half part😃
Plz let Zoya know abt Ayaan soon dat he had kidnapped her instead of her being clueless for long



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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update jalebi
kya baat he
tu badi interesting karti ja ri he story
i still hate ayaan😕
just ab me chahti hu
tu ayaan ko picture se nikaal phek
and asya paas paas rakh
fir dono beth ke pass pass khayenge😆😉
jaldi update
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally catch up last few parts..
and i must say it was mind blowing..u have written emotional scene beautifully..
m shocked to see that Ayaan has became insane but thank god thoda sa guilt to feel hua..but Asya having mu now..
and precap make me scare ..why zoya agreed?
i mean kis baat per usne qubool hai bola??p
plz nonu jaldi se update kar next part..
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Yayy!
RES for jas, shailu, nayab,simmo,sum,binshi,sathya,asif bhai,juhi and all others following


Thanks Sue for Resing🤗


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Mera kabhi kabhi like button kaam nahi karta hai😆



Awesome Update Nonu👏😊
Ayaan is such a jerk😡
Making Asad hurt Zoya😭
Hope Zoya is not in dark for long but comes to know soon dat Ayaan kidnapped her
Iss story me Zoya actress hokar bhi thodi dumb hai. Use bahot der tak pata bhi nahi chala ki 2 bhai use bewakuf bana rahe hai apne identity ko lekar aur ab use thoda bhi doubt nahi aa raha hai ki use kidnap kaun kiya hai. Hope she soon realizes Ayaan's true face.
Wen will update d other half part?
Beshabri se I am waiting😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Omg this evil aayan
I hate him to the core

Zoya poor soul
Can't wait Asya face off


Beautifully written Nona
Loved it
Lots of love
Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago

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