AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Ishq-Dua

Shreya you are truly a brilliant writer and you get better and better with each update.👏

thank u so much dear. I feel itz because of u guys encouraging me so much with lovely feedbacks, its acting as a driving force to sought utmost perfection, sadly I am still far from that. u know the ideas teeming inside my head are even more dramatic and beautiful, I wish I could set them into words ! still trying, and chanting hum honge kaamyab ekdin 😃
Your descriptions just make the reader feel like they're seeing the characters and places right in front of them.

thank you dear, when are u gonna update ?

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I liked your description of Badi begum and Mahira's body shapes. I totally saw Aditi Gupta and Surbhi in your description.😳
Adaq Khan is such a sweetheart. I'm loving the father-daughter bond between him and Mahira. I'm so glad Mahira had found such a warm and friendly person who is like a father to her.

yes he even disliked when lautif and mirbaksh teased her in a friendly manner. he is like nobody disturbs my princess. totally warm, cuddly, papa bear. I like him so much, and enjoy writing about him.

The way he was pained and angered when he saw her bruises and his response. Ahhh I'm loving this man.

BTW when did Azaad see Mahira's bruises??

haww ! u didn't realise ?? no way !

arre library mein. Azad miyan was stalking our girl remember ?? and mahira took off her dupatta because she thought she was alone, she used it a makeshift rug and sat upon it. so her arms, neck , upperchest were bare, and the bruises were prominent even from a little distance.

So Azaad's father committed suicide. I wonder what made him kill himself.

yes, very tragic ! you will learn very soon what really happened.

Mahira twirling and singing Latif's song is the cutest thing ever. But the best thing is that Azaad saw her. EEEKS!!! My feels when both stood stared into each other's eyes.

haye I was writing, daydreaming giggling and blushing all atonce, multi tasking issey kehte hai !

Naughty Azaad saying he heard a "female" voice singing lol and our smart Mahira changes the topic by mentioning the library. 😉

oh yes, actually 1st he said he wont come down, fir thought against it, akhir Mahira was there...then he was coming to the hall hesitantly all of a sudden a melodious voice singing and quite lost in her own dreams. and he was walking in complete dark, he has natural night vision eyes naah ! so no candle or lamp needed. so he hid in the dark and saw everything and then couldnot help coming out and meet Mahira. Actually if he wanted he would have let mahira pass even without realizing his presence...he has predator like stealthiness and agility.

Omg Mahira wanting Azaad to join her in the library by telling him he would make her work quicker.

yes she was speaking logically. itz his ancestors library.he went there since his childhood, and studied there all his life, he would know things better.But azad miyan was busy staring and dreaming other hot stuffs😆

.She's no less than our Azaad. Naughty girl she not only says that but then goes on to bite her lip and tortures our Azaad who is trying so hard to hold that beast inside of him.😆

yaa bechara went stiff instantly ! and ladki ko pata bhi nehi chala what she actually had done.😆

Another thing I loved in this update is the gift Azaad kept on the table for Mahira. He wrote her own lines inside the book with his own sloppy handwriting and with his own sexy hands. haye Allah *melts*

hain naa. u know I actually have Mahira's handwriting fixation. my handwriting is very neat and artsy and I appreciate people who have nice handwritings, nothing irritates me more than horrible scrawly scripts...but then azad miyan kuch bhi likhe with his sexy hands u would melt like butter on top of hot toast

My condition would have been like Mahira's and worse after seeing that gift. She actually started to imagine how her name would sound in that deep husky voice of his while he leaned close to her. hayeee DEAD.🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

hahahahah ! me too ! I toh replayed the whole scene in my head hundred times , then wrote it, still not really satisfied with my depiction...I really need to learn how to write hot stuffs aesthetically 😆

Who is this Sultan Allauddin Shah and who is this virtuous maid he mentioned in that scroll?? The story is getting more interesting.

Virtuous maid pard will be disclosed later...its a riddle.

Amaad the jerk is back in the picture. I already can't tolerate him in the show and now he's in this story as well and he wants to take advantage of Mahira's innocence with his diabetic lines and sneaky motives. I hope Mahira figures out his truth very soon. He is taking her to a village fair hmmm I sense some interesting events going to happen in the next update.

yep see the title of the next chapter on the front page...u can guess whatz gonna happen😉

Overall lovely update in fact this is my favorite update so far.

Can't wait for next update.

thank u ! is this one ur fav ?? then wait for the next 😉😉

P.S. I haven't heard this particular song for the wonderful A.R. Rahman but I enjoyed listening to it. Thanks for providing the link.

I love Rehman ! especially his earlier creations !😃