ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38 - Page 23

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

haha bas dete rahungi esehi agar tu jaldi update karde😆😆😆
yar c'mon tu update kar plsss

😆 your wish is granted my lord( taking a dramatic bow)
I have two exams on tuesday and after that i will post the deleted part of WOLR. So you will get a fresh update if that on the weekend hopefully 😃
Durga puja is starting from 19th and i will get whole five days off. So if circumstances are in my favor than you will be floded with updates and may be surprise os(s) 😉

Originally posted by: asya7

😆 your wish is granted my lord( taking a dramatic bow)
I have two exams on tuesday and after that i will post the deleted part of WOLR. So you will get a fresh update if that on the weekend hopefully 😃
Durga puja is starting from 19th and i will get whole five days off. So if circumstances are in my favor than you will be floded with updates and may be surprise os(s) 😉

are kya baat he😃
shaandar yar
chutti mana and humari chuttiyaa bhi happening karde
i so want to come to bengal
but can't
yaha itni chuttiya ni milti na
khair...tu retype karke post kar
and then i'll meet you on that thread
m sorry me abhi tak waha ni aayi
kya kare hectic days...aur i want gud amt of tym to review thr
coz its my fav na😃😃😃

and kya??
surprise os
wo bhi os(s)
haayeee...jaldi kar jaldi

wish u luck for two remaining exams titir🤗

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Res😃
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<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">First, it's never too long when it's a beautiful and amazing chapter, but however, it's good that you stopped her, to let me collect my emotions like the characters.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">It started beautifully (like all the chapters of this story), you know those last months, I went through kind of fears, knowing that my life was going to change, and I saw signs, many of them telling me that I am about to take a huge step in my life, but I didn't want to believe until it happened. You may understand what I am pointing to. Your first paragraph, about fears, was just what I felt those last 4 months, I couldn't write it or express better than your words.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">One of my reader (Kabhi-Asya) told me one day, that a story said a lot about the writter and I must say that you know about human's conflict and emotions. Reading this part, was like a heart to heart talk. And I wanted to add that even if those last months I didn't cross those events in my life, I would for sure felt your words, because, it was human being and matter of life. I wanted to resume your first part with this sentence, that came into my mind long time ago.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">as long as
fears will remain in our hearts, borders will never fall apart (borders means physically or emotionally).</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Next part, was discussion with Khushi, we can see how close they are and how they are supporting each other. It was also interesting that you mention both of their jobs, so Khushi shared the same work as Asad and Arnav. I don't know if it's a hint for the up-coming part of your story. Her words to convince her was really beautifull, and was so true. We always have to face one day, but as I said, you are only going to face your fears, the day you are strong enough to face them.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zoya finally decided to go to the party, and here when I read that you are playing hide and seek with them, I was thinking : oh no, she is not going to be sadistic, please, but after I understand why you did this. Just to prepare us for the most beautiful and breath taking scene of the chapter.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">What to say about it, it was just like a dream, I could imagine it perfectly, you describe all the details, necessary for the readers to imagine. Her hair caressed by the wind, their breath which was erractic. I stopped to breath just like them at this moment, everything was so perfect, the moment, the time, the night, the wind, the reflection of the night.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">You didn't let them meet in front of everyone, you gave them privacy and describe the perfect meeting. I felt like the time has stopped when they finally saw each other. No words were prounounced between them, because, it was again a heart to heart discussion or I must say soul to soul talking. This moment of the chapter was just amazing, really you nail it. It was beautiful written, perfectly described and dreamily penned. Hat off to you.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">They knew each other, their bodies moves with each other. At this time, we can feel all the emotions that was trapped inside of them. I am now feeling that they shared an old life where they were seperated for a reason. But maybe I am wrong.😕.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zoya came back to earth but not him, I hope we are going to see his pov soon about this, even if you mentionned.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">This chapter was just wow, all the details in the scene, all the emotions, all the words can't be better. You stopped the time, and I wished I could write like you.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I can't wait to read more about them and their feelings. Your story has everything I love, everything, E-VE-RY-THING. And I wished to see more readers for your story.</font>

<font color="#000066" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I am already a fan but you know it😃</font>

hey rada🤗
First of all I am really very sorry for not replying earlier to your comment. life sometimes become really hectic and that's what happened with me . hope you are not angry at me 😳
rada, I seriously don't know what to say at in reply of this beautiful comment of yours. i have read this many times and still don't know what to say. you have been one of those amazing writers we have here who have inspired me to start writing and these words coming from you means more than a lot to me. you are one of my role-models in terms of writing. your way of using words, describing emotions has aways left me in awe. trust me I adore your writing your a lot and have always wished i could write like you 😃 so can imagine how much this means for me 😃
i can't exactly guess what happened with you during that time but i am glad you could connect with my thoughts. i am really happy to be able to make that emotional connection. and i am sure you can describe this more beautifully than me 😳

