Thread 2 Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part 13 updated(15/7/16) - Page 41

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I want more of asad's side of the story next part..

All were right in their place I can't say who was wrong.

When is the next part coming up.

Thanks for updating Jassu...

🤣Maine jassu type kiya auto correct ne Jesus kar diya...😆

Originally posted by: asyafeelz

Hi frnds

This is d PM id

if u want PM 4 this story u have 2 buddy this acc. only

Plz don't send reqsts 2 my real id Jas91 which many readers do

& plz leave ur reviews.

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Iss baar res hi badi mushkil karne mila😆 so its also a spot 4 all my lovely readers🤗

Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi, Goti, Adu, Srash, Rada, Sam di, Tehsu, Chandu darling, Anu(Annie), Trish, Aish (Aishwarya), Mayur, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Nikki, Nayab,

& every silent reader who left a like on last updt😊

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

mine

unres

sab se pehly kaan khol kar sun ly

mai katti hoon 😭

mere sath kya hit and miss kheling 😡

tu mill zara

or haan yeh kya hai

itna sa update???? 😡

kya yaar bestu jese hi padhny mai maza aata hai update muk jata hai

meko long update de

samjha na

warna 🥺

coming to the update

it was written beautifully

aaj kch hat-ke update tha

pehly se bhi zaida mast likha hai

i want asad more here

loved zoya and api jeeju scene

i wat asya scene

u said next ready hai

to plz post na

chal abhi aaj mast update likha

actually meko mast laga shayad sad tha na is liye 🤣

ja maaf kia abhi or update de

issi baat pe hug ly ly

i missed u 🤗 or haan love u bhi... 😳

chal meko akely mai mill ab 😃

Main darti nahi hun tujse oyee😎 & mera kya fault aajkal tu khud missing hai filmon ka chaska tujhe mujse door le gya hai

ittu sa inna lamba part toh hai bache ki jaan legi kya Maza frooti ke jaise le 1 1 sip karke sara 1 saath thodi milega

hatke Mast hmm me likey this compliment😉

shayad sad tha LOL ready hai par like toh ho & bas 2 din hi toh huye updt diye😆

time nikal ke aa kabhi

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Hello Beautiful, Yes, it's me, you don't need to rub your eyes, it's actually me here. And you can say FI-NAL-LY to yourself and myself 😆

Missing you beautiful and finally I read the two last chapters and I must say, you nailed it completely.

Awe no need 2 mention I have missed u so much Sweetu & in d end I thought mayb ur too busy so lost intrest too but u don't know how happy I m 2 have u back again tyt hugs Sweetu🤗

Hope Job's going well & U have setted well wid new place & hose.

how's d weather treating u bdw it must b still a bit cold there.

About story lol I m just managing it somehow don't know if its that good as u say or not😳😆

Chap 7

You started everything as perfect and amazing date, I could imagine perfectly the cosy and lovely place, you describe it poetically. 👏 By the way, I love Zoya's dress, damn, if I was a man

Hehe poetically I don't think I was that good but if u find so😳 I believe beauty always lies in d eyes of beholder😉 & not only Zoya even Asad is also to die 4😉😆

Anyway, everything went smooth until, I almost chocked when I read. You made her confess all of sudden, poor man, his heart has stopped like mine. I was like what did she write? Did she really confess like this? I read two times to be sure. WHAT A TWIST JAS, you killed me.

🤣 I know right 4 weeks I was thinking how 2 make it work but nothing worth was coming in my silly mind & I almost give up wid that note 2 quit last time & d nxt day magically this thought pop up that why not just make it plain & simple. Cuz u know in real world not all ppl have that patience like our Jahanpanah 2 wait months while his beloved was waiting d confession. She had her fears 4 losing him & thus she had 2 be all fearless & bold & confident. Know it was a shocker but why should boys have all d fun a girl can b bold too right😉

And I understand Asad's reaction, he was so shocked, I mean if someone tell me like this, I will run and never come back 😆. I am emotionally challenged that's why.

