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Reception day

Nikhat and Imraan welcome to the guest. All khan family arrived at the hotel. Nikhat met all khan family members. All of them come to give blessings to the newly married couple.


Asad and Zoya started their plan. Dilshad came with Mrs. Briganza to Mumbai. Dilshad Stayed at the hotel.


They will reveal Razia face in front of the whole household. Razia got message from unknown numbers. Get miss calls also. In starting she ignored. "Pehachana Mai Dilshad "she was shocked to see her message from private numbers.


She saw Dilshad came in light. She almost couldn't believe her eyes. How it that possible? She murdered her. She confirmed as well..

"kyu mujhe dekh kar khushi nahi hui" "Dilshad tum"

"Ha mai. Tumne mujhe Marne ki koshish ki the" Razia was scared to death because she didn't even imagine to run across her again. She faced Dilshad smartly

"Tumhe to Maine barso pehale hi mar diya tha. Ab tumhare bachho ki bari hai"


"Mar ne walo se jyada bachane wala bada hotaa hai."


"zainab ko to Maine pehale hi mar diya tha. Gaffur sahab ko jal me phasakar shadi kar li. paisa sab khel dikhata hai Dilshad. I want money anyhow."

" I will kill Asad and Zoya also because your son have 50 */* shares of the khan group of companies. I shifted to my name so..."

"Then you are going jail" mainly0 voice came from behind the lights.

She looked back up at him. And shocked a sad and Zoya stood with the cop.

She was shocked to see them. "You are under arrest." Police inspector told her. The Copes arrested her. "Dilshad told me to pronounce this. The inspector came up to her. "Is it your bracelet?"

She shocked to watch this.

Zoya started to cry. Razia called to DilshaFinally, she didn't have any options other than surrender.

In khan family, everyone came to the terrace. Shocked to see what goes on.


Gaffur was cheated by Razia. He lost his wife and daughter that day.

Razia came up to Gaffur begging for forgiveness.


"Razia tumne jo kiya hai uski wajah se Maine apani zeenat or zoya ko khoya hai. Mai to kya Allah bhi tumhe maaf nahi karega. Le jaye inhe"

"Gaffur sahab mujhe maaf kar dijiye...humaira. tum apane abbu ko samajhao ki..."

Humaira turned her face. She turned away to hide her tears. She couldn't help her mother in her evil deeds.


The Copes took her from there. Zoya tears drop down . Dilshad came up to her. She hugged him tightly. "Thank you Ammi because of you I gave justice to my Ammi."

Both Broke the hug. He gently kissed her forehead. Rashid was happy to see his dear wife. He

Looked at her again. "Dilshad... mai maafi magne ke layak nahi hu.per phir bhi..."

"Aapka koi kasoor nahi hai. kismat mein jo likha hota hai vahi hota hai"

Shirin looked at them. She never expected this. She was the pet of Razia. Unknowing part of Razia evil plan.


Dilshad felt that awkward position, but she handled carefully. She came up to her. "No need to feel differently. I will not be coming in between you and Rashid."

"No Dilshad, it's me who came in between you and Rashid.Can you forgive me. I Know do sautan ek sath nahi reh sakate phir bhi hum kya behano ki tarah Reh sakate hai." she nodded at her both hugged at each other.


At night

Dilshad came to this house. She couldn't say no to her. She met her mother in law. Khan siblings, everyone gave her respect as a family member. After dinner they retired to their room


At study room

Zoya came up to look for him. She found him busy with work on the laptop . She turned to go. Asad stopped her. "Stop Zoya" he closed his laptop and asks her to come. "Anything serious"

"No, I want to say thank you."

"Why?"

"It's me to say thank you. You help me to give justice to Ammi. "

Asad held her both hands.

"Not you Zoya. It's me to say thank you. You gave me my whole family. You completed my family."She looked at him. Their faces inches away from each other. Their breath mingled with each others. Zoya closed her eyes. Asad looked at her lips .Her crimson cheeks told him. His touch affected on her.


Zoya realizes that anything happens. Zoya looked at him. She ran away to her room, closed the door and stood behind it. She felt her heart raced in to speed. "Is it he tries to kiss me?"Her mind was questioning to her heart.


