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Hellooo Readers🤗
Hope all u lovely ppl have been fine & doing well in ur lives.😊 I know I took almost 6 months 2 updt this 1😳 I know there was no need 2 mention d time but galti ki hai toh manne main kya hai😆.
So I was unable 2 updt cuz I imagined this part differently but that was long time ago & that time I couldn't pen it down due 2 personal issues & later it just vanished from my head.🤔 I wanted this part 2 b exactly like I imagined but I was not able 2 remember that even after so many attempts & I started losing it.The thought of readers still waiting patiently used 2 make me feel bad & at a point I started 2 stop it last week😳 but than magically I got this idea nxt morning itself & I wrote down this part widout any delay this time😆😆.
So all u lucky ppl d nxt updt is here. So plz scroll down & enjoy.😃
Also I haven't replied 2 d comnts on previous chapter but I have read them all & really thanku u all & tight hugs 4 being so generous & supporting me always🤗
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Chapter- 7
Zoya was in beautiful private lawn of the luxury lounge. She was a bit early actually. All night she couldn't sleep thinking of their lunch today. Dressed in a simple blue sundress she looked nothing less than a doll. She kept her hair down with minimal makeup.

Zoya's dress
Sip & Bite was her favourite place when she needed a breather on a busy day as its close to her house & also because it was luxurious yet it gives total privacy to their customers.
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Last night after Zoya calmed down from her excitement, She personally called the manager of S&B to reserve a special private table for two on her name. She was very specific of what she wanted yet to be on the safe side she came early to make sure everything was as per her liking.
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Once Zoya arrived she asked the manager to directly escort her to her table. A huge smile came on her face to see the open gazebo she asked for, under which a table for two was set. White curtains were used to make Gazebo look more appealing & cozy. Big bouquet of pink & white roses arranged beautifully were placed parallel to the pillars. To her luck the weather was also very cool as it was a little cloudy day.
Taking a satisfied nod from Zoya for the arrangements manager left to attend other customers.
Zoya placed her phone on the table & started admiring the setting again. Coming close to the pillar she looked in the sky as the cool air passed making her soft tresses blow with the wind. She took a rose from the nearby stand of bouquet & smiled breathing in its fragrance. Holding the Rose in her hand she came back & took a seat on the vacant chair. She unlocked her phone to check the time & sighed seeing it's still 5 minutes before their fixed time to meet.
-Hmm ab aur kitna wait karayenge aap...Zoya tiredly complained to the Rose held in her hand.
-IS Phool se kiski shiqayat kar rahin hain aap Miss Farooqui... came a deep voice from behind her.



