#2-AsYa-FF-Ek Pal Jo Dil Mein Utar Jata hai-ch22-pg#30-28/12/15 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
Really very heart breaking update
Hate this ayaan 😡
Hope things get cleared soon between asya
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
gr8 part
ayaan is really behaving cheap
omg misunderstanding between asya
i hope you dont separate asya
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very good update
But it made me sad
Ayaan is a total bas***d
How can he do tht to his brother who gives him whatever he wants
Poor Asad had to break zoya heart to keep her safe
So anzee is in India with news
Dear god precap is scary
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
arghhh again
asad trapped by ayaan 😡
poor asya
it was another cliffy end


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Posted: 9 years ago
precap was like 🥺
when this idiot ayaan will be going to die 😡
feeling sad for asya 😭
and looking forward to next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
2nd part is emotional one 😭
So ayaan feeling guilty but can't admit 😡
Precap is so sad 😔
Continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

I kind of changed the style of my story so that it becomes a longer one hope u guys like it

Zoya asked ayaan to take her to asads residence. And he compiled on her request. Zoya was a lifeless but she still had hope that there must be some misunderstanding. She had this hope and faith that his asad is not like what she is thinking not in her worst dreams.
Zoya went out of the car and marched straight in the hall where Asad was standing. He was more than happy to see her, and his relief was clearly visible on his face, zoya set all the wars that were going On in her mind and ran to his asad and hugged him, he raised his hands to hug her back but then ayaan entered and he retreated his hands and pushed zoya away. Zoya was shocked at this. He parted her from himself tearing himself apart. A questionable call came from zoya'a mouth "mr.khan?" Asad turned around and shuts his eyes while zoya'a eyes were wide open to notice every action of him. Finally after composing himself he said. "I ...I don't love u ...ms...ms.farooqui." It fell like bomb on zoya, she was expecting everything but not this from him. Not only zoya but ayaan was shocked too. But zoya was in no mode of all this she stepped toward him and held him by his arm and turned him toward her self forcing him to see in her eyes. Zoya said stopping her tears "say it facing me, say it while looking in my eyes, say it again mr.khan..." He was looking everywhere but not at her. Zoya held his face tight in her hands. "Then why did u say that, why?" Asad jerked her hands away and turned away again "ms.farooqui plz...leave". Zoya was now real angry. "Mr.khan do u have any idea from where I am coming, do u have any idea how I saved my life. Anything could have happened, I...I waited for u for so long but u didn't showed up why mr.khan why." Asad who was turned around was made to face zoya by herself "look at me mr.khan look at me... Will u Still say that u don't love me." Asad stopped for a bit while zoya and ayaan waited for his answer. Asad "yes... I don't love u." Zoya'a grip on his arms suddenly became weak and finally left his arms. Ayaan closed his eyes as if he had no strength to bear all this a tear escaped his eye. Asad's words echoed in zoya's ears. Asad never had found him so lucky before zoya'a arrival in his life but then even he always was worried for his this much good luck, now he think himself as a misfortune for zoya. Zoya stepped back saying "mr.khan doesn't love me...he doesn't love..." She was walking backward while looking down."then why did he promised me...why..." Zoya looked up and shouted "than why did u promised to never leave me, why did u made me fall in love with u. Why...? Why mr.khan why?" Asad was broken to see his zoya like this "zoya...I..." Asad couldn't help himself. Zoya says" u know what mr.khan when I was small I used to pray that why allah miyaan why did u made me orphan, then my this wish was lost under the love of my aapi and jiju, then I saved my heart because I didn't find anybody really in love with me, everyone loved my character that I played or they loved that actress, and I promised not to love anybody but my this promise to myself was broken by ur love,..." Asad had tears in his eyes while zoya was blood eyed,"I wish that I haven't ever had come to India, I wish I never had met u, this is the punishment that I got for breaking my promise." Zoya turns around and leaves his place while he kept calling her. Ayaan was uncomfortable seeing all this and he also made his way out. Ayaan called zoya and she replied to be left alone. Zoya walks out in the dark cloudy night while Ayaan comes to his car. Asad breakdown on the floor. "I love u zoya I love you"... Ayaan kicks his car and say " all is going according to plan then why doesn't it feel good, why." Zoya sat under a tree and it starts raining, she cries unstoppably "why Allah miyaan why this happened with me why?" Both Asad and zoya were unable to bear the pain while Ayaan was still trying to conclude his distress.
