AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 41

will azzad sacrifice mahira to get rid of the curse..😲

or will he keep safeguarding her

and even after knowing that she is the special one to be sacrificed

will he be on her side ??

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Uff, awesome update, Shreya.

Again, the way you have created the tale in the context of the medieval times is really enchanting- kudos!

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

sheesh ! I wrote to u a whole detailed reply and instead of getting posted that damn thing got deleted.now typing it again !
Thanks for the pm. Another amazing update.
The story is getting more interesting day by day.
thank u ! its you readers' encouragement that is pushing me to fare better than the last one.
Even Mir has guessed that Azaad has some feelings for Mahira and hence placed the bet. Poor man he has won the bet but doesn't even know about that.
mir guessed daal mein kuch hala hai from marihar's disappointment on azad's refusal to come down. and he sensed bechaini in his sarkaar huzoor as well, he was never like that before...so clever banda easily made do do ka char 😆

At least he had lost the bet, but Azaad has completely lost himself.
yaa, dil kho baithe bechara and doesnt know how to react 😆
He even said good night to her. So sweet.
yes he stood entranced on his place looking at her receding form in the darkness. he couldnot bear her going out of his eyes. actually he thought to go after her 1st, then his good sense prevailed and he stopped himself, and when she was about to take the final turn that would take her away from his sight,he called goodnight and sighed ! mahira couldnot hear the sigh ofcouse, but the walls echoed his goodnight like a deep passionate murmur to her ears .
aah it felt like watching a movie when i imagined the whole scene in my head !😃
To be frank, I love Adaq more than Azaad and he interactions with Mahira are very good. In his conversation with Mahira he was mentioning " us ". Is it just him and Azaad or even Mir and Latiff included? So they have found that she is running from someone.
no us is only azad with adaq.
First gift that too he had written her versus in his handwriting. He has memorized the words thst quickly. Poor boy, so much in love.
yes, the lines were magical, the ladka is at the brink of falling headlong, ab aur kya hoga !
and he is a sayar too...those lines touched his heart.
Amaad the flirt. Can I push him off a cliff or will be a tool in bringing Azma closer?
Amaad !!😡 ermm i dnt really think he is gonna bring azma closer...he has his own ulterior motives to be so gracious and courteous ! so yaah ! push him off the cliff. I will supply u glucon d !😃
Is the maid referred in the book is Mahira?
the whole stanza is a riddle ... so cant ans that part...guess ur best aur mujhe batao !
You are an amazing writer and I like even reading your replies for the comments given. Good job.

thank u ! soo soo much for such nice reviews. I like replying my readers especially when they ask interesting questions 😃
and since u like my replies too, here is a long reply for u !
let me know ur name,I usually address my friends by their real name / nick name . and if they r too shy, i do the naam karan 😆
let me know what u want to call me..

Originally posted by: noesha

I absolutely loooved it

ooohh the attraction is SOO there.

Love how awesome you describe it. Its like im watching them. Thanks for the pm!

Update soon!

Originally posted by: -enchanted-

Another beautiful update. I love the tactic you used to describe Mahiras figure. Since story is from Mahiras POV, Azad Miyan can stare all he want, but wont be able to describe it for readers benefit. So you had to make Mahira herself do the honours and you did 😆.


yes, that is the thing. the story is from mahira's pov, her journey, her monologues, her thoughts, her desires and sympathy for the lost prince ! I just cant randomly write azad's thoughts no matter how much I want to. yehi prob hai, if u r lit student.u just cant go out of system😆 joki intey ratta mar mar ke sikhayi gayi hai humme 😆 so had to do some clever plot device. I am glad u liked my description. have u noticed she is describing herself as if everything in her body is unflattering...the things we girls totally do ! dusrey mar mitte hai, khud ko toh srif kamiyan nazar aate hai 😃. and i think that the sign u r a humble person not some narcissist bimbo ! and mahira is more concerned about her other finer qualities, her intellectual disposition, she is absolutely proud of her brain rather than her body...and that thing just makes her irresistible to azad !