Need not to say it was Asad.
Zoya got startled a bit & turned quickly to see Asad smiling at her. Zoya got awestruck seeing Asad dressed like Adonis himself. She was sure no other man can carry such a casual look so spectacularly like Asad.
Asad was dressed in a plain white shirt with ripped jeans & his aviators were giving him those killer looks. For sure if looks could kill Zoya would have been dead by now.
-Hi Miss Farooqui ...Asad said smiling lightly.
-Haaye... Zoya said with dreamy eyes still in a daze.
-Jee..
-ahb woh Mr Khan Aap I mean you are right on time. Zoya framed her sentence difficulty finally coming out of her dreamland & getting up from her seat.
-Yeah I like to be punctual aur traffic na ho isliye I left early. Waise mujhse pehle toh aap pahunch gayin. I m impressed. Asad said teasingly removing his glasses.
-Nahi woh toh i live nearby na isliye. Main bhi bas abhi abhi aayi thi.
-oh. By the way ur looking nice.
-Thank you Mr Khan. Aap bhi kuch kam nahi lag rahe. Zoya complimented good naturedly.
-Thanks. Here this is for you. Asad forwarded a little box.
-Yeh what's this Mr Khan.
-Gajar ka halwa hai. Ammi ne Subah bnaya so
-OMG gajar ka halwa. Zoya shrieked excitedly.
-I know i know Maine toh mana kiya kaha aap kahan khayengi but...
-Are you kidding me Mr Khan...Zoya narrowed her eyes. Who doesn't like Gajar ka halwa. I toh just Looove Gajar ka halwa. Yaad nahi aapko us din interview main maine kaha tha that i don't believe in any diet. I m big time foodie.
-Oh yes i just forgot.
Both of them took seats while Zoya quickly opened the box taking in the delicious aroma all ready to dig in.
-Koi baat nahi agli baar yaad rakhiyega aur aunty ko meri taraf se Thank you bhi kehiyega iss ummm Yummy halwe ke liye. Zoya said in between having big bite of halwa & moaning over the delicacy.
-You know Miss Farooqui there is something called sharing.
-umm no way Mr Khan this is all mine. You can have your share at home. Zoya said covering the dish with her hands.
Asad shook his head at her innocence.
A Waiter came with juice & some refreshments & left after placing them on table.
-Waise Mr Khan your family knows ki aap mujhse milne aaye hain. Zoya asked expectantly.
-Nahi maine kaha ki apne ek frnd se milne ja raha hun.
-Oh..par kyun?
-Kyun aap meri frnd nahi hain?
-No i didn't mean that.
-It's alright i was just teasing. Actually apka kehta toh sab log pta nahi kya kya matlab nikalte & main nahi chahta tha koi misunderstanding ho isliye bas.
-Aap toh aise baat kar rahe hain Mr Khan jaise pehli baar kisi ladki ke saath date pe aayein hon.
Asad chocked while having juice & looked at her with wide eyes.
-Mr Khan Are you alright? Zoya enquired
-yep I m fine just.
-Take it easy Mr Khan. Aap toh aise chuonk gaye jaise..
-Nahi aisa nahi hai par aap koi aam ladki toh nahi hain na. Aur phir itni badi celebrity ke saath lunch koi choti baat toh nahi. Very smartly Asad turned focus from himself to her.
-Mr Khan now you are embarrassing me. Aaj main yahan apse celebrity banke nahi apki dost banke bethi hun so no more such talk ok. Zoya fake scolded.
-OK point noted. Asad chuckled.
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Both continued eating & having light conversation enjoying each other's company. Zoya was a superstar for the world but she finds happiness in the smallest of things.
Asad was seeing her carefree side & was quite impressed. That day during her interview itself he found her to be very different from other celebrities he has been with. He has heard of many absurd tantrums these stars throw at their team & people they meet but Zoya had been polite & sweet during all her encounters with him.
A waiter served them their desserts after they were finished with their lunch.
-By the way your interview did came out really well. Infact channel ki TRP bhi kaafi achi aayi hain all thanks to you.
-That's nice, infact mere kayi friends ne bhi taareef ki hai but Mr Khan don't give me all the credit. Aapko bhi equal credit milna chahiye i toh have just been honest.
-And that's the best quality in any man. Asad said sincerely.
-Or a woman. Zoya giggled pointing it out.
-Ofcourse. So this one goes for our successful interview. Asad said raising his spoon full of molten lava cake.
-Cheers... Zoya clicked there spoon together before taking her's in her mouth.
Soon both ended up laughing at their silly action.
-That was so crazy
-I know right
-hmm
-No i mean it's not my first time so that's why. I have three very dear crazy sisters. Asad explained.
-Haw! How mean Mr Khan wait let me meet them than i'll tell them what you call them behind their backs.
-Trust me Miss Farooqui if you'll meet them you'll agree with me only.
-Oh please han i m sure they must be really sweet.
-Well usmain toh koi shaq nahi thodi jhali hi sahi but humare ghar ki rounak hain woh. They are really special. Asad said fondly.
-And they are very lucky too jo unke paas apke jaisa itna pyara sa bhai hai.
-Hmm Tareef ke liye boht boht Shukriya & thanks for this lovely lunch too. I really liked your company.
-Me too Mr Khan. Zoya said smiling sweetly looking at Asad.