In the morning zoya gets home all worn out tired and like she haven't slept all night. Her aapi and jiju were waiting for her when she comes in to find them, her aapi came to her and hugged her." Where were u zoya! We waited for u whole night how much we were tensed do u have any idea about it. We were about to inform police." ; "Kya farkh pardhta hai." Zoya replied. Her jiju felt that something is wrong. " zoya u ok., right??" ; "More than ok." Zoya said with a mocking smile. Jiju asked again "what happened zoya?" ; "What could happen, only now things are better." Zoya says and jiju still not convinced asked zenath to take her to her room.
In the evening aapi and jiju were waiting for her but she never came out. Jiju asked zeenath to check and bring her downstairs. Zeenath was about to go when phone rings and she picks up. It's shifa zoya's manager asking if zoya is ok and that when will she resume. Zeenath set the phone on hold and asked jiju about it, he said her to tell her to wait for at least 2-3 days. But before zeenath could inform her that zoya came from behind saying tell her that I will resume from today only. Jiju questioned her "zoya??!!" ; "it's enough now jiju I don't want anybody or any incident to influence my life, I have had a lot not anymore..." Zeenath tells shifa that she will tell after sometime and then Hungs up the call. Zoya turns to leave when. Jiju calls her again " zoya u know u can tell me whenever u like" Zoya just stopped to listen but then left without saying anything. While zeenath came to anwar and both are tensed as to what happen to her.
Ayaan was sitting in his room and playing guitar not usual that he plays sad tunes but today. Rashid comes in and asks him that what happen to which he gets up and replies that nothing. But then rashid tells him not to act too cool as he knows something is bothering him. "Abu I don't know I don't feel good, u know I do whatever it takes to get what I want and I am always happy no matter how harsh I have gone but not this time." Rashid is not aware of what ayaan is talking about. "When this happens then u should leave what u were chasing, and start a fresh." Ayaan turns his face the other side. Rashid know that ayaan didn't liked his this advice but soon he will realize that he is right. Rashid gets up to leave but turns around and says "we have got a positive response from where ur alliance were sent but still we are waiting for the brides answer." Rashid leaves while Ayaan is not happy to hear this.
Asad is sitting in the garden where dilshad came and sat besides him. "Asad u have done wrong." Asad didn't replied but looked down instead. "Zoya really loved u and u... U finished everything Asad u ruined everything." ;"I know ammi... But she doesn't deserve me." Dilshad turned to him "who gave u this right to decide Asad, zoya is old enough to decide what is wrong and what is not for her then why did u do this to her." ; "what could I have done ammi if not this, today she will find hard to forget me but later it would have because impossible." Asad said while looking down. Dilshad says "no this is not dilshad ahmad khan's asad its rashid Ahmad khan's son asad Ahmad khan." Asad closed his eyes to hear his name, while dilshaad continues "I saw love in the eyes of that girl for u and what u gave was pain only pain, that girl even don't know the reason for which she is been rejected,(dilshad removing the tears from her face) no asad whatever u did is not justified, not now not ever." Dilshad left the place where asad was still looking down notable to face anyone and his mothers word echoed in his ears, mind and his heart was crying at the highest pitch that what u did was wrong. He stood and remembered his moments with zoya and said "I love u zoya and won't leave u no matter what.." Saying this he ran to his car.
There aapi was talking on phone and was asking for some more time. She Hungs up the call and says "we should talk to zoya now" while jiju is not still willing "zeenath don't talk childish, she is not herself and u r saying to awake her worst dream." Zeenath tried to protest that " if not today then when see anwar we just have to tell her that she got a marriage proposal from ayaan Ahmad khan (zeenath turned around) that's it." But to her surprise zoya was already standing there. While jiju face palm himself zeenath was like "oops" but again there mouth were drop down open to what they heard, zoya says "mujhay qubool hai" just then asad entered and heard this. while his jiju came forward and said "no zoya ur aapi was just.";"I accept the proposal of ayaan ahmad khan." Asad was shocked and he stepped back. For him it was like the earth have shaken. He couldn't imagine this. He wanted to stop her but she sounded like a robot asad so wanted to shook her and bring her to senses but how he was the one who sent her too far from him. Her aapi was happy but jiju was not. Aapi called for a celebration and zoya accepted that too... Now it was getting more and more suspicious for jiju. Zoya went upstairs while asad went back to his car and drove to his home. Jiju expressed his view but zeenath told him that "he the AAK that zoya was talking about". Jiju remember zoya mentioning it. Zeenath continues "that is why zoya agreed I knew she would I am so happy" zeenath hugged anwar while he was still not at all convinced.