I love how you use the dialogues to convey the feel of that era in a subtle manner. You could have wrote that she had a well endowed body and that would have been alright too. But writing that she had the body of a courtesan and not a simple mans wife just reinforces the fact that we are talking of a bygone time and also cleverly expresses the thinking of the society in those times. So very good job there.
yes in those days perfect hourglass figure was rare and highly sought for. and life of common people was not luxurious , only high priced courtesans who were patronized by chieftains, sultans could indulge themselves in maintaining their beauty and charm. That jabheda khala woman was vicious hag and she was extremely jealous of mahira's mother who was as beautiful as her. so she always compared her with tawaifs knowing nothing would be more humiliating and painful to her.

So AzMa meet finally, and how! I have noticed that whenever AzMa have met whether knowingly or unknowingly, were also the moments when Mahira had her guard down or let free of her inhibitions. First time they met in garden, and Mahiras tongue developed a mind of its own, then when he came to Ladies section, Mahira was putting some very pertinent questions to Adaq Khan, then the visit in library where Mahira had her guard as well as dupatta down😆 and now this when Mahira is singing and twirling around!! I dont know if its a coincidence or Azads presence somehow allows Mahira to be her true self.

yes ! i intentionally have made it this way to show that mahira never felt intimidated by him, and he was intrigued by her boldness and honesty from the very first.

Coming back to this scene... Azad catches Mahira singing and also teases her indirectly even though its quite visible that she is mighty embarassed. Bad manners, Mr Khan, but I approve😛.The eye lock was well described. I think Mahira got more than even by that tongue biting, even though she had no idea that her innocent gesture might have disastrous consequences for Azad Miyan. No wonder he was so gruff in his reply of joining her in library. But Mahira Madam took it otherwise and curtly dismissed him. Superlike😆
lol lol ! poor banda's body was already on fire and then she had to tilt her head lower and bite her lower lips !😆 he went stiff instantly😆😆 the guy was like am i mad ! if i spend time with her in that deserted library with her being this level infuriating and intoxicating, i will deffo lose my head and take her then and there🤪☺️ whereas she thought he was a snob and felt insulted !! kya MU bY God !

So Adaq Khan saw the bruises and is mad at the one who inflicted it on her...I am glad that she told the truth about her forced engagement to Adaq Khan, would save her some trouble in future or so I hope. I have said it before too and saying it again that I love the bond between Mahira and Adaq Khan. So much warmth and care these two share. Its very special and please maintain it against all odds :)
yes, he is such a cute papa bear, warm and cuddly and fiercely protective of his cubs !
Even I was confused about when Azad saw Mahis bruises. Just read your response to another reader and got the details of how he saw it through his voyeur session😆
lol lol ! u read that! as i told ya, these are extra doughnuts for my loyal readers. and I give them away generously. all u hav to is ask !

Is Mahira a handwriting snob? I thinks so and I love it. Moi too share this trait with Mahira 😛. But she loves Azads writing despite it being untidy and atrocious...Awww...If this is not love, what is ?😛So she gets Azads gift and is off to dream land but her stay is brief.
me 3. I actually shared my fixation for nice handwriting with my heroine ! and my husband's handwriting is totally as horrible as azad's 😆
I love that line about Azad being like a luxuriant script which needed a lot of patience and skill to be unravelled. Again you linked the comparison to Mahiras job in a subtle way making it all the more relatable.
I loved the allusion myself😃

And this virtuous maiden with flawless soul that would sacrifice her life willingly to end generations of misery...Its Mahira na... I know its her only.
As u say
Khair that is in future so I wont worry too much about it. Amaad Miyan toh current day Amaad Miyan se bhi fast nikle... Flower and invitation to fair, all in one smooth stroke. Poor Mahira is going to have tough time handling him if he continues to bestow his attentions so freely on her. She cant say no directly as he is a noble and yet she cant encourage him by consenting to everything he says.

battameez behaya aadmi, this amad ! die, son of a bitch, die...rot in hell,may maggots feast on ur man parts 😡😆

And whats with this completely unneeded apology? You are doing a fantastic job with this FF yaar. Every update is so detailed and interesting. Dont you get it by the length of responses we type?

I laabh reading this review posts and njoy replying them !baas yehi dar lage rehete hai kahin bore na hojao tum log !
Sometimes I myself get embarrased by how long my responses turn out😆 But then this is the first FF ever which I am following and commenting on so regularly, and I have something to say on every part of update, so bear with me😳
oii no need of apology ! this is my full fledged ff and my dream project ! so i implore u to write even longer so that u can receive ridiculously long replies from me😆