Asad nodded with a smile & started eating his dessert. But Zoya's mind was totally in chaos. She was smiling outside but inside her heart was beating so loudly like bullet train. She knew that their little lunch date is soon going to end so she had to act soon but nervousness made her tong tied. She scolded herself mentally for being so nervous. All through the lunch she wanted to say it but every time she opened her mouth no words came out.
-Come on Zoya you have to do this. Aisa moka phir dubara jane kab mile na mile. Just go for it baby. After giving herself a little pep talk she opened her mouth.
-Would you like to have anything Mam. Waiter asked politely.
Zoya looked at him with murderous eyes ready to kill for spoiling her chance. Poor waiter get scared a bit but Asad's voice saved his life.
-No thank you. Would you please get us the bill.
-Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khan. It's my treat remember. Zoya said outraged.
-Par
-Now come on Mr Khan don't ruin the moment. Warna mujhe phirse apko convince karne ke liye blackmail karna padega. Both chuckled. And you just ask your manager to add it in my account. Zoya said too sweetly to the waiter who blushed understanding that the girl doesn't want to be disturbed.
-You know Miss farooqui today i found out ki aap ziddi bhi boht hain. Asad said shaking his head picking his spoon again.
-Mr Khan I Love You. Ignoring Asad's jib Zoya boldly confessed.
By now only Zoya's heartbeat was fast but hearing this even Asad was stunned & stared blankly at Zoya.
-What ?? What did you said? Asad asked looking at Zoya totally lost of words.
-You heard it right Mr Khan. I love you. Zoya said more confidently this time.
-Zoya do you even realise aap kya keh rahi hain? Asad asked recovering his bearings.
-Main janti hun abhi aapko yeh sab ajeeb lagega but yahi sach hai mai aapse pyaar karne lagi hun. Aajse nahi from the day i saw you. Sunshine orphanage yaad hai aapko Mr Khan jahan aap last Sunday gaye the, maine wohin aapko pehli baar dekha tha aur aapko dekhte hi dil main ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hua lga jaise...
-Miss Farooqui yeh sab filmi batein hain. Aapne ek baar mujhe dekha aur bas... Asad said cutting her short
-Yes Mr Khan yahi sach hai. Zaroori nahi barson saath rehke ya janne ke baad hi aap kisi ke liye feel karen sometimes just a moment is enough to make you feel for someone. Main janti hun aapko yeh abhi filmi lag raha hai but trust me Mr Khan yahi meri Zindagi ka sabse bda sach hai. Zoya voiced sincerely feeling emotional.
-Miss Farooqui aap samjhne ki koshish kijiye aap jo feel kar rahi hain woh pyaar nahi ho sakta its just ..just an infatuation.
-Please Mr Khan aap mujhpe trust nahi karte fine but iss tarah mere pyaar ki insult toh mat kijiye.
-Miss Farooqui try and understand it's not possible.
-Kyun kyun nahi Mr Khan. Aapko main pasand nahi hun yan aap.. Aapki life main koi aur hai. Zoya asked very difficulty fearing the answer.
-Aisa kuch nahi hai Zoya. Asad firmly replied getting up & moving away from their table.
Zoya too got up from her seat & came to stand where Asad was standing. Facing him she continued again
-Than why? Aap mujhse pyaar nahi karte fine but atleast aap mujhe toh ek chance de sakte hain. Bas mujhe mere pyaar ko uski manzil tak pahunchane ka ek mauka de dijiye Mr Khan. Zoya pleaded eyes filling with unshed tears.
-Miss Farooqui aap samjh kyun nahi rahi yeh pyaar nahi sirf aapka fitoor hai aur kuch nahi. Jo mauka aap maang rahin hain usmain siwaye dard aur regret ke apko kuch nahi milega. Asad angrily said.
-Than be it. Main teyaar hun har ek imtehaan ke liye. Aap jo chahenge jaise chahenge main karne ko teyaar hun but please give me a chance. Trust me please. A droplet of tear fell from her eyes saying this.
-Yeh jante hue ki iss rishte ka kal kya hoga main aapko iske liye encorage nahi kar sakta Miss Farooqui. Asad firmly stated.
-Mr
-No Miss Farooqui mujhe pehle pta hota toh main khudko rok leta. I don't know meri kis baat se apko aisa lga ki I m right choice for you. But truth is Zoya ki hum ek dujhe ke humsafar nahi ban sakte. Isliye behtar yahi hoga ki aap bhi yeh baat apne zehan se nikal den. Aapse milna meri khushkismati thi lekin isse badkar humare bich aur koi rishta nahi ho sakta Zoya. Kuch bhi nahi...
-No Mr Khan please.. please aise mat kahiye. Main ab aapke bina yeh life imagine bhi nahi kar sakti. Please Mr Khan aisa mat kijiye mere saath. Zoya cried holding Asad's shirt.
Asad closed his eyes & fisted his hands on his side hearing Zoya's crying bitterly into his chest. When it became unbearable for him to see her like that he decided to stop her.
-I m really sorry Zoya but this can't happen. Saying so Asad gently removed Zoya's hands from his shirt and started walking away.
Zoya who was barely standing with Asad's support fell down on her keens & started crying seeing the love of her life going away rejecting her without even giving any chance to their love Her Love. Hot tears keeps falling down her face like a flowing river.
Their table was in a private corner that's why she could cry out her pain not caring about anyone watching her and that's what she did.