The Same situation here of Asad He lost his control. Yes, he wants to kiss her, but before confessing his love... He was avoiding to go in the room and slept in the study room.


Next day

Zoya opened her eyes. She blushed, remembering last night incident. Going to get ready found one note on the table. "Sorry, I am going to visit the sites. Have a nice day." she gets ready to go office. Whole day she was busy with meetings and completing project files. She missed him terribly, but scared to face him. She got a parcel of Asad name from a court.

She took with her home and decided to give Asad.



At evening


Dilshad knocked her room door. She hugged her when Dilshad entered her room.

"What happened beta?" Dilshad asked her with glowing eyes.expectingay I am so happy, I don't know why? I am flying without wings Ammi. It is such a warm and fuzzy feeling inside my heart, I just can't get enough of it." Zoya clasped her hand with a glee.


Dilshad nodded her head with her childish antics. She can remember how Zoya behaved last two days. She knew the reason. Asad had told her everything what happened at the party. She had decided not to intervene in their relationships. She was holding something in her back.


"I know why you are so happy" Dilshad winked at Zoya.

Zoya gave a shy look to her. Dilshad shrugged her shoulder and smile broadly.


"I love him, Ammi. I knew that for a long time, but could not say it to him." Zoya flung her hands to Dilshad again. Dilshad held her and said "then tell him now, he will be happy." Zoya sighed and said I will try.

"I know, Zoya. This is really not very easy for you. But you know you have to learn to let it go. Asad will wait for you as long time you want, but please also consider one thing too beta. Don't take a long time. It will ruin both of your future" Dilshad explained to her and Zoya nodded.

"Have I told you before that you are the most amazing and coolest Ammi in this world?" Zoya said in a whisper.

"Well, you said it many times. Please next time come with a new line" Dilshad handed the parcel to her and kissed her forehead before leaving her room.

Zoya looked at the parcel which was addressed as Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. She wondered who sent her that parcel. She tore the parcel and found a red color sari with black thread and sequins work that adorned them and drape. There was a note with it.

"Can you please wear? I love to see you in a sari. You looked ethereal that day."

- Asad Ahmed Khan.



To fix her hair like all the time he did. She smiled and blushed for the umpteenth times in that day.

"Ya Allah! Why can't I stop blushing?" She thought again, blushing with the line.

She was again lost in her thought when she heard the knock on her door. This time it was Nuzzat.


"Zoya bhabhi. Bhaijaan has sent the car. He said he will go there directly, driver knows the address."

Zeya's smile faded away listening to this. He was not here to take her by himself. Is his work more important than her? She was thinking some irrational things. Her eyes were stung with tears. She pushed all negative thoughts out of her head this and went out to her room.

Dilshad were waiting in the living room. They gave her their best smiles and admired her. Zoya bid good bye to her and started for hotel.

At hotel

Zoya reached at the hotel. She looked here and there. One handsome boy with well dress up came up to her gave his hand to help her .she looked up. her eyes shining like stars. Broad smile spread on her face. again adored her cheeks. She lowered her eyes with a shy smile.

Asad stood their like a fool gaping at his wife as if he was seeing her for first time. "Ya Allah! She is here really" He could not believe this. He hastily moved to take her to the inside. A table was set for two, with candles and flowers at the center. Dinner was set on slow burners on a side table.

From a distance, his eyes caressed her from head to toe; he couldn't take his eyes off her. She looked ethereal.

Dinner was a quiet affair. Each was thinking that another one will start the conversation. Only their eyes carried out their unsaid conversation grazing each other's face.


After dinner, Zoya was expecting something. Like dance or some arrangement by Asad to express his feelings to her. But she found no music, no arrangements, nothing. She narrowed her eyes waiting for something but Asad ignored her.


He took the car keys from the driver and sent him to his home. Asad climbed on the driver's sit saying her to get in. Zoya huffed in annoyance but could not tell him anything



She gathered all the courage for this date and here he was taking her to the home after a boring dinner. She looked out at the windows; lost in thinking that how she will reprimand him when they will reach home and also gave a lecture how to arrange a romantic dinner. He did not even say anything about her looks today. She wasted hours to look beautiful in his eyes.