😆 i seriously don't know what to say. this is the first time someone said like something about this to me. i just write what i feel from my POV about a certain emotion and i am happy you are liking it.
yes, the line is absolutely true as fears are the main ingridiant which makes the wall and prevent them from falling apart. once we come face to face with those fears and overcome them, we find that we also have erased those borders 😊
yes the girls and the boys share a great bond and it is a important part of the story. he he 😆 you surely have a good guessing power . i cant reveal much now but obviously it is a hint of the upcoming part of the story as besides being an intense romantic story this is also a suspense thriller and that phase will start very soon 😉
😆 i am not a sadist at all as i myself can't bear sad things for my asya. so don't worry 😃
this story demands a lot of hardwork to make it imaginable and to make readers able to connect wit their emotions. it is a great relief to know that i have succed to an extent somehow 😳
well, first it wasn't planned private but then i changed the plan as it wasn't just feeling perfect to me. so i changed it and i am glad that i did this as readers are liking it. at first i was really nervous regarding this but now i can be relieved 😃
😆 for now i can't reveal anything. keep guessing as i really love it when readers do that 😉 i want my readers to experience the same journey which asya are going to go through . i want them to experience the same questions , emotions and guesses. i want them to discover the truth along with them. hopefully the whole mystry behind this will be surprising 😳
i will surely giv his POV.Don't worry.
thank you very very much for these lovely compliments.
i am very glad that you are liking it and it have your topics of interest. hopefully i will be able to do justice to your expectations and you will love it more and more with each passing chapter. i wish you wish of more readers come true 😳
it is an honour to have a fan like you for a new writer like me. 😃 the next update is coming in 8-9 days hopefully, if circumstaces approve 😃

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

wish u luck for two remaining exams titir🤗

thank you so much surbhi🤗 you are really very sweet 😃

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

are kya baat he😃
shaandar yar
chutti mana and humari chuttiyaa bhi happening karde
i so want to come to bengal
but can't
yaha itni chuttiya ni milti na
khair...tu retype karke post kar
and then i'll meet you on that thread
m sorry me abhi tak waha ni aayi
kya kare hectic days...aur i want gud amt of tym to review thr
coz its my fav na😃😃😃

😃 just keep fingers crossed ke koi nayi musibat na tapak jaye mere upar 😆
awww but why? it would be great if you can come here. you will love it more for sure 😃
we also don't get much vacations but since it is our biggest festival , we get tese 5 days off. it is our only relief for whole year. no wonder we start waiting for from the day it ends 😆
i will try to do it fast. my exams will end tomorrow and then will retype and post. i wil meet you there then 😃
hey, no need to say sorry at all. i understand your situation very well. take as much time you want. i also didn't reviewed for UL 😳
i love your reviews very much. so i am dying to see your reviews on that one too. and now hen you have called it your favourite, i am more eager for your your comments 😉

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

and kya??
surprise os
wo bhi os(s)
haayeee...jaldi kar jaldi

😆 😆 😆
just wait for my vacations to start. i am planning to bomber you all with my bakwass 😉 as it is the first time i a writing os 😳

Originally posted by: asya7

😆 😆 😆
just wait for my vacations to start. i am planning to bomber you all with my bakwass 😉 as it is the first time i a writing os 😳

are we love bakwaas yar😆
waiting!!!😃

Originally posted by: asya7

😃 just keep fingers crossed ke koi nayi musibat na tapak jaye mere upar 😆
awww but why? it would be great if you can come here. you will love it more for sure 😃
we also don't get much vacations but since it is our biggest festival , we get tese 5 days off. it is our only relief for whole year. no wonder we start waiting for from the day it ends 😆
i will try to do it fast. my exams will end tomorrow and then will retype and post. i wil meet you there then 😃
hey, no need to say sorry at all. i understand your situation very well. take as much time you want. i also didn't reviewed for UL 😳
i love your reviews very much. so i am dying to see your reviews on that one too. and now hen you have called it your favourite, i am more eager for your your comments 😉

jhaddooo leke us musibat ke piche daudungi me agar aane ki koshish bhi ki he *pout*
haan chuttiya ni hena so kahi ni jaungi is baar
and will just utilize the tym in studies
wow...tum enjoy karo 5 din😆
UL pe karlena arraam se review no worries
story khatam hone wali he wese bhi😆
yes that is my fav then comes this one
will start commenting thr once u update
kyuki wo jb tak ni padhungi mere review confuse na karde tujhe
kyuki shayad mene kuch ni padha he jo delete ho gai thi so...
do din waiting and then u are coming with an update😃😃