ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

YaYyyay
oh freak! Mini di ki shadi mere dimag se hi nikal gai
unke liye kuch to karna padega!
And abt update titir gimme a hug pehle 🤗
u left me speechless really really
so ths time will nt say much bt jo mujhe bolna he wo to bolungi 😆

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Starting with the epigraph uff idk how many times i've told u and wud keep telling u that i absolutely love ur epigraphs always ❤️
ths one was very thoughtfully penned and i adore the depths in ur writing
ths was nt only beautiful bt also filled with a tint of optimism
it gave me hope and positive vibes and m really grateful i am following ur stories
i learn wherever i go and u titir ...ur effective writing style makes me stay at peace and think over life's philosophy
cheers and claps 👏
always be like ths

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Update ... Kuch kehne ko nahi he shandar!
Right frm zoya fainted to the determined asad at the end
ths update was flawless
so deep emotions and that u describe beautifully ❤️
I've always loved stories frm asad's pov and ths one is unique indeed
titir r they having some kinda psycological issues? Both them?
Loved how khushi take care of her
asad helped her while he himself was in a mess of unfinished thoughts!
U have no idea what u wrote grl! Beautiful! Beautiful
i Love each line of ths update! Asad's feelings...hs care and then after seeing her hs reaction...then zoya calling hm asad...their eyelock...that heartwarming scene when asad said he wud nt let anythng harm her...zoya's thanking hm ...hr reactn after watchng hm...her resolve to stay away while asad decided to keep the promise...
Ths all written exceptionally fantastically magically beautifully ❤️
update ths supersoon
it wud b interesting to see zoya trying to avoid hm while he keeps trying to be with her
the mystery of dreams getting solved
can't wait to read more

ur so disappointing

and stupid and mujhe gussa aara 😡
how can u call ths utter crap! Khabardar jo fir kabhi esa kaha

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Gaya pg
happy diwali jas 🤣

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asya7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Gaya pg
happy diwali jas 🤣

happy diwali sue 🤗 🤣

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Kaha gayab thi tu? I missed u a lot and lot

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

res
unres

Amazing chapter as this story I must say. Actually, I don't what to say, I am lacking word to describe your chapter. I can say a lot of thing but in the same time, it will be less to what it has to be.
As usual, it was really well writen and we could see Asad's view in this chapter who went throught the same turnoil. But instead of her, he didn't faint 😆. i guess this is girly thing 😳

all the scene was worth to be read, you write well and describe perfectly everything, I could feel the thing going on as slow motion. I forget about the fact that they didn't even see each other face completly and when you mention, I was like : woow, indeed it increased more their fears and the connection between them. I will call this chapter strong magnet and not musibat magnet 😆. Their soul knows each other, like only the heart has seen what eyes need to search for. asad was ready to find answer but not Zoya, she was scared and we can't blame her, if just some eyes drove you crazy what about the whole person. I felt for her in this chapter.
I like Asad in this, he didn't think twice and did what he had to do without hesitation, I guess he will have to fight to bring her to him and force her to talk. Their next encounter will be also worth to be read.

Again, Asad has vision of her and some common past. I was thinking maybe they have been killed years ago, and they came back and they will have to find who killed them? Hypothesis, and if it's not the case, I will for sure write a story like this, but for sure not now 😆.

Thanks a lot for the pm and chapter after chapter, my love is still the same for this story, gripping, so gripping

PS: I know i was supposed to write less, but I can't 😆

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asya7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Kaha gayab thi tu? I missed u a lot and lot

don't ask me 😭
i was buried under a tons of tutions 😭
and was completely draind out energy and net balance 😆
what are you doing?
something special for diwali? 😉
and i also missed you alot 🤗

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ashlesha2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#289

ress

unress

main kya kahu

main agar kahoo this is heaven

main kehti hoon it is awesome

i say i adore it

main qubool karti hoon it is fabulus

i appreciate ur effort as wonderful

I admit it is awesome

me is completely lost

I really find it excellent

i openly declare it is outsatnding

but i really dont know

main kya kahoo?

kho gaye hum

aapne haato mein

jee karta hai choom se aapke haath

man karta hai fanaa ho gaye aaphi parts mein

it is out of the world

asya hospital hotel were jannat in my laptop n my room

i wished this heaven would cnt n nevre stop

i wish i could stay in heaven only but how unfortunate i was when my eyes caught hold of the concluson part

my heart cried bitterly

but mind consoled it saing

;di will update soon'

bye bye

waiting for the next part

cnt soonish

thanks for pm

thanks for the banner credits

remember i m always with u

loving u

cheering u up

supportimg u up

and also pagling u😆

bye bye

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: asya7
don't ask me 😭
i was buried under a tons of tutions 😭
and was completely draind out energy and net balance 😆
what are you doing?
something special for diwali? 😉
and i also missed you alot 🤗

oh poor baby
mai is bar nthng special
fracture hena to rangoli b ni bna payi me