" Ummm...Zoya how was the food? It seems you did not enjoy it" Asad asked in an innocent tone.

"It was fantastic infact I never ate such type of Thai food in my life, thank you so much, Mr. Khan" Zoya said in a stern tone.

"Oh! You are welcome. Next time we can go there again" Asad was trying hard not to smile.



They were at the park with the lake but on the other side! She turned to look at him, her breath hitched when her gaze fell upon him leaning against the passenger door of the car, his arms folded in front of his chest. Zoya was struck with how handsome and powerful he looked. After the long day of his work, still wearing that black shirt her favorite one, his jacket was in the car. This was a man whose aura making weak on her knees and Zoya found herself getting lost into the dark pools of his eyes. She gulped down some air, in hopes of calming her hammering heart.


He walked over to her and held out his hand. She looked at it then up at his face before lifting hers and placing it in his. His fingers curled around her hand and he tugged her forward as the two started to walk.


"Where are you taking me?" She asked. he stopped her. Buy two scoop of ice cream. Zoya was happy to see ice cream of butter Scotch. She gave to zoya


"Still remember my choice .he nodded at him. They walked on the sand with bare foot and Still their hands enter wind with each other.

Their silent was broken by sea shore voice. "I like this place. You do for me a lot."


"Ummm...mmm" Zoya started. But stopped as he clasped his hand over her mouth then pointed her gaze to the sky. She looked up incredulously and was surprised. There were thousands of sky lanterns and all are blowing from near the park. She looked from there to her man who was now looking upwards placing his hand around her shoulder with a smile. She saw sky lanterns in the sky before as they were arranged in Christmas times in New York but today it was not the same. The mere presence of a person changed the whole feelings, in this scene, inside her. She again looked at the sky. There were more lanterns now. Some were looking like stars. She was lost in the sight infront of her. She felt Asad shifted himself a little far but she resisted. He looked down to her. She looked up to him nodding her head in a negative.


He tried to make some space but Zoya protested. He looked down to her and lost his last bit of control. He was lost in her beautiful eyes.



"Zoya," he said gently. She peeked up at him from under her lashes and gave him a small yet shy smile.

"You look beautiful," he said. She blushed again but her smile had widened.

"Thank you" She had said. Without thinking what was he doing he leaned on her, captured her lips, just for few seconds and then he realized what he had done. He was withdrawing when he heard Zeya's voice

"I love you, Ashu." He pulled from her and looked at her eyes trying to absorb that was real.


Zoya nodded again and this time she raised her head to meet his lips. He was lost again. Her hand raffled his hair, trying to pull him more closure if possible. They were lost in their own little world. Her hands held onto his muscular arms. His arm was around her waist, pulling her flush against him while his other hand held onto her hair, holding her head in place as their lips were working together.


The two pulled away breathing heavily and Zoya fluttered her eyes open to look at him. He stroked her cheek lovingly and kissed her forehead.


"How lucky I am to have you with me," she told him. Asad smiled at hearing the honesty that laced in her voice.


"I'm the lucky one. I never imagined that anyone would ever love me," he replied to her. He lifted her hand and pressed a kiss on her palm.


"I love you," he breathed. Zoya's heart soared again and a bright smile illuminated her face.


"I'm glad," she whispered. Asad looked at her, he was content and happy. Tonight is the best night of his life. Well this is applied for Zoya too.


Policeman was vessel them because they kissed each other in public place. Asad and Zoya looked at each other surprising. "run Zoya"

"huh" she didn't understand quickly.

"before he will arrest us run" he held her hand ran up to the car. Asad quick open passenger door.zoya settled in cart and he headed to the house.

Both laugh at their teenager antics.


At home

Asad and Zoya entered into the house. It's all dark they assume all slept already. Asad follows Zoya.

"Stop Zoya "Dilshad called her. She stopped, turned her toes and looked at her .Deem light she can see her face. Zoya looked down and her crimson red cheeks gave her answer. She kept her finger on her

"Your red cheeks saying that he confessed his love for you."