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so how was it crap or super crap😆😆 jo bhi hai ab toh yahi hai😳. I already said i m not coming up wid anything best so this is it i could manage.😊
So this was actually a very difficult twist in d story i mean i was not getting how i make Zoya confess. And when i decided 2 close d story d nxt day magically i got this idea 2 just do it simply & i did that. Acha hai yeh nahi woh toh ab aap log hi btayenge.😳😆
Don't complain about d length cuz its 10 pages long in word don't know why every1 said that part was short.😕
give ur honest reviews but plz don't b too mean also kafi time baad likha hai.😳
& lets see how soon i give d nxt part 😊 I have it planed but not written lol.
Oh yes 4 nxt part give me 50 likes atleast😳
like always hit & like & leave some comnts.😃 & forgive errors if any.😳
Silent readers u have left likes till now plz keep doing that.😛



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Res 4 my IF family
Heenu mumma, Pinku papa, Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,
& also
Goti, Adu, Srash, Rada, Sam di, Nims, Choco,Tehsu, Chandu darling, Anu(Annie), Trish, Aish(Aishwarya), Mayur, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Nikki, Nayab,
Hope I didn't left any1 😳😆
& heartiest Welcome 2 the new readers will look forward 2 ur comnts😊
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Res for Affu BF Arshu Choto Tehs Choco Saima Aapi Nim Mayur Binnu Sue Annie Shama Sum Nayab Anopama Asif Abi and all lovely readers of my Bestu 😛
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Yeh bhi
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sab se pehly kaan pakad ke sorry for being late 😳

and tight hugsss bestu 🤗

i'm sooo happy to see u back as a writer

abhi kkuch bhi hojaye updates pe updates de or yeh mat sochna kesa likha hai

abhi yaha likhny k koi hume paisy nahi deta

hum apne mann se likhty hain na

so bindaas reh like me 😎
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Ek or
unres

coming to the update

beautiful attempt bestu

bohat acha laga

specially Zoya ka dress and Asad ki pic hayyeee

lunch ke arrangements were too good

best scene was hi and hayeee ❤️ 🤣

or yeh kya hua 😲

seedha I LOVE U bol dia 😲

zoya toh badi bold nikli 👏 😆

asad apni jagah sahi hai par usko ek chance to de

abhi dekha zoya kitna royi 😭

ab aagey kya hoga

meko asya ki fikar

overall superb update tha

now update soon

love u bestu 🤗
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