LOL I m sure most of us will definitely go 4 d run🤣

I don't know why I felt Zoya a bit capricious here, telling him so suddenly, I expected from her to be more mature, or at least, trying to be around here more often to make him get used to her. BUT, in the same time, I was really proud, because at least, she will get fixed and get her answer quickly and not break her head with hesitation.

Absolutely that was d whole point😊 I believe there r 2 kind of lovers 1 who keeps waiting 4 d right time while others r quick in action if they feel it they say it. Yes that's another thing that it can lead 2 shock & awkwardness btw d two😆 but its better if u'll get ur answer Yes or No initially than 2 keep loving that person 4 long & get rejected in d end. Heartbreak after long time mayb more painful not that I experienced it just guessing😆 Main toh love guru jaisa sound kar rahi hun🤣

In this chapter, I went through so many emotions, but all positive and I wondered if I will able to do it. Well let me tell you : NO, I won't do it, because I am really shy and coward to be rejected.

See I told u we live in fear of rejection but we might b saved from heartbreak if we decide 2 speak our hearts out.

I said it a lot of time maybe but I love this Zoya of you, she's gutsy and fearless and I wished to be like her.

awe I wish we all can b as confident & fearless wid ourselves Khair God made us defected piece & we r happy wid it😉😎😆

Chap 8

How to forget our Hasseena bi? I used to hate this woman, really her voice, her mimics, she was so irritating, and in your story, she was still too 😆

What 2 do she was 1 such person of a kind🤣 & I kept er d same here too 1 masala mirchi aunty honi chahiye thi na story main😆

So coming back to the main characters, as expected, Asad is a good guy and he didn't want to hurt her, but I don't think we can blame him. Some person need time to realise their feelings, and they need to go through step before falling in love. Your both characters are opposite and this is the beauty here of them. I can't wait to see their next encounter, how both will react. Interesting can't wait.

Exactly ab dono hi characters Bindaas hote toh can't imagine what would b d outcome of this story🤣

However, I thought that it was Asad when she opened the door but no it was her family. I was like : naught Jas, you played with your reader's heart 😉 and I like it.

Just become dramatic mayb not naughty😆

The scene of Zoya crying in the bed constricted my heart, I felt for her as I went through breaking heart and I don't know why, we are always on side on the bed, it was like a place to be 😆. You just forget the ice cream or chocolate, it's better to have tears with filled stomach

Awe Rada tyt hugs & yes don't know what connection we have wid our beds & pillows who only become our pain partners when we r in tears😆 & lol nxt time will keep that in mind Iss bar Zoya was fully filled wid her lunch date 🤣

Really love her appi and jeeju, they were surprised too, but they managed well. She again was a bit like a spoiled child in her answer with them but at least, she knows what she wants and it's good.

I will just say yes my Zoya is super childish 😆 but that's what we all r in our hearts😉

I can't wait to see when they will meet again and how they talked. I am sure Zoya will talk to him like it was nothing putting him in confusion or she will again run behind him and he will run away.

Lets see🤣🤣

So many combinaison and so many twist to add, even if I feel that you are preparing something about wedding and proposal , am I right 😉?

Shhh...I m not saying anything no noo no!

Nice and intriguing twist you add here and can't wait to read the next part

& I m scared now how will readers take it cuz now I feel its not gonna b that exciting 2 what all r expecting😆😳 isse kehte hain pair pe Kulahdi marna aage se will not write nxt part already😆

So sorry for commenting so late sweetheart, I didn't get the time to sit, to read and to think about it I hope I redeem myself a bit

TAke care of you and hope to read you soon my dear friend

Tyt wali hugs Rada Sweetu 🤗 & don't not 2 say sorry I already new u must b busy wid work just that I missed u & ur detailed motivating comnts.😳 2day felt like ages after I m talking 2 u & I m so happy that we could communicate.😊

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update jas👍🏼
But yaar Asad ne na kyu bola? He liked her as a friend though
Haseena is really irritating😆
Awww my poor Zoya 😔
Well Zeenat is right in her place and Zoya also
Continue soon😳