She nodded at her both hugged each other.


Zoya entered into the room and Asad faced his back. He was reading something. Zoya came up to him.

Asad scared to read these papers. Zoya realizes that court papers. She took from him and started to read she understands that it was notified of their Nikah.

Its contract marriage date was completed today. She felt like her legs not responding to her body. She started to fall down. Asad held her by the waist.


He took her on the bed. Made her sit on edge of bed . Her tears drop down on her face. He gave her a glass of water. He Sat on his knees.

He he held both heads in his. Stroke his figures in her palm to feel her better. "It's scarcely a notice to remind us and jab Miya biwi Raji to kya Karega court, " she nodded at him and smiled in her tears .She hugged him joyfully. Her world completed in his arm. Both completed each other. Finally Ashu met his angel.


Next day

Asad and Zoya came to the court and cancelled their Talak name



" Then you both don't want divorce"
Both nodded at him as yes. He cancelled that divorce and wish them happy married life.

They walked up to the car. One baby girl
came up to Asad and pulled his pants. He looked down. Beautiful eyes looked at him. He immediately carried her in his arm. Zoya comes up to them.
"How beautiful she is, " she pulled out her chubby chicks. "Exactly like you. "Zoya smiled at him.
She mumbles a few words, but They didn't understand her words.
They gave her water, chocolates. She also enjoyed with them likewise .
Her mother came up to them to look for her. That she was happy to visit her mother. She wriggled in Asad's arm. They passed her over to them. She bids them goodbye.

"I wish we have a baby like this" Asad told her, at least she will catch a clue. "
"Oh, why not, " she answered him smartly.
"It means..." he asked her surprisingly. She nodded at him shyly and looked down He hugged her .
They looked at the great future of their life.


Who will do great work without expecting any pay back. That person is the our angel in our life.

Angels are like diamonds. They can't be made, you have to find them. Each one is unique.

The end


Yes angel completed here .Big thank you to all readers who gives support and love to this narration .This story is very special to me. So give your reviews too .

Thank you
Sum😊


Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for saima aapi, sweet aapi,binnu, nayab,aju shailu,Julie, Gita, rada,simi,ashu,vaishu
abi,asif,mayur ,anupama ,Nona, srushti
khush, Nikki Arpita, sanjhiri, nilu, asif,abi,mayur,jas,ashi,aroo,annie
Gouri, dipti ,shama, aseela, ayat ,fatima and
all readers who following this story 🤗
Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
PM to me when u update next please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its nice please do PM to me when update next please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super - Duper Amazing
Awesome Ending
Mind Blowing FF
One of the best FF I ever read
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay

Res for saima aapi, sweet aapi,binnu, nayab,aju shailu,Julie, Gita, rada,simi,ashu,vaishu
abi,asif,mayur ,anupama ,Nona, srushti
khush, Nikki Arpita, sanjhiri, nilu, asif,abi,mayur,jas,ashi,aroo,annie
Gouri, dipti ,shama, aseela, ayat ,fatima and
all readers who following this story 🤗

Thank You for the RES* Sum..😊
Beautiful update Sum..👏
Atlast Zoya's ammi got the Justice which she deserved...and all is sorted out now..
ASYA scene was amazing..
Loved reading this story...one of your best work..👍🏼
Continue soon with other stories..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow a beautiful ending
Loved it
It felt nice to read this one
Superb ending
Loved asya
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AWESOMEE😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Summu🤗

Awesome amazing superb fantastic... 👏

well very happy that razia got her punishment ..
and sheerin and dilshad mixed up well..

And lastly most beautiful moment of whole story..confession onlake side and there kiss and then they run away coz of police..i loved it..

Sum its not special to u too only but for me too coz of thisi got my one my bff😊..

i will miss this story...plz bring on new one ..waiting eagerly..

love u jaan❤️
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So beautiful
Love it
Love every scene of it
Very brilliant story
Now waiting for your new story
Thanks for writing such a beautiful story
Please pm me when you start new story
Thanks for pm

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