On the other hand asad could only hear one thing the acceptance of zoya for ayaan. His heart questioned how could she? His brain replied "because u made her";"But I never told her to do";"but u never stopped her too";"I am hers only ";"but she is not yours" this was killing him he was question himself for being even alive for all he did was unforgivable and he is being punished for that.
At night zoya was still awake and was thinking about asad only her tears also dried but she was still crying. A knock made her come to her senses agin and she wiped her tears and asked to come in. It was her jiju "jiju plz come in" jiju smiled and sat beside her "Zoya u know when u first desired to become an actress I was happy that u have become old enough to chose what is good for u." Zoya was listening "u r the best actress for me but today..."zoya was still listening and she somehow knew what he wants to talk about "jiju I said that I am ok with the proposal" ;"ahmmm, u r OK with the proposal." Zoya knew she couldn't hide anything from him and breaks into inconsolable crying and hugged him while he tried to console her "Zoya life is not a movie, in which u can live with acting ur whole life, I want u to be happy not compromising" while she was still crying. She still managed to say "jiju I ...I am so sorry I thought I could be strong but I am not...I am not that strong...jiju I ...I am fed up.";"sheesheee!!! That's enough zoya who told u that u r not strong I know that my zoya is very strong look at me...zoya look at me I won't ask u what happened till u will tell me yourself, but accepting the proposal just like this is not the solution" She was still crying and he was about to go when she held his hand and told him everything. "I loved him jiju I loved him but he...";"Zoya I can't say anything right now but let me tell u he doesn't hate u. As much u have told me I am sure that there is something more to it and hey when ur jiju is here why to fear(Zoya smiled at him) that's like my zoya aur iss mr.khan ka bhi kuch kerain gay hum." Zoya hugged him and then jiju left her room. Jiju says "I hope what I am thinking is right "
On the other hand aapi informed shireen about zoya's answer and the congratulated each other. Zeenath invited them to their house. Shireen told everyone in her house and the news reaches ayaan ears too. After all what have he done and what he was feeling he again got misunderstood that maybe she like him but he was still not happy, not happy that much.
In the morning came down and saw his jiju arguing with the aapi "zeenath I told u she is not ready why did u called them";"anwar zoya is ready she told this yesterday u forgot";"I know but..." They saw zoya standing there confused and the door bell rings. The servant opened the door and came to anwar "some ayaan ahmad khan and his family has come" while jiju and zoya are shocked aapi is happy and before anwar could reply she told him to bring them in. Jiju from there saw zoya and zoya could tell that he is saying that he didn't knew all this. They came in zoya saw ayaan and was even more shocked "he is ayaan... Oh my god he is mr.khan brother" Zoya was in the middle of the stairs when they came and sat and aapi called zoya but she going to them went running upstairs and ayaan knew that he was expecting this only. Jiju went up there after zoya and aapi tried to handle the situation. Jiju went to zoya and said "Zoya ...zoya I didn't knew all this...I...";"jiju he is his brother " jiju could relate "what?" ;"he is Asad's brother ayaan" jiju couldn't understand what the hell is going on. He took a deep breath and held zoya who was on a verge of crying again "U know what zoya... We shouldn't have let u come India alone... U have made kicherdi";" jiju!!!";" what more could I say, ur boyfriend is not yours and yours boyfriend brother, who is not the real brother of your boyfriend is going to be your fianc, I mean seriously zoya...wait...no...its...its perfect";"wait...what??u tell me what should I do now?";"do what u r best at"Zoya looked at jiju and jiju smiled "act" and zoya was like what? "Yes those jerks made my zoya cry twice now we at least have this much of right to make them cry at least once." Zoya smiled and hugged his jiju "u r the best jiju...I love u";"I love u too!"

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Sorry for before, actually I don't have my laptop so updating from mobile is very difficult.
Sorry once again.
Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
U do grt with ths new style of writing too jalebi
ye part tu pehle b update kar chuki hena bt?
Or m i mistaken?
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ek minute! Ye meri jalebi hi hena? Itni long update 😲

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