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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

Few hours later , Zoya opened her eyes. She looked at asad first and then realized dilshad was sitting beside her. "How are you feeling Zoya?" Asked dilshad softly with a big smile. "Good Ammi" replied Zoya , she didn't know why did she faint. "Ammi mujhe Kya hua tha?" Asked innocent Zoya. " "Sab asad ki galti hai. You always take so much stress cuz of him" dilshad said angrily. "Ammi." asad called out softly. "Kya hai asad?" Dilshad said angrily. "Nahi Ammi , there's nothing like that" said Zoya. "Yeah yeah nothing like that, I know everything" dilshad said and left the room.

Asad & Zoya looked into each other's eyes & remained silent. " are you fine?" Asked asad softly , he wanted to ask this long before but his EGO. "I don't wanna talk to you." She said little rudely. "Are you fine?" He asked again ignoring her reply at first. "Why do you care mr khan? It doesn't matter if I die or live !"
She screamed. "Shut up Zoya!" He screamed louder than her. She got scared & shivered. "You don't know how much you mean to me! " he said without thinking anything. Zoya was shocked and looked at him. "No I mean how much you mean to Ammi , how can you think about leaving me? " he said again without thinking much. Words came out of his mouth he didn't know what all he was speaking. "I meant Ammi" he said again. "Whatever mr khan" she ignored him. Asad walked towards her with her medicine. "Eat this " he ordered her. He do care for her. He love her obviously he would care for her. He can't even think about leaving without her. Life would be impossible without her. "I don't wanna eat anything" she said , doing drama like small kids. Asad being asad forced her to eat it , he stuffed the medicine in her mouth & have her water to drink.

"You need to take rest , eat your medicines on time , take little stress" He said."I meant don't take any stress" he said. "Oh really mr khan? You are the one who GIVES me stress and you are the one telling me not to take stress " she replied him. " I ain't giving you any stress , you are the one who thinks I have feelings for you but no I don't , I don't even care about you" he replied looking into her eyes. "Acha mr khan, you don't ? That's why you forced me to eat the medicine right? Well , thank you mr khan for being with me " she said with a fake forced smile on her face and she leaves the room. "I told you to res..." Before he could say completely she had already left the room.

Next morning:

"Good morning Zoya" said dilshad happily. " good morning Ammi" replied Zoya with a tensed look. "Kya hua Zoya" asked dilshad , just then asad enters the hall. "Ammi, jeeju air appi phone nahi pick kar rahe hai I feel some thing is wrong" said Zoya sadly. "Don't say like that, everything would be fine" replied dilshad. "Yeah everything would be fine" replied asad coming in between their conversations somehow.

They have their breakfast together, asad leaves for his office and Zoya leaves for shopping her appi's bday which is today. She was worried she knew something was wrong.
It was evening : Zoya didn't come back home. Dilshad was worried very worried. She thought to call asad but she thought he episode be worried if she calls him.

Asad arrives home at 8pm. He came early to see Zoya. I hope she is fine. He thought. As soon as he stepped in , he saw dilshad tensed. "Kya hua Ammi" he asked.
"Asaaad"
"Haaan Ammi?"
"Woh zoya."
"Kya hua usse? Where is she?"

"Pata nahi woh shopping Ke liye gayi thi subah Abhi tak nahi ayi" replied dilshad.
Asad was shocked. He tried his best to find her. He had gone to the shopping mall too to find her. He trie this level best and didn't find her.

Did she leave me? Did I hurt her so much? He thought with tears in her eyes.


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Edited by Afr.in - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Beautiful updt Afreen😊
I loved d start of Asad taking care yet not accepting
Ab Zoya is gayab kahan gayi
Bring her back Asad was crying awe
& yes it was very very short
Kuch errors bhi hain but I ignore that
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awesome chapter.
Asya antics r cute.
OMG! Where has zoya gone?
Plz bring her back.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Hw stubborn asya!
Asad tking cr of zoya so much bt didnt accept it tht he lvs her.
nw whr zoya go?hp she is safe & asad find her.
Asad ki insecurity vagao.
Nice updt.cntinu soon.
Btw,Why why why short short short updt!
Thnks 4 pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Nice part
Loved the way asad n zoya biker with each other..
Oh God where did zoya go?
Hope she is fine n plzz bring her back
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Nice update afreen
Asad cares for zoya but doesn't admit it
Zoya is a drama queen ...
Zoya missing n dillu mom is worried...
Asad cries for zoya
Awww..update long wala plsz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
wonderful. update but too short

I hope Zoya is fine

Pls Asad ko thodi Aval de doo

Uska insecurity ko bbhgaavo

pls update soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
very nice update
asad is not ready to accept,
but took care of her
where is zoya,hope she is fine
please continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Good update
Wat happened to zoya
Y did she faint
Asad refused to accept
He seems worried for her
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
awesome part
asad's concern but again rude behaviour very complex
omg zoya is missing
i hope everything is fine
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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